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Tristan Maria Edwards

Post by Thor19Edwards on 6/23/2015, 7:14 am

Name: Tristan Maria Edwards
Age: 12
Gender: female
Eyes: blue-grey
Hair: long black hair
Height: 4 feet 8 inches
Body Type: lean but athletic
Skin Color: tan
God Parent: Ares
Mortal Parent: Mary Edwards
Country of Origin: Canada
Pets: black lab named midnight
Talents: singing dancing fighting
Weapon**: Celestial bronze sword
Personality: She is a cheerful, forceful fighter until she gets mad. When she’s mad she tends to get aggressive. She is malicious and odd when she is sad. She does odd things like: talking in Vulcan, dresses up like batman, showers in the dark.
Flaws: she is crazy, paralyzed, and wears glasses.
Abilities (must relate to god parent; optional): none
Powers (must relate to god parent; optional): none
Life before Camp*: She was born in Quebec Canada 12 years ago. When she was 2 her mom got a job transfer to New York City and been there since. When she was 5 her mom died from cancer and she moved in with her grandparents. When she was 11 her grandparents were killed by a hydra in front of her. She ran away to her best friend’s house and told her everything that happened that day. She was immediately taken to camp half blood to live to be safe.
RP Example*: Tristan entered the arena determined to win. She had her sword in her hand and was smirking. She was mad thanks to one of her siblings so she came here to fight and let off some steam. She attacked one of the training dummies and destroyed it. She started singing let it go as she fought.
Any notes about your characters: Tristan is crazy





Last edited by Thor19Edwards on 12/19/2016, 10:07 am; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : spelling mistakes)

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Re: Tristan Maria Edwards

Post by Kwacken on 6/24/2015, 8:39 pm

Run this through spellcheck and change fighting abilities to a talent, unless it's something supernatural about the fighting abilities, in which case clarify it please.

Also, why was she willing to believe that she was a demigod from the satyr? Why pack up and leave everything without any notice?
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Re: Tristan Maria Edwards

Post by Thor19Edwards on 12/19/2016, 10:09 am

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Re: Tristan Maria Edwards

Post by Kendall on 12/21/2016, 11:23 pm

Add more to her personality.

Flaws:
- Define "crazy."
- In what way is she paralyzed?
- How is wearing glasses a flaw, unless she's so clumsy she always loses them/hates wearing them and so never does?

LBC:
- How did she manage to escape a hydra? It would have killed her fairly easily.
- Who was her best friend, exactly? A satyr?
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