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Post by Lucas Pinewood on 5/11/2016, 2:29 pm

DEMIGOD FORM:
Name: Lucas Pinewood

Age: 13

Gender: Male

Eyes: Sky blue

Hair: dark brown

Height: 160 cm

Body Type: skinny but strong

Skin Color: pale

God Parent: Apollo

Mortal Parent: Ann Pinewood

Country of Origin: Norway

Pets: a cat named Kitty

Talents: sword fighting, survival and archery

Weapon**: Celestial Bronze sword and a bow with celestial bronze arows

Personality: he is a bit of a loner with taking most of his traits from his mother. altough he hates her for various reasons. he does not like being with a lot of people at the same time and, and he shuts people out that he doesn't know, so he doesn't get to know people easily, but the one's he does know he is really friendly with and he trusts them with his life. other than that he has a good sense of humor and is always happy when he is with friends.

Flaws: exclusionary in the way that he shuts people out and does not like being with more than two people at a time, can sometimes be rude, and to quick to judge people

Abilities: can not get sunburns

Powers: can heal most wounds that are not vital every 6th post. When he heals cuts they can't be  wider than 1 inch, deeper than 1 inch, and longer than 5 inch. He can also heal 1st degree burns on arms and legs. And he can heal most bruises as long as they are not in head or in the ribcage. but the bruises can not be more than 1,5 inch in each direction

Life Before Camp*: he grew up in norway until he was 9 then he moved to new york with his mother because of his stephdad,  when he found out about his stepson's secret which of course was that he was a demigod he broke up with his mother. he ran away because his mother was mean to him of different reasons, the main one was that his mom blamed him for the breakup with the stephdad Ola. He lived in the woods for 1 month but he was found. He was taken to his mother's house but she was gone, when they could not find her (she had moved back to norway to apollagize to Ola) they tried contacting her but nothing worked, she did not answer the phone, she didn't answer email it was like she had dissapered of the face of the planet. meanwhile, he was sent to an orphanage untill they found his mom . He was.not happy with his stay there because it lastet untill he was 12 years and 6 months,he took on the same role he took on at school in Norway the smart nerd and also mostly a weirdo and a loner . He was eventually discovered by a satyr who had hidden himself as an orphant he told him to go to camp. he didn't really believe the satyr at first but he thought that anywhere would be better than here. they left for camp, and on the way to camp they where chased by a cyclops, who found them at a clothes shop, because they where trying to find some decent shoes for the satyr which fit his hooves. he had lost the last pair when running up a cliff from some monsters. they escaped by, burrying the cyclops wich wasn't the largest in the world. under a pile of clothes. When they escaped they took the fastest way to camp. on the way they where not  attacked except for the cyclops who chased them all the way to the border, he arrived a week before his birthday the 3rd of September.

RP Example*: he got dressed in his orange camp half blood t shirt and blue jeans and, walked out of the cabin as the sun warmed his face. he looked around and walked towards the lake. As he walked he looked around catiously. Even though he was safe and had been here for a while now he was still scared to walk around alone. he thought about the day he arrived here, it was a good time for him everything was perfect.

Any notes about your character: he falls easily in love with smart people. and likes books almost as much as a child of athena


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Re: Lucas Pinewood Son of Apollo

Post by Kendall on 5/11/2016, 7:21 pm

Powers:
- You'll need to be more specific about the wounds he can heal -- maximum size for cuts (length/depth/width)/burns/bruises, etc etc.
- How long does it take to heal a wound fully?

LBC:
- Describe his life more before he ran away. How did he get along with people at school/his neighborhood or such? Did he do well academically? Why did they move to another continent?
- So he ran away from his mother at the age of 9 and lived in the woods until he was 12? 9 year olds don't have the survival skills to live there for so long, and people would inevitably notice -- so people would search for him, and he'd probably be found.
- How did he escape the Cyclops?
- How/where did the satyr find him?
- How frequently were they attacked before they got to camp? CHB wouldn't be too far away if they were in the state of NY.
- What were they attacked by, and how did they escape/defeat these things?

Add at least 3 more sentences to RP Example.
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Post by Kendall on 5/12/2016, 10:33 pm

When you edit, please reply to your form -- do not just edit the title. We will not be checking this again unless you do so.

Personality:
- "has a lot of the atributes of a child of hades" --> How so? We only know like 2-3 kids of Hades, and they're all rather different from each other.

Flaws:
- Exclusionary how?

Powers:
- Reduce the depth of the maximum cut size.
- You'll need a definite size for the bruises.

LBC:
- ... Why did his stepdad go "insane"? (I'm assuming this secret was related to Lucas's parentage? Or is this something else?)
- Why was Lucas taken to an orphanage when he was found in the woods? His mother was alive. Did she disown him or something?
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Post by Lucas Pinewood on 5/13/2016, 4:09 am

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Post by Kendall on 5/13/2016, 1:28 pm

Powers:
- You didn't reduce the depth.

LBC:
- So I still don't understand why his stepdad would go insane. How did he find out that Lucas was a demigod? What proved it to him?
- I'm also sure that if his mom moved back to Norway they'd still find a way to track her down -- such as by neighbors or perhaps a landlord, her cellphone number still in being in service, etc. She can't just have disappeared suddenly.
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Post by Kwacken on 5/16/2016, 12:38 am

Why did he believe the Satyr? Why did the Satyr need new shoes? How did they outrun a Cyclops?
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Post by Kwacken on 5/19/2016, 8:39 am

I don't actually see any edits.
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Post by Kendall on 5/22/2016, 5:37 pm

LBC:
- Even if the Cyclops weren't very large (which would be how large? Tyson-sized?), a pile of clothes wouldn't have stopped it for very long at all considering their immense strength, and even confusing it for a few moments wouldn't help much. 
- What's this "fastest way to camp"? Did they take the Grey Sisters' Taxi? Regular taxi with a hardcore driver?
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