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Post by redblader on 11/17/2013, 8:49 am

Name: David Hammer
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Eyes: Brown
Hair: Black
Height: 6 foot 7in.
Body Type: A
Skin Color: Yellow/Brown
God Parent: Hephaestus
Mortal Parent: Jenna Hammer
Country of Origin: America
Pets: Baby Dragon
Talents: Building, shaping, designing
Weapon**: Two Celestial Bronze Swords and a hammer
Personality: Funny and easygoing
Flaws: Gets very nervous when with girls and before a fight
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): Ability to e fire proof and summon fire at will
Life Before CHB*: 11th grade in New York. Mom ran auto shop. No accidents with monsters.

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Re: Redblader's Character

Post by Kendall on 11/17/2013, 10:00 am

Body Type is lean, muscular, etc; I think you mixed that up with blood type.

No baby dragons.

Personality must be at least two lines long.

Add two more flaws.

How many times a day can he control fire, and for how long each time? What's the most powerful thing he can do with it? How hot is the fire at most? Can he withstand any amount of fire?

Life Before CHB must be at least 5 sentences long; you'll also need to tell us how he got to camp.

You're missing RP Example, which is like writing five sentences from your character's point of view.
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Post by redblader on 11/17/2013, 5:45 pm

Thx

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Post by Kendall on 11/17/2013, 6:28 pm

You should probably edit the form, now.... (The edit button is in the top right hand corner of your post.)
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