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My First Character

Post by Plaidman on 9/19/2012, 3:07 pm

Name: Sophia MacLaren
Age: 12
Gender: Female
Eyes: Blue
Hair: Black
Height: 5"5
Body Type: Lithe
Skin Color: Pale
God Parent: Phobos
Mortal Parent: Alice MacLaren
Country of Origin: USA
Pets: None
Talents: good fighter
Weapon**: magical bow and celestical bronze knife
Flaws: Jelousy, arrogance, stupidity, impulsiveness
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): She can see other peoples fears (Once a day)
Life Before CHB*: Lived in LA. Went to Blue Flats Middle School. She ran away from her Mother. Attacked by a 'Popular girl'. She doesn't know it but her mom commited suicide.
RP Example*: "The arrow sailed through the air and planted itself right in the monsters eye. It yelped in surprise. I took this as an opportunity to jump onto the creatures back. I scrambled to its neck and then it started buck. I held on to its fur tightly until I got an idea to kill it, on a hunch I drew my knife, and being careful not to stab myself. I looked down; everyone else was trying to hack off its paws. I took a deep breath and stabbed it."
Any notes about your characters: Doesn't know where her mom is and doesn't really care.


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Re: My First Character

Post by Kristal Meth on 9/19/2012, 3:14 pm

Are your weapons CB?
Add another flaw
Explain your power more. How she can see peoples fears, how many times a day
Life before CHB needs to be 5 sentences
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Re: My First Character

Post by -Chris- on 9/19/2012, 5:16 pm

The Life Before CHB are more like Fragments so....
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Re: My First Character

Post by Kendall on 9/20/2012, 6:25 pm

Put your Life Before CHB into complete sentences.

Can you describe how her bow is magical?
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