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PostSubject: lost shadow's characters   lost shadow's characters Icon_minitime8/11/2012, 11:26 pm

Name: kie linx

Age: 14

Gender: male

Eyes: yellowish green

Hair: dark blonde

Height: 5'8

Body Type: skinny

Skin Color: white

God Parent: bastet

Mortal Parent: david linx

Country of Origin: united states

Pets: a cat named shade (grey kitten)

Talents: very flexible and has very good fighting skills with sword and spear very very sneaky has great balance as well has great agility

Weapon**: celestal bronze spear

Flaws: over reacts, gets mood swings, realys on people to much, all ways falls in love easyly,

Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): can talk to cats three times a day(maybe more with practis) after words if stayed in conversation gets horribal head aches and gets really sleepy (maybe 10 or so posts get better with practis as well head aches and sleepyness still happen

Life Before CHB*: His life was hard and simple he went to patton middle school he was trying to get straight b s but he always got d s and c s he was beaten. By other kids after school but when he came home he acted normal there were many things bad but many good some kids liked .Him he was always out and about and when night came he was aways watching the stars he gottin trouble every time but he didn't care his dad almost never mad always calm but he was was never there for him ever when he was at home he never saw Kie almost once a week but kie was keeping his head held high but inside he cryed.Kie spent all day after school just messing around with his friends or just getting distracted 'its sad really how pointless his life seemed everything .Goes wrong for him' he thought he spends his day just walking around doing nothing but when nigh came he watched the stars and climbed things sneak out the days were point less. a few weeks later a drake and cyclopes attacked the house Kie and his friends made i out but his dad..didn't they ran for miles to be sure that the were away Kies friend Blake showed he was his protector thn Kie ended up in camp half-blood(im sorry if its diff for egyption kids but thats all i got)


RP Example*: His friends chased him threw the woods Kie was laughing histaricly he started to climb a tree to get away he got ten feet up then sliped and .Fell he wailed as his foot broke and screamed'help! please .Someone'
when he was found his friends were astounished he was croumpled in a ball screaming but he was on his feet his friends carried him away but they got lost it was .Starting to get dark but eventually they got out but Kies foot was getting worse he keeped screaming 'please make it stop' he cryed .Once they got to kies house they threw him down on the couch he screamed in pain one of his friends noticed his foot was poped out of place one grabed his arms the other pushed it back in place Kie screamed in agony. even after it was over he yelled at his friends like it hurt more then a arm being choped off his friends forgave him but he all ways brought up how much it hurt

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he can talk to his cat hes single and loves to fight will pobly try to sneak out he can use his nails for many things (has sharped nails to be long and strong) and he was claimed whilesleeping on the night of his 13th b-day


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PostSubject: Re: lost shadow's characters   lost shadow's characters Icon_minitime8/11/2012, 11:29 pm

No turning into cats.... And try putting periods in your Life Before CHB and RP Example so that we know where sentences begin and end.

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PostSubject: Re: lost shadow's characters   lost shadow's characters Icon_minitime8/11/2012, 11:38 pm

ok i fixed but you know i worked really ard on that idea.....
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PostSubject: Re: lost shadow's characters   lost shadow's characters Icon_minitime8/11/2012, 11:42 pm

Sorry, but we don't allow shape-shifting.

I suggest you try adding two more sentences to Life Before CHB and check your period placement, since you sort of created odd sentences out of your Life Before CHB....

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PostSubject: Re: lost shadow's characters   lost shadow's characters Icon_minitime8/11/2012, 11:44 pm

ok i will but yo know theres not alot of stuff for bastet kids to find.....
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PostSubject: Re: lost shadow's characters   lost shadow's characters Icon_minitime8/11/2012, 11:56 pm

this is not shape shifting he litaraly grows ears and a tail rapidly and i think its ok he gets the hearing from the ears tail is a tail balance i guess
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PostSubject: Re: lost shadow's characters   lost shadow's characters Icon_minitime8/11/2012, 11:57 pm

Don't double-post.

