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Mike Heffely-Apollo

Post by mehularora on 6/4/2014, 4:01 am



Name: Mike Heffely

Age: 11

Gender: Male

Eyes: Green

Hair: Brownish Black

Height: 5'2"

Body Type: Medium

Skin Color: Bright Peach

God Parent: Apollo

Mortal Parent: Jane Heffely

Country of Origin: India

Talents: Playing music,Swimming

Skills: Good at Logic,Sword fighting

Weapon: A Celestial Bronze sword that transforms into a flute by pressing a button and transforms back by playing a certain tune


Personality: John has a generally fun loving personality and has a good sense of humor. He enjoys music and hanging out with his friends. Some of his most prominent traits are courage and logicalness

Flaws: Has a bad habit of being lazy,a little addicted  to junk food, has a little Asthma

Powers: can superheat a weapon during daytime  .Cool down time:15 mins

Life Before CHB: Mike  had a as normal as possible for a Half-Blood. He spent his days studying  music and playing out there and getting in trouble at school. He once found a flute lying outside his house,which later turned to be a weapon. Shortly after his thirteenth birthday, his mother took him to a beach where they met  a satyr. He took Mike to Camp-Half Blood.

RP Example: I was practicing to play my flute as I was not able to sleep.Suddenly,someone knocked the door of our camp.It was  a satyr.He said me to come to Camp Half Blood.I didn't knew what was Camp Half Blood so I refused him,saying,"Camp?I don't know any...."Then it hit me.Camp.Camp half-blood.I had heard about it.Yes,it was true.I WERE a demigod.

Any notes about my character: Best friends are Jason Grace and Percy Jackson


Last edited by mehularora on 10/4/2014, 5:34 am; edited 11 times in total (Reason for editing : correction of my character form)
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Re: Mike Heffely-Apollo

Post by jake. on 6/4/2014, 7:37 am

1. Doesn't everyone get a cold once in a while, especially in winter? I don't quite understand. It's not a flaw, its natural.

2. What exactly do you mean by the power? You also need to add limits and cooldown time, please. :)

3. You need atleast 5 sentences for the Life Before CHB.

4. Where's the RP example?

Edit those things in, and we'll see. ;D
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Re: Mike Heffely-Apollo

Post by mehularora on 6/7/2014, 4:07 am

How do we Edit
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Re: Mike Heffely-Apollo

Post by mehularora on 6/7/2014, 4:09 am

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Re: Mike Heffely-Apollo

Post by mehularora on 6/7/2014, 4:09 am

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Re: Mike Heffely-Apollo

Post by jake. on 6/7/2014, 4:17 am

Don't triple post!
Click the edit button on the top right corner of your post.
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Re: Mike Heffely-Apollo

Post by mehularora on 6/7/2014, 6:39 am

Sorry by mistake it was triple posted
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Re: Mike Heffely-Apollo

Post by Steve Rogers on 6/7/2014, 10:58 am

Please add in the RP example. It needs to be at least five sentences. If you're confused about the RP example, I'll explain:

The RP example is just an example of your role-playing and writing style. It could be in first person, or third person, but it has to be from your character's point of view.
EXAMPLES:

First Person
"I walked into the armory and scanned the area for a new sword seeing as my old sword was eaten by a monster. I found a solid looking short sword and picked it up, but the weight distribution was off. Sighing, I put the sword down and continued my search."

Third Person
Amber Lee walked across the sandy shores of the beach, wearing a colorfully stripped swimming suit, and a bright red towel wrapped around her midsection. Squealing, she dropped the towel in the sand and ran into the water, where her friends Westley and Kat were waiting for her. Despite being Hestia's daughter, she was very fond of the water."
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Re: Mike Heffely-Apollo

Post by mehularora on 6/9/2014, 6:17 am

Thanks for the explanation.Everything edited Wink Very happy 
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Re: Mike Heffely-Apollo

Post by Morgan Landry on 6/9/2014, 6:44 am

How come he never gets tired?
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Re: Mike Heffely-Apollo

Post by mehularora on 6/11/2014, 6:50 am

Ok,Changed
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Re: Mike Heffely-Apollo

Post by Steve Rogers on 6/13/2014, 3:12 pm

That power has nothing to do with Apollo. Please remove it.
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Re: Mike Heffely-Apollo

Post by mehularora on 7/9/2014, 8:35 am

Thanks for telling mistakes!
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Re: Mike Heffely-Apollo

Post by moriarty on 7/10/2014, 7:49 pm

What's his skin color? I can tell from the picture, but please specify in the form.

How does he "obtain energy from the sun"?

Who was/is Mr. Armaan?

He can't have links to canon characters before Camp. Sorry.
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Re: Mike Heffely-Apollo

Post by mehularora on 10/4/2014, 5:35 am

All changes done Very happy Smile Surprised Cool
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Re: Mike Heffely-Apollo

Post by Kendall on 10/9/2014, 9:41 pm

Add some more to the personality.

How long is his sword?

What would a "little asthma" mean?

What do you mean by superheating a weapon? How hot does it get (in degrees Celsius/Fahrenheit please) and how many times a day can he do this?

Why was his flute-sword at his house -- did somebody leave it there for him? If so, who?

You can't say his best friends are Jason Grace and Percy Jackson, sorry. You'd need to actually RP with the people who have them as characters to say that.
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