Ansinen, son of Hephaestus

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Ansinen, son of Hephaestus

Post by Redzero on 2/2/2013, 2:16 am

Name:Ansinen
Age:14
Gender:Male
Eyes:Left brown, right black. Usually wears a red contact over his brown eye.
Hair:White, somewhat shaggy.
Height:5"2
Body Type:Childish (Small and frail.)
Skin Color:Caucasian
God Parent:Hephaestus
Mortal Parent:Unknown
Country of Origin:America
Pets:None
Talents: Can scavenge metals and create fire using few raw materials. Highly trained at a forge, he can help maintain equipment and temporarily upgrade it.
Weapon**: Giant Celestial Bronze hammer, about his own size in length. The head if it is about half of his size.
Flaws: Because he is small, he is very weak against attacks. Although his weapon is huge, it's best for taking down walls and things, not monsters or people.
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): Can use any fire as a forge, even camp fires, but only once every 6 hours. Doesn't always do this though, because the skill is seldom needed.
Life Before CHB*:His presence was known as soon as he was born, and because of this, his mother died protecting him. A man working at a forge, however, found him and brought him home. By the age of 4, he had to accompany his adoptive father to his work, and the man's master found that Ansinen had a great talent for forging things. In his town, he was renowned for the precision of his repairs. He would repair almost anything for the people around him: Knives, equipment, toys... Because of the great talent the forge master saw, he was trained in the art of forging the rest of his life, until he was discovered by a camper who snuck out for some fun...
RP Example: Ansinen: I...! Hold on, don't go away! I'm not totally useless, you know. So... What exactly are you doing here? Wait, hold on... So I'm stuck in a forum!? No way! You're joking. Are you saying I'm just a figment of some guy's imagination? Ah... Hahaha! Ansinen bursts out in exaggerated laughter. So... Where are we going to, anyway? Should I bring my hammer? Oh, but don't expect me to fight; I'm more of a supporting kind of guy. But... If anythings in the way, I can probably make a path for you. Or, maybe you need your weapons repaired? Please, don't underestimate me, I'm not as useless as you might think! I swear it!
Any notes about your characters: He's a nice boy with a bubbly personality. He is insulted easily, but is confident in his skills. If he says he'll do something, he'll work as hard as he can until it is done. He loves helping others, and will always get back up when he's knocked down. Physically, or mentally! Unless his hammer pinned him down again...


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Re: Ansinen, son of Hephaestus

Post by nix on 2/3/2013, 1:42 pm

If his eyes are naturally red, then it's a no. It has to be contact lenses. How is a body type childish? Do you mean scrawny? Not that big of a hammer, sorry. Make it smaller. How many times a day can he do that power? How long? Five sentences for Life before CHB.
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Post by Redzero on 2/4/2013, 7:40 pm

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Re: Ansinen, son of Hephaestus

Post by Jordan on 2/6/2013, 4:06 pm

If he's small and frail there would be no possible way for him to wield a hammer that is the same size as him. And if the head of the hammer is half his size that would make it EXTREMELY unbalanced and heavy. Make the weapon more realistic.
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Post by Redzero on 2/9/2013, 12:47 am

What are you talking about? I'll have to argue there... I aint' the strongest guy in the world, but I constantly carry things that people think I shouldn't be able to carry. It's just one of those things. Besides, he doesn't use it for fighting. He uses it for breaking objects down. Also, it's not like he carries it from its end. He usually carries it like a sledge hammer, making it completely possible. I don't think it's unrealistic at all.
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Post by Jordan on 2/9/2013, 7:22 am

It's an unrealistic weapon. Change it.
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Post by Redzero on 2/9/2013, 10:23 pm

Just scrap it then. I can't have his weapon be too weak, even if it isn't as realistic as a pen that turns into a sword, the ability to make a giant bubble appear in the middle of the ocean, or a single human being able to bear the weight of the sky even for a couple of moments.
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Re: Ansinen, son of Hephaestus

Post by Jordan on 2/10/2013, 3:42 pm

Don't argue with me. I could just delete this form if you'd like, and deny you any new characters.
Or you could work with me, and lose the attitude, and get your character approved. Your choice.
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