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PostSubject: blessed   blessed Icon_minitime4/30/2013, 9:47 pm

idk sometimes i write depressing poetry and i have nowhere to put it so i'm just gonna dump it all on here if that's cool with you guys?

so idk what to call this but yeah i had a headache last night and i was feeling really emotional there was a lot of pining and then this happened. if anyone has a suggestion for a title, i'd really appreciate that.


i've got headaches that don't go away
and the back of my eyes
sometimes feel like
they're going to
fall out
and as you breath the last
of the air from my lungs
i wish i could have known
the rhythm of your heartbeat
as you slept
and dreamed of rainstorms
in the summer

i'll post more as i write more. feedback would be appreciated i need it for science.

also u
have just learned that if
u hit enter
enough
anything looks
like poetry.

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PostSubject: Re: blessed   blessed Icon_minitime5/1/2013, 3:47 am

sorry.


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PostSubject: Re: blessed   blessed Icon_minitime5/1/2013, 10:26 am

I like it, Fishy. It gives me the right feelings that I think you were going for. :3 Keep it up, okay? <3
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PostSubject: Re: blessed   blessed Icon_minitime5/1/2013, 10:46 am

Shazam, this was Lila's topic you just crashed.

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PostSubject: Re: blessed   blessed Icon_minitime5/1/2013, 4:12 pm

I absolutely suck at poetry but this is good.
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PostSubject: Re: blessed   blessed Icon_minitime5/1/2013, 6:29 pm

Nice c:
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PostSubject: Re: blessed   blessed Icon_minitime5/2/2013, 8:25 am

Very nice!
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PostSubject: Re: blessed   blessed Icon_minitime6/4/2013, 4:49 pm

so apparently i only write stuff when i'm sad sorry.

you said that you wanted to learn
to live in the moments
between my heartbeats
and build a house in the places where
my bones meet.
but what i don't think
you understand
is that everything i touch
turns to dust
and i'd rather not touch you at all
than have you turn
to dust.

again, feedback would be appreciated. but just reading it would also be cool.

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PostSubject: Re: blessed   blessed Icon_minitime6/17/2013, 12:06 am

holy smokes i think i mightve just teared up a little. you have a way with words keep it up
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PostSubject: Re: blessed   blessed Icon_minitime1/2/2014, 9:09 pm

i wrote a thing a while ago but never put it up, so

you gave your heart to the water
(rivers
and lakes
and streams
and oceans
and ponds)
so you could get some of it back
when it rained.
you gave your soul to the air
(sold it for beauty
and grace)
so you would get it back
with each inhale.
(what you forgot is that
you lose
more
and more
with each exhale)
one day,
when you are old
and grey
and no longer breathing
your children will give you to the earth
and you will never get yourself back.

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PostSubject: Re: blessed   blessed Icon_minitime3/12/2014, 8:38 pm

i used to wonder why
you were supposed to kiss
under the mistletoe
when it is a parasite.

then i fell in love
with you

today we talked about parasitic plants in biology and then i started feeling things

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PostSubject: Re: blessed   blessed Icon_minitime3/13/2014, 11:53 am

Oh my gosh bravo this is great
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PostSubject: Re: blessed   blessed Icon_minitime3/13/2014, 4:25 pm

"accomplishments"
1. i donít worry about emailing teachers anymore. i used to spend hours going over the email to make sure it was okay, checking and rechecking for errors, finger hovering over the mouse pad, mouse hovering over the tiny box with the word 'send' on it. i donít do that anymore.
2. i donít apologize when i ask questions anymore. i have a right to know things. i know that now.
3. i wore a skirt for the first time in five years this monday. it was short and had flowers and i felt beautiful.
4. iím not in love with someone who isnít in love with me anymore. iím still hurt by what happened. i donít know when i wonít be. but iím not in love with someone who isnít in love with me.
5. iíve felt like breathing every day this week.

just a list of minor and unimportant accomplishments, but they matter to me anyway.

and thank you so much fro! i'm so glad you liked it!

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PostSubject: Re: blessed   blessed Icon_minitime5/22/2015, 9:10 am

the woman looks at me and i look back.
i donít know where i am. i donít care.
sheís surely the queen -
no, the goddess of the jungle.
who needs the lion when thereís the lioness?
she canít be real.
iím almost certain iím not.

the city around me fades.
my limbs are paralyzed as she stares into me, through me.
a bomb could go off and i wouldnít notice,
not with the way sheís staring at me,
this ethereal queen, draped in gold fabric
and drowned in the blue light of the streetlights.

i am blessed, i am blessed, i am blessed.

smoke pours out of her mouth, restless snakes,
before settling into a hazy veil
separating Ďherí from Ďusí,
and i can see through.

i am blessed, i am blessed, i am blessed,
but i want more, i want it all,
i want everything you have.

i couldnít tell you how long i stayed there,
trapped in our little infinity,
the lion queen and i.

a car truck drove past, obscuring my view;
i was snapped out of my trance.
a baby wailed, a dog barked,
and the woman was gone.




CASUALLY POSTS POEM I HAD TO WRITE FOR ENGLISH CLASS. there were a bunch of lame requirements i had to meet so i had to change it †a bit from what i had wanted it to be & im too lazy to rewrite it so it's actually how i want it to be but hEY IT'S WHATEVER (it's also a tiny bit inspired by my FAVORITE COMIC OF ALL TIME, the wicked and the divine, which you should TOTALLY 100% BUY & READ bc it's GREAT)

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PostSubject: Re: blessed   blessed Icon_minitime11/5/2016, 3:54 pm

lol hi im coping with debilitating anxiety nd loneliness nd have taken 2 heavily romanticizing my sadness have a poem i wrote while me nd my agonizing pain sat down at a romantic candlelit dinner w/ a bouquet of roses. we ate lobster thermidor nd champagne nd for dessert we had golden opulence sundaes nd ice wine

i. wretch says
the stars donít care,
the stars are cruel.
it doesnít matter how much you love the moon or the sun or the endless reaches of the void.
you will love them and they will destroy you and that is how it always has been and always will be for you will ache and you will beg and that is the order of the universe,
that is her decree,
and youíll scream to the world that youíre okay with this as you dry heave your pain to the dirt.


ii. abomination says
screw the stars if they donít care screw the moon and the sun and the endless reaches of the void iíll destroy them first iíll rip out their teeth iíll raze cities and they will tremble as i mold their bones into my throne for the world is cruel but i am crueler and i will come out on top i will burn i will burn i will burn


iii. mourn says
the stars are too much,
and
space is too big,
and
i am so small
so aware
so painfully alone
in this world where we live.
i will not love
the moon or the sun or the endless reaches of the void.
iím scared
they will hurt me
i donít want
my dress to be stained
with blood or tears or hurt


iv. sleepyhead says
the stars are beautiful.
i do not care if they donít love me
for i do not love to be loved in return.
i love because i am full of it
and the moon, the sun, the endless reaches of the void,
they are deserving for they are
and all things that are deserve compassion.
the world may be cruel and uncaring
but i will love and i will glow soft and maybe iíll make a difference

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PostSubject: Re: blessed   blessed Icon_minitime11/15/2016, 2:40 am

bab i'm sorry you're feeling so crap but they say artists suffer & you, mate, are an artist
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