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Post by crafty camper on 9/4/2015, 6:09 pm

Name:brooklynn bristol lucy baron
Age:12
Gender:female
Eyes:olive green
Hair:wild curly caramel  hair
Height:5'6"
Body Type:lean and fit
Skin Color:tan
God Parent:athena
Mortal Parent:oliver baron
Country of Origin:calafornia
Pets:5 birds justice, lisbeth , freedom ,bravery and lucky
Talents:gymnast
Weapon**:bow and arrow
Personality:smart quiet fast
Flaws:has favorites
Abilities (must relate to god parent; optional):
Powers (must relate to god parent; optional):
Life Before Camp*:cant rember
RP Example*:
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Post by Kendall on 9/4/2015, 6:17 pm

Is this a work in progress? Because if you don't indicate it in the topic title or put it in the WIP section approvers will be checking it. To give you a boost I'll list some questions now if you intend on continuing to work on this.

California isn't a country.

What kinds of birds does she have?

Being stealthy and fast aren't really a part of her personality -- more like talents or skills. (If you mean fast like fast-talking or such then it would be part of her personality.)

You need 3 flaws.
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Post by crafty camper on 9/12/2015, 8:55 pm

crafty camper wrote:
Kendall wrote:Is this a work in progress? Because if you don't indicate it in the topic title or put it in the WIP section approvers will be checking it. To give you a boost I'll list some questions now if you intend on continuing to work on this.

California isn't a country. i ment to type america, calafornia

What kinds of birds does she have?

Being stealthy and fast aren't really a part of her personality -- more like talents or skills. (If you mean fast like fast-talking or such then it would be part of her personality.)yes sorry i wasnt realy thinking much when i posted this

You need 3 flaws.
thank you
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Post by crafty camper on 9/12/2015, 8:57 pm

crafty camper wrote:
Kendall wrote:Is this a work in progress? Because if you don't indicate it in the topic title or put it in the WIP section approvers will be checking it. To give you a boost I'll list some questions now if you intend on continuing to work on this.thank you

California isn't a country. i ment to type america, calafornia

What kinds of birds does she have?

Being stealthy and fast aren't really a part of her personality -- more like talents or skills. (If you mean fast like fast-talking or such then it would be part of her personality.)yes sorry i wasnt realy thinking much when i posted this

You need 3 flaws.
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Post by Kendall on 9/12/2015, 9:40 pm

Try not to post 3 times in a row.

I'll be moving this to WIP Forms until you finish; when you do, let an approver know so they can move the form back.
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