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Name: Acacia-Jana Sophia Marie Evans

Gender: Female

Mortal Parent: Marcus Josiah Evans is 34 years old and a single parent. Ever since his daughters birth he's never met anyone else and fell in love with them. Marcus is constantly on duty as he is apart of the US national Air Force, and usually has to leave AJ at Camp Half-Blood year round. Every time Marcus comes back from being deployed he brings his dog tag back and gives it to her which she wears a bunch of them around her neck. Having 8 in total. Marcus Evans was in a car crash when he was 15, losing both his parents, and older sister leaving him with no family left. He gave AJ Sophia, his sister's name, and Marie, his mother's name for her middle names.

God Parent: Athena the Goddess of Wisdom, Crafts, and Battle Strategy. Athena was with Marcus for less than a year before she gave him Acacia she stayed for a brief hour or so and then had to leave.

Date of Birth: February 16th, 2001

Place of Birth: Austin, Texas, USA. She lived there until she was 5 then moved up to New York where she lived the rest of her life till arriving to camp half blood.

Hometown/Last Residence: New York City

Race/ethnicity: Italian, Acacia-Jana gains this from her father's heritage side of the family.

Accent: Acacia-Jana has an Southern North American Accent even if it seems she might snap at you with a saucy Latin accent for her looks. Even with the ability to fluently speak English she also can rant and rave in full on Latin, Italian, and Greek.

Skin Tone: Olive tinted with a pale look.

Eye Color: Stormy Grey mixed with a little Chocolate Brown, her eyes are mostly grey for her all the children of Athena posses their mothers eyes. The reason the brown is intended comes from her father and hetechromia she gets from her mortal grandmother, Marie.

Hair Color: Deep Milky Brown

Hair Length: Down to her waist past the bottom of her back.

Height: 5'3, she is considered small and petite for her age, this comes some from her dancing skills.

Weight: 110lbs

Body Type: Most of her life she was quite a skinny thing, her ribs being shown easily, and her small petite figure was seen. From her years of dance she has always been quite well built, and muscular in her arms and legs, being strongly built even for her small size. Though over the years as she has grown older she has gone from a skinny stick to slowly begin to get some curves to her.

Appearance: Acacia-Jana has a elfish face to her, and her skin is flawless from any freckles. She is short but twisty if you know what I mean. Her flexibility is amazing and she is seen as a flexible muscular dancer and fighter. She is quite skinny, and bony, her ribs, and other bones being shown off some times as she is seen as extremely small and breakable to the eyes. When she dresses its usually a girly edgy style, she can be girly and at special occasions you may find her in a dress. She tends to wear things tight fitted so she can moved around easily, and likes to wear leggings or a skirt at times with combat boots. Though when she is not dressed this way she is in her dance wear at times and you could find her in a crop top and baggy pants.
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Weapon: Acacia-Jana carries two identical owl daggers with her, that are made from celestial bronze and carves with ancient designs and owls.

Armor: Acaica usually wears full greek battle armor, with her daggers strapped to her back.

Pet(s): None

Skills/Talents: Acacia-Jana is a exceptionally good dancer and fighter. She began dancing when she was 2 years old and has never stopped since. The dance genres she dances includes: Ballet, Tap, Contemporary, Lyrical, Jazz, Hip-Hop, Salsa, Ball Room, and Acro. For this she is extremely well known in parts of New York for her dance wins, and her flexibility is a major help when is comes to fighting.

Flaws: AJ's flaw is: Secrecy. She knows how to keep a secret for the longest time and hurt people. She tends to hold things in and never let them out, never sharing her personal own opinion. A result of this is that she can take things out on herself, from the time she was 9-13 she had an anorexic and bulimic issue for years. Not receiving help until recently. Acacia is very sensitive when it comes to her size, for years she was teased about being so skinny and small, and bony like. Thus she tries to become smaller if she can, not realizing it would hurt her. Acacia constantly wants to be able to help people, even though she may not be able to, she is sure there is a way to help someone and make everything better, even if everything can't be fixed.

