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PostSubject: Brody   Brody Icon_minitime11/30/2012, 8:37 pm

Brody 6141

Name:
Brody ????

Age:
17

B-day:
Dec 12, 1935

Gender:
Male

Eyes:
Big and blue

Hair:
Scruffy and Blonde

Height:
6' 6"

Body Type:
Skinny, frail...

Skin Color:
Pale, almost ghostly

God Parent:
Hephaestus

Mortal Parent:
????

Country of Origin:
????

Pets:
None

Talents:
He's an amazing mechanic/builder. Brody is exceptionally talented in music and drawing. He also has a photographic memory.

Weapon:
CB hook swords like Jet from Avatar.

Flaws:
Has hallucinations all the time, especially when his heart rate is up. Always takes stuff people say (Even compliments) the wrong way. He also has no clue about the customs and the way modern children act. He also suffers from PTSD (Post-Traumatic Stress Disorder) and NPD (Narcissistic Personality Disorder). Brody also has many scars left from his life before camp, which limits his movement in many ways. *Gasp* Okay, that's it.

Powers:
Brody can manipulate metal just like Toph from Avatar, but not nearly as much at once. Probably like, piano-sized at most. He can do this once per day, and the level of tiredness would be if, like, he just sprinted a full lap on a middle-school-sized running track. He can rip out and control metal, but only by touching it, and also transfer the controlling energy. (Like, if he was touching a long metal pole at the bottom, he could make the top bend a little.)

Life Before CHB:

At age 5, Brody's home was invaded by terrorists, and Brody was sent to a secret, underground testing lab, part of the deep science division of the Nazis. There, he was subject to many horrifying tests. The scientists made sure the lab was void of color because they thought it affected the results. There were 58 other children in the lab (And they were all demigods, but nobody knew), and by the time Brody was 14, all but 4 (Including him) of the original group had died due to the tests. By now, WWII was over, but the underground lab still existed. Soon, a cyclopes attacked the lab, taking Brody and the rest of the remaining originals. They took him back to their cave to eat them, but they were saved by a satyr, who smuggled them out when they weren't looking. He offered to take them to CHB, and they started the adventure. Unfortunately, the Satyr died a few days later from hypothermia. Brody and his friends kept on going, but were now fugitives from the Nazis. At age 17, Brody arrived at Las Vegas, and the rest of the group had died. He eventually arrived at the Lotus Casino. Of course, never having seen color before, he fainted for a week in Lotus time, but in reality he was gone until 1988. A day after he came to, he fainted... Again. When he came to, it was now 2012. Brody, thinking he'd been asleep for years, immediately knew there was something wrong. So, he escaped, and with the help of another satyr, made it to Camp Half-Blood...

RP Example:

My skin still burning from it's first touch of sunlight ever, I limped around this "camp". As I stoked the smooth wood of one of the big shelters, I asked my Satyr "What's that?" "Why, it's the Artemis Cabin." Oh. Cabin. I sat down at one of the benches, not looking down at the ground because, of course, I couldn't bend over. I looked over at the Satyr to ask him a question, but he didn't answer. He just sat in shock, pointing above my head in awe. "What?" I said, looking up. It was just a floating hammer, but it was see-through, like a holograph. "You- you- you- Hephaestus..." The Satyr muttered. Then, Chiron appeared. "Please, forgive him." He said. "What he means is that that, that above your head, is the symbol of Hephaestus, god of metal, blacksmiths, and anything related to that. It also means... That Hephaestus is your godly parent." "Wha- what's a parent?" I replied. Growing up where I did, I didn't know any of this stuff. "I suspected you wouldn't know. Let's just get to the point, and we'll quibble on about all that you missed on a later date. Follow me." Following Chiron to wherever he was going, I noticed he was completely and utterly silent. It almost felt like I was in big trouble, and I was to be punished. But what punishment could possibly be worse than spending 15 years as a lab rat full of abusing, horrible scientists in a secret underground chemical testing laboratory? Yeah, I think that's petty hard to beat. When Chiron stopped, I looked at the metal cabin. "This," Chiron said "Is your new home." I walked up the steps, and touched the hard, cold metal that made up the cabin. Immediately, horrifying images of the lab flashed before my eyes, followed by a five-second hallucination of me back in the lab, strapped to a wall, completely immobilized, staring in fear at a scientist in a white lab coat, with his back turned to me. He then turned around with a massive, 2-foot long needle, attaching some black, gooey liquid in a glass container to it, a wicked, horrifying smile on his face. He walked up and pressed the needle against my torso, right in between my 3rd and 4th ribs from the bottom. "Fun time..." He said... And pushed. At that moment, I immediately returned to the real world, wriggling on the the ground, clenching exactly where the shot had gone in the hallucination. But there was no pain. No insane scientist. No lab. Just Me, Chiron, and a place even stranger than the lab. "Chiron... I can't stay here." I panted. It just brought back too many painful memories...

Any notes about your characters:
Brody also never knew his own age until the Satyr that had rescued him told him.




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PostSubject: Re: Brody   Brody Icon_minitime12/1/2012, 1:38 pm

You have five characters in your signature. Do you have an empty slot?

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PostSubject: Re: Brody   Brody Icon_minitime12/1/2012, 2:48 pm

This is just for when I decide who i'm gonna kill off next.
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PostSubject: Re: Brody   Brody Icon_minitime12/1/2012, 3:50 pm

If he's thirty-five, then why would his birthday be 1995?

It would be like. 1977.

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I thought I changed that...
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PostSubject: Re: Brody   Brody Icon_minitime12/1/2012, 4:22 pm

It says 1995.
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PostSubject: Re: Brody   Brody Icon_minitime12/1/2012, 6:09 pm

Yeah I just changed it thanks for telling me!
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PostSubject: Re: Brody   Brody Icon_minitime12/1/2012, 10:41 pm

Okay. No. Genetically-altered characters are completely outlandish. That kind of technology doesn't exist.

Not to mention your powers are too powerful.

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PostSubject: Re: Brody   Brody Icon_minitime12/1/2012, 10:46 pm

While I admire the amount of thought put into it, I must say no to both the powers and Life before CHB.

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PostSubject: Re: Brody   Brody Icon_minitime12/2/2012, 8:45 am

Frizzled frazzled, fackled fishcrackers. May take me a while to edit all that, but did you just want me to delete the impossible parts of his life in the lab, or completely start over with it? Basically, everything he does is affected somehow by his life in the lab. So can I keep him as like, a lab rat but take out the impossible stuff like genetic engineering and mind control?
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Try revising it, then we'll work from there.

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PostSubject: Re: Brody   Brody Icon_minitime12/11/2012, 5:37 pm

Okay. Edited.
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PostSubject: Re: Brody   Brody Icon_minitime12/11/2012, 5:51 pm

I don't like the slow aging thing. You've essentially made him Immortal.

I don't think Children of Hephaestus can control metal.

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PostSubject: Re: Brody   Brody Icon_minitime12/11/2012, 5:52 pm

He was at that Lotus place...

Hephaestus is the God of many things, and I think metal is one of them...
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