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Post by Mr_Banana on 1/2/2016, 4:17 pm

Name: Logan G. Maxwell
Age: 14
Gender: Boy
Eyes: Brown
Hair: Red-ish brown
Height: 5' 5"
Body Type: Average (idk what this is so i am just saying things)
Skin Color: Caucasian (white)
God Parent: Apollo
Mortal Parent: Barbara L. Maxwell
Country of Origin: United States of America
Pets: Husky (named Oliver; boy)
Talents: Not sure
Weapon**: Bow
Personality: Funny, outgoing, nice
Flaws: Lies a lot
Abilities (must relate to god parent; optional): Good with bow, good at singing/dancing
Powers (must relate to god parent; optional): Healing
Life Before Camp*: Lived in New York City a couple blocks away from Empire State Building
RP Example*: "Hey wassup" Smiles at [person] ((idk man...))
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Post by Morgan Landry on 1/2/2016, 4:54 pm

Hey there!

- Body type is how he's built. Is he skinny? Chubby? Ripped? Athletic? All that stuff (:
- Talents are things like archery, making friends, etc. If you're not sure, just Google a list of talents.
- Surely he has a quiver too, right? What metal are his arrows tipped with?
- You need one more personality trait.
- You need three flaws.
- Please develop on the power. What is the worst wound he could heal? You need post limits too, inclusive a cool down.
- You need 5 sentences for the life before camp. Why don't you write how he grew up and how he got to camp?
- Please write the RP example in complete sentences.

Rest looks good to me! (:
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Post by Mr_Banana on 1/4/2016, 10:43 pm

Ok... um...

He is kinda skinny, but he has some muscles
Talents: archery, singing, dancing, friendly/easy to like
Has a small bronze magic quiver that he can ask for any arrow, arrows made of Celestial Bronze (If the magic quiver isn't allowed, he has a regular size quiver, still bronze)
Personality Traits: Funny, outgoing, nice, agreeable, alert but lazy (if that's possible)
Flaws: Lies, doesn't take things very serious, butts into other peoples' business
Power: Can heal deep wounds, but it takes a while. Cool down time take about 6 hours, max.
Backstory (life before camp): Lived a couple of blocks away from Empire State Building. Mom used to love to take walks and talk about Dad (Apollo). I loved to study Greek myths and stories, and when I found out they were real and I was going to a camp full of Greek things (people, temples, weapons, stories), I was ecstatic. Mom told me about Camp Half-Blood at age twelve, went at age thirteen. No monsters bothered me the whole way.
RP example: Logan high fives [person]. "Hey, how's it going, man?"

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Re: Character Form

Post by Kendall on 1/4/2016, 10:48 pm

Please edit that into your form using the Edit button in the top righthand corner of your original post.

To address your new/edited information, however:

That magical quiver wouldn't be allowed.

Elaborate more on his personality traits. How is he funny? Explain how he's alert but lazy -- is he observant, but doesn't share these observations with others?

Powers:
- Please format your limits using number of posts: for example, it takes him 2 posts to fully heal a wound and he requires 4 posts to cool-down.
- Define a "deep wound" -- how deep, how wide, and how long is the wound?

LBC:
- Add some more detail to this section. What was school like for him? Did he have many friends? When did his mom first tell him that his dad was a Greek god?
- Did Apollo tell his mother about camp?
- Did his mom take him to camp?

RP Example needs to be at least 5 sentences long, so please add more there.
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