Strengths: Her flexibility is something that helps her greatly, she knows how to twist and turn in combat with ease and pull tricks on her opponent in a fight. She has a quick processed mind where she knows how to put a plan together quickly. She is great at battle strategy and knows what to do in a bad situation at times in helping people. She is reasonable and wise when coming to a decision. She does very well in hand to hand combat compared to her strategy in armed combat.

Weaknesses: Acaica can be daring, and prideful which can lead her to a bad end. Her personality to constantly please people tends to keep her in tough situations.

Likes: Acaica-Jana has always found her out lit to be her love of dancing and hand to hand combat, and even sword fighting she learned in camp. As long as she could remember these three things were way she could release her anger or sadness and finds she is exceptionally good at them in a competitive point of view. She loves to win.

Dislikes: Acaica-Jana takes a disliking to ignorant people. She gets annoyed very easily which can be scary when you make her more than annoyed and mad it is not pretty one bit. She hates when her father has to leave even though she knows it is his duty to protect the mortals of the USA, but it hurts her at times since she already cannot see her mother.

Fears: Spiders. Spiders has always haunted Acacia's thoughts and dreams. This is from being a child of Athena, as one of Athena's major enemies is a woman/spider named Archnae. Acacia has been attacked by a huge spider before once when she was 7, and has had night mares ever since.

Personality: Acacia-Jana is strong, bold headed, and serious girl. Just like her mother, Athena. Mortals are taken aback by her attitude and knowledge for a 14 year old little girl. She doesnít like people to see her weaknesses espcially if she is crying, she tends to keep her bad feelings rolled up in a ball and shoved down at the bottom of her heart. But she also doesnít like people to think she is all cold hearted with no mercy or soul for anything. She is mostly everything her father isnít: strong, out spoken, and bold. Acacia-Jana does have the factor of a sweet and kind girl which she gets from both of her parents. Wisdom, kindness, and giving are things she can be. She does have a silly, and wild side that barely comes out to play but does around close friends and family. With still having the factor of always on alert. She can also be very taunting.

Powers: None

Social Status: Acacia-Jana is the nerd and goodie two shoes girl, on the side of also being a tough brick girl.

Summer or Year Rounder: Year Rounder(Usually), for her father having being gone constantly, the longest is over a year.

Years at Camp: 7 years

Life Before Camp: Acacia-Jana had some what of a normal life before Camp Half-Blood, she lived with her father in a town house in New York City. She often was dropped with a family friend when he had to go into his work line in the Army. Through out the years of her life though before CHB she had some attacks at the age of 6 she was waiting outside her dance studio when she spotted two strange men in black coats and what seemed to be red glowing eyes in the distance. She went back inside and sat back until she was picked up but when she looked again they were gone. Marcus had told Acacia who she was, and who her mother was after an attack at one of her schools where in the end the school was set to fie, and was fully aware of who she was by the age of 7. At age 8 after being tracked down by spiders of Arachne and attacked in her own room at home with her father, Marcus rushed AJ to Camp Half-Blood where she would stay year round for the following few years of her life...

Before her life in Camp Half-Blood Acacia attended a school where she was advanced and had skipped both Kindergarten, and the First Grade. She was advanced in all her teachings in school, and was known as the kind nerdy girl in school. This may be a good thing but she didn't have many friends in school, except from some other demigod friends she new of most of the other girls she went to school with were known to be her enemies. For as long as she could remember Acacia always had a grudge held against the popular snotty group of girls in her school who would constantly make fun of her. One day in the 6th grade she got into a physical fight with one of them and ended up breaking the girls nose, and arm and was suspended from the school.

Role-playing Example:

Acaica-Jana's brown eyes snapped to where her friends feet were, and there, a huge, long silhouette of a scaly figure body had wrapped itself around Calista's legs and began trying to pull her down the hill. It had a snake like slithery head which was wrapped around her. The scales were green, and silvery, its body was long, with a pair of huge wings, and small spikes lined a portion of its back, and its split tongue flicked. For a simpler description, it looked like a long huge snake, bug with wings, a set of legs, and looked like a dragon in a way.

