Pottersocks Character #1

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Pottersocks Character #1

Post by pottersocks on 1/26/2013, 11:12 am

Name: Electra Black
Age: 12
Gender: Female
Eyes: Electric
Hair: Red
Height: 5ft and 1in
Body Type: athletic, pettite
Skin Color: extremely fair with freckles
God Parent:Hermes :lol!:
Mortal Parent: Jennette Black
Country of Origin: United States, Illinos, Chicago
Pets: Hellhound named Dakota
Talents: Picks locks easily, great sense of humor
Weapon**: Cestial Bronze Sword, and a silver daggar
Flaws: Dyslexia, ADHD, can be Bilpolar
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): can esaily pick locks, good at stealing, has the capability to talk to snakes like Martha and George
Life Before CHB*: Electra Black would always get into trouble, mostly because her mom wouldnt notice her- she was too busy being a model for Cover Girl, etc. Electra tried to run away numerous of times, but always failed. one day, her mother just didnt talk to her, or have time for her, because she was done with a shoot for the week, but was with her boyfriend, Jack. her Aunt Donna was suppose to take care of her, but she was too busy worring about her son, Dillon, who was at Camp Jupiter, but only Donna and Jennete knew he was a demigod, like Electra.

RP Example*: as i slid down the Climbing Wall, i relised that someone was watching me. so, i took out my Cestial Bronze sword, and yelled, "whoes there?" to my suprise, out of the forest comes hellhound, wagging its tail like a maniac.
Any notes about your characters: Electra has a Roman demigod cosin, Dillon.

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Re: Pottersocks Character #1

Post by Arik on 1/26/2013, 6:07 pm

Dyslexia and ADHD are basic flaws for every demigod so they can't count towards your three. Please add two more flaws.
Easily picking locks and good at stealing are talents; not powers.
She cannot talk to snakes, sorry.
Children of Hermes often don't have powers, so it's okay if you don't put one down.
Add about three more sentences to your RP example.
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