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all that glitters is gold

Post by baekhyun on 2/9/2016, 3:16 pm

a quiet, startled smile
a small pop of intrigued yellow
eyes met across a short distance
gold, now, shimmering, sunshine
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Post by baekhyun on 2/9/2016, 3:17 pm

she was a fragile, delicate thing,
a dainty crystal shell
curved over a hard, glittering jewel
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Post by baekhyun on 2/9/2016, 3:22 pm

the kids, they're too, too loud
they're bright bursts of orange in your head
citrus-scented splatters of paint on a blank canvas mind

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Post by baekhyun on 2/9/2016, 3:24 pm

the creases in your smile
place where you've smiled before
but, oh, apollo, this one is new
isn't it?
(it is. it's just for you.)

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Post by baekhyun on 2/9/2016, 3:28 pm

oh, apollo
how can i believe in anything but you?
you're seared into these eyes
burned forever into blue irises
but i, cynic as i am,
can believe in n o t h i n g but you.

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Post by baekhyun on 2/9/2016, 3:30 pm

it's a warm sun in your chest
expanding and expanding until
there's no space left
just gold glowing from your eyes
(they're windows to your soul, after all)

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Post by baekhyun on 2/9/2016, 3:31 pm

humans write their names on everything
scrawl it on a scrap of paper
carve it into bark
and i know you wish your name was on me.
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Post by baekhyun on 2/9/2016, 3:32 pm

dead men tell no tales
if that were true,
then tell me, homer,
do you live?
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Post by mabel pines on 2/9/2016, 5:38 pm

i am very bad at actual critiques/comments and generally just scream when i like things so i'm gonna do that rn fair warning. these are LOVELY. I LOVE THEM. i am sorely disappointed by the disappearance of the lil voting button things on each post because every single one of these deserves AT LEAST (AT LEAST!!!!!!) like 5 upvotes wtf,,,,,,

IN CONCLUSION THESE R GR8 WOW
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Post by baekhyun on 4/21/2016, 1:27 am

they say a drop of water
never falls the same way twice
but my teardrops do
and it's all because of you
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Post by baekhyun on 4/21/2016, 1:30 am

wide green eyes and caramel waves
red velvet lips and a passing smile
look, but never touch

aka i fell in love with a girl in the five seconds i saw her and discovered i'm Biromantic™
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