"Drakon." she said to myself in a bare whisper. Yes she said, Drakon, so do not think she meant it was a Dragon, its spelled and pronounced: D-R-A-K-O-N.

AJraced toward the Calista's feet as they struggled to free of the monsters grip, it didn't seem real. Was it real? If not she must be going crazy. Scared as she went in but her body seemed to have a complete different idea of its own, along with her brain, she wouldn't stop moving. AJ round house kicked the thing in the face as it dove in for a new route to bite at Calista's leg, and it hissed at her.

As she was in the process of doing this she tried to gather all I knew of the Drakon in her head. Acacia's mind went racing with exact words she had read out of a book:

Drakons (not to be confused with Dragons) are giant, monster serpent-like creatures several millennia older than dragons.



  • Some breathe fire, though most don't.

    • Some spit acidic venom.


    • All have extremely hard plate-like scales on their skin.


    • Most can paralyze you with their eyes.


    • Extremely hard to kill




'Just my luck.' she thought hastily as the words shot through her mind. How was 'she' suppose to kill or at least stop this thing? Not knowing what she was thinking but her right arm wrapped around its neck, and left foot locked itself between its neck, and Calista's legs. She had it in a head lock, trying to pry apart the two to make space.

Notes:

  • Has Three Close Friends: Calista-Devri, Lorelei-Ever, and Pricsilla-Kai



  • Dancing:


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For her accent, what region of the United States does it adhere to? (Northeast such as a New York accent, Boston accent, etc)

Add more to the appearance.

[Your link for the owl daggers doesn't lead to a picture, by the way.]

Owls aren't allowed as pets unless you win an exotic pet prize from a mystery box.

For her flaws, please add another one or two. (One should be a physical flaw, one that affects her overall appearance which she dislikes/is uncomfortable about.)

Life Before Camp:
- This should be at least ten sentences long, so please add more.
- What kinds of monsters attacked her? (They wouldn't attack her at such a young age, either, so increase that.)
- How did she figure out she was a demigod? Did her father tell her about Athena?
- Who brought her to camp?

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PostSubject: Re: Introducing Acacia-Jana Evans - Daughter of Athena   Introducing Acacia-Jana Evans - Daughter of Athena Icon_minitime3/8/2015, 8:50 pm

To clarify: Did Athena give Marcus his daughter and leave immediately or did she stay around briefly?

"North Southern American" for her accent is phrased rather weirdly. Did you mean a Southern accent from the USA or...?

Add some more to appearance.

Does she have some form of heterchromia for her eyes?

Add another flaw unrelated to her secrecy.

LBC:
- You say she saw those two men in black coats when she was 8 -- before camp -- but later on says Marcus brought her to camp when she was 7?

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Okay, fixed. :)
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Don't think she could get heterochromia (sectoral if the colors are "mixed) from her aunt, but perhaps her mortal grandparents?

Also, add another three or four sentences to Appearance and you'll be good. (Example: Describe her typical fashion style.)

LBC:
- Increase the ages for when she got attacked by another 2 or so years each. Don't think that at such a young age her scent would be strong enough to attract them.
- Also, describe her life apart from the attacks: How was her school life? Did she have many friends? Enemies?

Other than these things your form looks good.

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Edited.
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Heyo! just one thing about the ages!

"she was by the age of 6. At age 7" previous before this you mentioned "at age 7" so I think you should just that to work in chronological order. Ex: "she was by the age of 7. At age 8." Or something along the lines.

I think you should be fine after that :D
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Fixed it I think I did what you meant. Sorry I am not the brightest crayon in the box. XD
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How/Why does she speak Latin fluently?

And wanting help people is not a flaw.

Finally, I don't think she could face a drakon hand to hand or even be able to get it in a headlock.

Everything else looks pretty decent.
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