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Leon Goldwood Son of Athena

Post by Lucas Pinewood on 5/12/2016, 3:45 pm

Name: Leon Goldwood  
 
 
Gender: Male  
 
 
Mortal Parent: Jens Goldwood  
 
 
God Parent: Athena  
 
 
Date of Birth: the fourth of May 2000  
 
 
Place of Birth: London, England.  
 
 
Hometown/Last Residence: Hometown is London. last residence Tolga a small town in Norway  
 
 
Race/ethnicity: English, but the roots of his family are Norwegian.  
 
 
Accent: He has a British accent.  
 
 
Skin Tone: Pale with freckles on his nose, he also has a few freckles on his cheek.  
 
 
Eye Color: Grey like all children of Athena.  
 
 
Hair Color: A dark chocolate brown color after his father  
 
 
Hair Length: Medium with hair partially covering his right eye  
 
 
Height: 160cm  
 
 
Weight: 44kg  
 
 
Body Type: he has an average body type but he has a crooked ribcage  
 
 
Appearance: he has icy blue eyes and a dark brown hair almost like chocolate, he usually wears a hoodie over his CHB t-shirt he has a pair of black converse which are stained with mud, blue jeans or black jeans. he never wears shorts. he also has freckles over his nose.  
 
 
Weapon: A celestial bronze sword length 75cm which has a leather grip with an oval pommel with a blade which looks like a half leaf, and also a dagger of celestial bronze  
 
 
Armor: none except when he is partaking in capture the flag in which case he takes just a bit of light padding in the vital spots.  
 
 
Pet(s): he has multiple cats in Norway which are named Kitty and Nonstop and also a pet hamster called Freddy  
 
 
Skills/Talents: he has quite the skill in sword fighting. despite being average in strength he has speed and intellect on his side which makes him hard to hit. He also has a skill in survival tactics and can survive for long periods of time, through hunting gathering and other    
 
 
Flaws: despite mostly being friendly towards most people, he decides if he likes them in the first 12 minutes he sees them. This has led to many misunderstandings with other people in the past. He isn't exactly the first person to start up a conversation either, he is very shy and also has problems getting to know people, which makes it so that he doesn't have a lot of friends but the ones he has and that he actually trusts he would trust with his life. He can sometimes be a bit too logical, taking strategy over friendship in combat situations. He also has the bad habit of saying that he trusts when he actually doesn't. he also has the flaw that he thinks he is superior when it comes to intellect. he also has the physical flaw of having a crooked ribcage this affects him in a way so that if he gets hit on the right side of his upper body he gets jolt's of pain for the remainder of the day.
 
 
Strengths: his strengths are, his quick thinking, his intellect and tactics, sword fighting. But he also has a strength in that he is able to survive alone with only tools. He is also quite good at basketball  
 
 
Weaknesses: his weaknesses are, long temper, but if you make him angry you will regret it. He does not socialize with a lot of people. This is one of his biggest weakness because he does not have a lot of people backing him up in fights of any kind, against enemies or just plain old bullies. He does not like dumb people and can be mean to the people he calls "idiots". He is also not very good with heights and is slightly scared of flying.  
 
 
Likes: he likes video games especially online games, he also likes horse's, dogs, cats, hamsters, and most other animals. He likes to practice with his sword, lay battle plans and also, he loves strategy games and he has never lost a game of chess in his life. He also likes a girl from the Aphrodite cabin.  
 
 
Dislikes: he dislikes bullies, first person shooters, and also he does not tolerate monsters of any kind, because his father was killed by a cyclops on his way to camp. He therefore has an especially strong hatred towards cyclops.  
 
 
Fears: he has a natural fear of spiders, but he also has a fear of watching each and every one of his friends die in front of him, this is his worst nightmare even worse than spiders. He also has a fear of dying himself which gives him nightmares where he either dies in the vacuum of space burns to a crisp in lava, and his biggest fear, drowning.    
 
 
Personality: he is a happy person with a few good friends, but he likes to be alone and he tends to let no one talk to him when he is depressed about something, even if it is just something trivial like a fight with a friend or girlfriend. He also embodies the typical traits of an INFJ type of person when it comes to relationships and friendships, he is very caring towards his closest friends and is very friendly. He is also fiercely  loyal to his friends and Family. He easily gets along with people who have a great deal of intellect  
 
 
Abilities:  he has no special abilities except intellect.  
 
 
Powers: no powers except his intellect  
 
 
Social Status: he is a lonely nerd, and tends to like being alone.  
 
 
Summer or Year Rounder:  he is a Year Rounder because his father is dead and he has no place to live, although he wants to go to a school because it is what he is best at.    
 
 
Years at Camp: he is in his third year at camp half blood.  
 