Also, we don't allow growing cat parts, either.

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PostSubject: Re: lost shadow's characters   lost shadow's characters Icon_minitime8/12/2012, 12:06 am

Also you need to add 2 more sentences to Life Before CHB, it needs to be 5 complete sentences.
With the complete sentences in mind, please read over your life before CHB and RP examples because it looks like you just put in random periods because, where they currently are, make no sense

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PostSubject: Re: lost shadow's characters   lost shadow's characters Icon_minitime8/12/2012, 5:11 pm

No cat "nails".... (I was under the impression, in PMs, that you meant he sharpened his own nails to be like that, not using powers to form them.)

So I suppose his cat is the size of a regular cat? I'm under the impression you're talking about a Toyger.

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EDITED i fixed the tiger and claws
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PostSubject: Re: lost shadow's characters   lost shadow's characters Icon_minitime8/12/2012, 8:05 pm

Could you add commas between each flaw? It is difficult to read without them.

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PostSubject: Re: lost shadow's characters   lost shadow's characters Icon_minitime8/12/2012, 8:07 pm

EDITED AGAIN i put the commas
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PostSubject: Re: lost shadow's characters   lost shadow's characters Icon_minitime8/12/2012, 10:49 pm

So, for the seeing in the dark power, do you mean in pitch black darkness or such?

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PostSubject: Re: lost shadow's characters   lost shadow's characters Icon_minitime8/12/2012, 10:51 pm

no i mean like say your in a very dark house you can see somethngs but with this power itwould be like a lights are on an in a forest like day time
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PostSubject: Re: lost shadow's characters   lost shadow's characters Icon_minitime8/13/2012, 9:53 pm

So essentially, he has a night vision power? I'm reading a few articles on cats' night vision, and one or two so far have said that they can see better in the dark than humans, but not see in total darkness.

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PostSubject: Re: lost shadow's characters   lost shadow's characters Icon_minitime8/13/2012, 9:59 pm

EDITED ill just get rid of that power i think its all fixed hopefully
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Approved.

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PostSubject: charrie number 2!!!!!!!!(edited agian!!!)   lost shadow's characters Icon_minitime9/14/2012, 12:13 am

Name:crow jinx

Age:14

Gender:male

Eyes:ice blue

Hair:black and bed ridden is long it goes over his eyes and stops at his shoulders in the back
Height:5'5

Body Type:slim

Skin Color:pale white

God Parent:mania

Mortal Parent:(unknown)

Country of Origin:america

Pets:he has a small jet black kitten (midnight)

Talents:acrobatic,sneaking,hand to hand combat,knife fighting,

Weapon*celsetial bronze dagger*:

Flaws:has blasts of rage,hard to trust anyone,insane(does this count?),his mood changes quicky

Powers can couse and cure insanity,madness,etc. he can couse insanity 5 times a day and after he gets very bad pain in his hands and gets temparaly depressed and he can cure 2 times a day evrytime he does he gets horribal headaches he it lasts about five posts for the symptoms of insanity is that their normal perception of things is violently distorted for about a quarter of an hour (7-8 psts after practis). It is possible for them to resist depending on the strength of the mental barriers around their minds. His victims usually have vivid hallucinations or become powerless to control their own actions and go berserk and hve paranoia threw it possibly giveing nonsenseicle acusations and he needs to touch them to couse/cure he chooses which it does the worst he could heal would be someone who has hallsanations,attacks randem people if there's a voice in there head yelling at them to kill or etc.

