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Olivia Gaddlow



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Registration date : 2014-11-26

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PostSubject: Me:   Me: Icon_minitime11/26/2014, 11:09 am

Name: Olivia Harley Gaddow
Gender: I am Female
Mortal Parent: Stephanie Gaddow
God Parent:Hephaestus
Date of Birth: August Twenty-First, Two Thousand
Place of Birth: A hospital in Michigan, Upper Peninsula
Hometown/Last Residence: Hometown- Brooklyn, Michigan Last Residence- Somewhere north of Omaha, Nebraska
Race/Ethnicity: I am American, but I speak fluent Gaelic (Irish), because that is where my parents used to live, but before that, they were in Italy
Accent: Slight Irish Accent
Skin Tone: Medium Tan
Eye Color: Bluish-Gray, With flecks of gold
Hair Color: Light Brown with neon pink highlights
Hair Length: ten inches long
Height: Five foot Three
Weight: ninety-five pounds
Body Type: Skinny, Tall Torso, Muscled(Not that muscled, though...)
Appearance: Cute. Very Very Cute.( I look smart too........ )
Weapon: With mist: Pack of mints Without mist: Still a pack of mints, but that has a mechanism that makes me be able to fit whatever I need to, so I just hide my sword in there.(And my breath can still smell good)
Armor: Imperial gold/ Celestial bronze chest plate, helmet, and greaves, but I have leather boots. (Easier to run in)
Pet(s): I do not own a pet, a pet is too much work
Skills/Talents: I am really smart, as for I am a straight A student in all classes. I am on the track team, so I am a good runner. I am brave, and I am also very funny. I am AMAZING at building and blueprinting, and I am EXTREMELY creative
Flaws: I am too willing to save my family and friends, I love shiny things, If there is water by I can't NOT go swimming, and I am absolutely, POSITIVELY, afraid of SPIDERS!!!!!! EEK!!!! I am not afraid of fire, though.
Strengths: I can build mechanisms that can fight off monsters, (And Make Smoothies At The Same Time!!!)
Weaknesses: Spiders. And Shiny Things.
Likes: Machines, Ice Creams, And Nectar.
Dislikes: Spiders, The Hermes Express, or Onions.(Bleh)
Fears: SPIDERS!!! And my machines not working properly and everything blows up........
Personality: Funny Cute Hard-Working Brave Smart And Forgetful
Powers: Sometimes I think I may Be able To shoot Flames out Of my Body *Tries it* Only sometimes, though.....
Social Status: I am kind of a third wheel, But I have some good friends.
Summer or Year rounder: Year Rounder. Definitely.
Years at camp: I just Started, like, Forty-Five minutes ago.
Life Before Camp: I was born in Michigan to a loving mom and dad. but mom and dad got divorced, and right after it was finalized my Dad had gotten into a car accident. Mom said that he had died. I lived with my mom in Michigan for a while, then we moved and settled down in a little town north of Omaha, Nebraska. The first day I went to school, Everyone wouldn't stop talking to me. I hated it. When we had gym, we had to run laps. I was the first one to finish. I took me forty seconds. The gym teacher told me that I should try out for the track team. I tried out, and I got in. After that life was pretty good, except I got kicked out of that school. Mom decided to home school me. I still got to stay on the track team, though. A weird, serpent like creature attacked me and my dad one day. He didn't survive. I was alone. Then I found a note that my Mom had kept in her pocket. It was from Dad, For me. I read it, and it told me to come here.
Role playing example: "What was that?" Jakob yelled. "I don't know!" I yelled back.
Notes: I hope that I have applied for the camp half-blood experience.

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PostSubject: Re: Me:   Me: Icon_minitime11/26/2014, 1:06 pm

Add more to the appearance -- much more.

Is her sword Celestial bronze?

For her armor, it can only be one metal or the other -- since her father is Hephaestus it can only be Celestial bronze.

Add more to her flaws. She also needs a physical one that messes up her appearance (ie: large permanent burn scar on her face).

Personality should be at least 5 sentences long, so add more to it.

For her powers:
- How many times a day can she do this?
- How hot is the fire?
- How far can she shoot the flames at most, and for how long could she maintain this?

Life Before Camp:
- Why did she get kicked out of school?
- What exactly was the serpent creature?
- The serpent attacked her and her dad? Do you mean a step-dad?
- I would say no to her dad Hephaestus sending her a note.

RP Example should be at least 10 sentences long.

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Kendall (Ares) Archer (Hecate) Avie (Soter) Stella (Ouranos) Aidan (Pyriphlegethon) Tempest (Aeolus) Bee (Melisseus) Nelly (Apollo) Benji (Thoth) Dana (Odyne) Mason (Hermes) Darwin (Hephaestus) Lucy (Somnus; First Cohort)Dorian (Legacy of Mefitis; Third Cohort)Ellie (Dionysus; Hunter of Artemis)

[4 free slots --> Terra, Kai, Rosalie, and Mina are gone]

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Olivia Gaddlow



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Registration date : 2014-11-26

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PostSubject: Re: Me:   Me: Icon_minitime11/27/2014, 8:58 am

Okay. Do you want me to rewrite it?
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PostSubject: Re: Me:   Me: Icon_minitime11/27/2014, 12:05 pm

There's an edit button in the top right hand corner of your post. Just alter the parts I asked you to, edit in the answers to my questions, and hit Send. Then all you need to do is post that you've edited and I'll check it again.

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Kendall (Ares) Archer (Hecate) Avie (Soter) Stella (Ouranos) Aidan (Pyriphlegethon) Tempest (Aeolus) Bee (Melisseus) Nelly (Apollo) Benji (Thoth) Dana (Odyne) Mason (Hermes) Darwin (Hephaestus) Lucy (Somnus; First Cohort)Dorian (Legacy of Mefitis; Third Cohort)Ellie (Dionysus; Hunter of Artemis)

[4 free slots --> Terra, Kai, Rosalie, and Mina are gone]

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