 
Life Before Camp: Leon has lived most of his life in England, his life for the first eight or so years where quite uneventful. He was the biggest bookworm on the school and he liked his life, slot he had a nice childhood even though the mystery of his mother was one of the things he cared the most about. He wondered who she could be and he spent most of his years as a 7 year old trying to find out who she was. He decided that his father would surely know about this and he decided to wait and see if he told him anything. But he would try to impress him to get his will, he started with studying more than he already did to try to impress his father. He started taking an interest in strategy and combat at the age of 9. he and his father practiced with wooden swords and Leon considered it to be the best time he has ever had. But later that year at Christmas everything changed. His house was attacked by a cyclops, he did not know why but his father had been nervous that entire week. Then later that day the house was attacked by a one eyed beast. Jens roared, he had prepared ancient swords from his collection he had always taken an interest in swords. After a small battle, which was very inefective due to them not having celestial bronze. When they realized , They managed to trick the cyclops by climbing in to the attic and out the window. They rushed for the airport. And got on a plain, and left for Norway they only lived there until he was 12 on his birthday the cyclops returned. It knocked down the walls of the house, but this time there was no escape at least not for them both. He gave his son clear instructions find a fountain and put the coin in Jens told him to say "Oh Iris, goddess of the Rainbow, please accept my offering" while he said this, Jens gave him a large coin and told him to say that he wanted to see Chiron. When Leon asked how his father knew this, he said it had a lot to do with his mother and that he had gotten the coin and the instructions from his her. He didn't understand, but Leon ran from the house . His father died that day, but he did as Jens had told him and sent an iris message to camp. It did not take a lot of time for the satyr to arrive, they managed to come to camp 3 weeks before his 13th birthday. Their journey there had been amazingly not that eventful with the occasional monster attack which they fended off easily, they arrived safely at camp half blood.  
 
 
Role-playing Example: Leon rushed out of the cabin with an angry look on his face. He had lost his first chess match ever, he was disappointed by his own skill. He had his sword hanging in his belt and decided to go train he headed for the arena. as he walked towards the arena his mind raced furiously, he had to get his revenge. as he walked he was thinking about different tactics he could use, next time. well it will have to wait he thought I should do something to get my mind of it .  
 
 
Notes: he is currently in a relationship with Elayne Isabel Jacquenette Joella Hendrickx de Wilde of the Aphrodite cabin.


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Re: Leon Goldwood Son of Athena

Post by Kwacken on 5/13/2016, 3:24 am

Do you want this to be judged as a detailed form for drachma?

If so, you need one more flaw.

I also doubt that it would take three weeks for the satyr to get to him. Or that he would be able to survive with a dead father for three weeks without police intervention.
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Re: Leon Goldwood Son of Athena

Post by Lucas Pinewood on 5/13/2016, 4:50 am

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Re: Leon Goldwood Son of Athena

Post by Kwacken on 5/13/2016, 4:56 am

Okay, I'm going to assume you do want the drachma reward.

In that case, I'm going to tell you that we look at quality more than quantity. You have several typos in the form, and I am going to give you a chance to run it through spellcheck and proof read it again before I approve the form. Because once I approve it, the drachma amount is final.
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Post by Lucas Pinewood on 5/13/2016, 5:22 am

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Re: Leon Goldwood Son of Athena

Post by Kendall on 5/13/2016, 1:18 pm

Flaws:
- How does the crooked ribcage affect him? How bad is it?

Add some more to his personality.

LBC:
- "Jens roared, he had prepared ancient swords from his collection he had always taken an interest in swords." --> So they fought the Cyclops with these swords? Where would a mortal get Celestial Bronze weapons, unless you're saying they fought it with ineffective mortal weapons?
- How did his dad know about camp? Where did he get drachmas from?
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Post by Lucas Pinewood on 5/13/2016, 3:20 pm

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Re: Leon Goldwood Son of Athena

Post by Kwacken on 5/16/2016, 9:49 pm

Do you really want to have two characters named Lucas? Might be a bit confusing.
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Post by Lucas Pinewood on 5/18/2016, 3:18 pm

i know do you know any good names
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Post by Kwacken on 5/20/2016, 9:21 am

If you want something that means something similar, I would recommend Robert.

If not, just peruse a baby name book and pick something that jumps out at you.
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Post by Lucas Pinewood on 5/20/2016, 11:18 am

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Re: Leon Goldwood Son of Athena

Post by Kendall on 5/22/2016, 5:57 pm

Clarify more on his Body Type, since the definition of "average" can vary a bit. Is he tall and lanky? Short and stocky? (My examples are a little generic, sorry.) 

Flaws:
- Add a natural cosmetic flaw; this can include things like bad/frequent acne, buck teeth, large ears, etc. (These can include cosmetic traits he's insecure about.)
- Any other effects from the crooked rib cage? Was he born with this or did some brutal injury happen that made it this way? 

Add another sentence or two to his personality.

LBC:
- So before the first Cyclops attack, when his dad had been acting nervous, what had happened to cause that? Had he suspected somehow something was going to attack his son? (Such as him seeing a monster lurking, if he can see through the Mist.)

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- You need at least 10 sentences for RP Example. (For some reason that minimum hadn't been in the main detailed form rules, but had been in the guide.)
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