Life Before CHB*:he was droped off at a insane asylum in salem,oregon at the age of 7 but had no memory of anything before the nurses came toward him he got scared and tried to fight lets just say a nurse got a nasty bite mark they tried to ask him things but he keeped acting crazy so they keeped him there and at 9 he took a test it stted he was insane and by the age of ten he was required .Towear a straight jacket he made friends dusk and sydney were his friends dusk became somewhat of a girlfriend and sydney was hisbest friend they talked for hours in the childrens wing of the asylum and then on his 13th birthday he got out of his straight jacket and stabed a .Insane preacher with a spoon he was locked up in a paded room andfell asleep (claimed) and he got out and was put back in his straight jacket and he went back to his normal rutine.
then a year later he started not taking his meds and he head butted a ex insane gangmemeber and they were coming for him so he got out of his straight jacket and sad goodbye to sydney and even kissed dusk and he spent all day and al night sawin threw the bars ofhis window he grabed a pic he had taped to he wall of sydney and dusk and got out and saw a small jet black kitten he grabed it and ran.

RP Example*:he ran for his life laughing hystaricly while the nurses chased him he hoped the fence and ran to the woods he ran threw it into the city he went into a hot topic and beat the hell out of everone in there and .stole some clothes'they will never recougnise me'he said and put his old clothes in his bag and put on black skinny jeans and a bVb shirt and walked out. Slowly and then sprinted as fast as he could deeper into the city 'ive never seen anyting likeit!'he said and his stomach growled he saw a hot dog stand he just took some ones hot dog and they yelled at him and he ran the kitten meowing as its head stuck outof the bag.and the sun begainto set so he sat in a ally way shivering and fell asleep huging hiskitten andin the morning he started runing to where ever the road took him

Any notes about your characters:he was alowed out of his stright jacket in his room and stuff but he was fed by nurses and when he wasent watched outside his room he had it on and he took school in the asylum p.s a thanks to wolf girl for power help)


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what he looks like basicly p.s the reason it sayslady vampire is that was the persons user name who added this to a list of andy sixx pics)


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How long does the insanity last each time he uses it, and can you define how insane the person gets? How can they resist the insanity?

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Does he need to touch the person in order to cause/cure the insanity? Can you define the worst case of insanity he could heal?

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PostSubject: Re: lost shadow's characters   lost shadow's characters Icon_minitime9/16/2012, 2:22 pm

Approved.

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PostSubject: charrie 3 (nREADY PLZ AppROVE)   lost shadow's characters Icon_minitime10/9/2012, 12:49 am

Name:deos izzik
Age:15

Gender:male
Eyes:purple

Hair:white

Height:5'8

Body Type:slim.

Skin Color:pale white

Roman God Parent timor

Mortal Parent: izzy izik

Country of Origin:united states
Talents:archery ,sneaking ,acrobatics
Weapon*bow and arrow with emperial gold tips(I
think that's what romans have I forgot..)
Flaws:emotional,is clingy and jealous
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):he can sense peoples fear and make there fear appear for 4 posts and he can do it 3 times a day. (5mins in rp time)
(He must wait half a hour to do it again (8 posts and the things that appear are illusions)
Life Before CJ*:deos was well creepy everyone avoided him he had absolutly no friends but he always tried to have fun.With life if it was scaring people or just watching t.v but he always intertained him self. But soon his mom started drinking and she came home and beat him he would always havw bruises and one night she got so drunk she grabed a knife and started cutting him so he .Planed to get away so he got his stuff and was ready to leave when his mom came home she saw what he was tring to do .And she. Started beating him but this time he hit back he knocked her out and ran.

RP Example*:deos snuck threw the halls of his school he snuck out of the back door and threw down his backpack and started to dig threw it he brought out a litghter and some lighter fluid he threw the bottle of fluid on the bottom of the wall and it splattered .He lit it on fire and watched as the school started to burn he ran. As fast as he could to his house and he stayed there watching the news abd saw the school on fire he smiled .And started packing all his stuff and waited for night fall.And he snuck out and ran away sneaking around intell he got a few towns over.
Any notes about your characters:can sens when people are scared and was claimed when he was alone in a cave on his thirteenth birthday his safe place
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PostSubject: Re: lost shadow's characters   lost shadow's characters Icon_minitime10/12/2012, 3:17 pm

Imperial Gold is for Romans.

How long does he have to wait between showing people their fears? How long would the fear last in RP time (ie: thirty seconds)?

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