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Dominique - Hecate

Post by WeirdWarrior on 9/30/2014, 8:48 pm

Name: Dominique Mazers
Age: 14
Gender: Female
Eye: Hazel brown
Hair: Crazy blonde curls
Height: 5'2
Body type: Small and thin
Skin color: Really light brown
God Parent: Hecate
Mortal parent: Chris Mazers
Country of Origin: ??
Pets: A Pegasus named Sorces
Talents: sword fighting and Pegasus riding and art
Weapons: A bow made of elm wood and an iron dagger called, Tresnu
Personality: Hard to deal with sometimes, quite kind, sarcastic
Flaws: Climbing, chariot riding, heights
Powers: Sorcery in healing and defense
Life Before Camp: I grew up with my dad in Manhattan where we lived in a mansion because he is a famous artist. He loved taking me to art galleries and reading me fantasy stories. Greek Mythology was a huge part of my childhood because my dad' s most famous painting is of Athena. I didn't have many friends at school when I was younger. People made fun of me for always being kicked out of schools so when I turned 11 my dad sent me off to boarding school. After getting sent back twice he gave up and homeschooled me.

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Re: Dominique - Hecate

Post by mabel pines on 9/30/2014, 9:55 pm

hiya there!
there are a couple changes you need to make to your form before we can approve it!
  • could you fill out country of origin? that's just the country she was born in

  • mythological pets aren't allowed, so i'm going to have to say no to the pegasus. however, you can always rp her having a close bond to one of the camp pegasi of the same name!

  • personality needs to be at least two lines long

  • could you be a bit more specific on her flaws? what about those things make them her flaws? right now it just looks like a list of some unrelated things

  • healing isn't allowed as a power for children of hecate

  • you're going to have to be more specific on what you mean by "sorcery in defense". what exactly can she do with the magic? how many times per day can she do it? how tired does it make her? how long must she wait before usages?

  • how did she arrive at camp?

  • please include an rp sample! that's basically just like writing a story. so, something along the lines of, "i kicked the ball," only a bit longer and preferably with a bit more detail as it's got to be five sentences long.
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Post by Morgan Landry on 10/1/2014, 2:55 am

Just a little note>> You need 5 sentences for the Life Before Camp, not the RP example.
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Post by mabel pines on 10/1/2014, 6:04 am

on the form there's a * after rp sample, & the * means that you need at least five sentences
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Post by Morgan Landry on 10/1/2014, 6:58 am

That's really weird though because a lot of forms are approved with less than four sentences for the RP example oO including my last two.
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