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Ellie Harison

Post by Ellie Harison on 5/13/2016, 1:50 am

Name: Ellie Harison
Age: 11
Gender: girl
Eyes: green
Hair: brown
Height: 5'
Body Type: banana
Skin Color: tan
God Parent: Athena
Mortal Parent: Martin Harison
Country of Origin: United States of America
Pets: doesn't have one
Talents: writing, dancing
Weapon**: celestial bronze sword called Witte
Personality: funny, loves to read and learn, is easily offended
Flaws: is afraid of heights, will back down from a fight, is not good with people
Abilities (must relate to god parent; optional): very fast reader, good
Powers (must relate to god parent; optional): know it all
Life Before Camp*: Lived with Martin Harison. Ellie had no friends. Ellie loves to learn and studies really hard for tests.
RP Example*: Ran off into the woods when Martin Harison told Ellie Harison to find a camp in the woods. Ellie found camp and went inside it.
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Re: Ellie Harison

Post by Kendall on 5/13/2016, 1:04 pm

... What do you mean by her body type being "banana"?

Add more to her personality (3-4 more traits, maybe some short sentences elaborating or connecting them).

Abilities:
- Did she develop the fast reading skills herself, or is this a natural thing? How fast does she read?
- She's good at what?

Your power is not a power; it's more of a personality trait.

LBC:
- You need at least 5 complete sentences for this, so please add more.
- In addition, please state how she got to camp.

RP Example needs to be at least 5 complete sentences too. (Your current one reads more like exposition than an RP post -- add action, dialogue, and thought.)
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