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Post by Gotenks on 5/17/2016, 7:53 am

Name: Josh Carmine

Age: 17

Gender: male

Eyes: brown

Hair: blond

Height: 5'8

Body type: skinny

Skin color: light tan

God parent: Apollo

Origin: Chicago, Illinois.

Mortal parent: May Carmine, an ex-lead singer of *insert fictional band here*. Now alcoholic and a shell of her former self.

Pets: none

Talents: Playing music

Skills: Decent archery skills

Weapon: a crossbow. Both the crossbow and the bolts used for it are made of Celestial Bronze.

Personality: Josh is basically enamored with music. It's what occupies most of his life. It's his biggest priority in life. It goes before health, food, relationships, training. He's also a perfectionist when it comes to his music, which basically means he gets easily furstrated at himself (and others). Ηe can also be really self-centered. Generally anti-social. He doesn't really value people and social interaction, unless it's an audience. He can be really rude and blunt to people without realising.

Flaws: Self-centered, overly blunt, not-too friendly, since he doesn't consider friendships important. So, basically if you talk to him he'll either force himself to be polite or ignore you.

Abilities: none

Powers: Decent healing. By that l mean, he can supposedly get really good but he doesn't try and improve it, so at this stage he can only help with flesh wounds, bruises (2 inch radius at most) and stuff. Takes him two posts to fully heal, with a four post cooldown. Size of wounds he can heal...1 - 5 inch long cuts, 1-2 inches wide, 1 inch deep. He can also heal 1st degree burns.


Life before CHB: Josh's life before CHB was pretty standard.Well, excluding his mother's obsession with making him the new Mozart after understanding who she did the birds and the bees to have a son with. Apollo likes everyone to know how great he is. So, he grew up with a lot of pressure and he didn't understand why till he got to 12 and the monster attacks became enough for him to believe his heritage. Let's count: One one-eyed (Cyclops, οf course) teacher who got kill-blocked by Josh's only childhood friend -later revealed satyr- Barry Allen the fastest man alive when l was 11 my mother was killed by this yellow guy. who never let him alone in order to be attacked so the monster decided to give up, an Empousa that would have killed him if not for the satyr's (again) timely save of his friend. That was the day (his 13th birthday cause why not) the journey to CHB began. When they reached the camp hill Barry, uh... catched a bad case of death. At least he served a purpose as a distraction for Josh to get to camp Half-Blood safely, since a pack of hellhounds had picked up their scent. (RIP Barry, at least the hellhounds had a fine meal). Since learning about his identity Josh basically started trying even harder to become an amazing musician "no matter what". Arrived at camp at age 13.

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Notes: Nope.


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Post by Kendall on 5/18/2016, 1:01 pm

What kinds of bolts does he use for the crossbow? What is the crossbow itself made of?

Elaborate on his last flaw.

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- How long does it take for him to heal a wound in number of posts?
- Cooldown between usages?
- Maximum-sized wounds he can heal?

LBC:
- Did Apollo tell Josh's mom about his godliness and CHB's location before leaving her?
- How frequent were the monster attacks? What kinds of monsters were they, and how did he survive them?
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Post by Gotenks on 5/24/2016, 3:55 pm

Edited.
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Post by Kendall on 5/24/2016, 8:16 pm

Add a bit more to his personality (things that aren't really related to his love for music, preferably).

You didn't elaborate on his last flaw. How is he not friendly?

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- Define "small." We need proper dimensions.

LBC:
- Elaborate more on the Cyclops and empousa attacks. (I think you mean an empousa, not an emboussa?) How did he escape/how was he saved? When did this occur (at what age)?
- What/how many other attacks occurred?
- What happened to Barry? How did he get to camp without him?
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Post by Gotenks on 5/31/2016, 3:20 pm

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Post by Kendall on 5/31/2016, 5:43 pm

You've explained why he's not friendly, but not how like I originally asked. Is he just rude to people? Does he not try to connect with them? 

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- 1-5 inches long, you mean? If yes, how wide/deep can they also be at most?
- What's the largest bruise/burn he can heal?

LBC:
- You still need to describe the Cyclops incident. 
- When did he meet Barry originally?
- Why did they take so long? It would be a lot better to go faster than slower, since monsters would catch their scents if they spent too long in one place.
- How many hellhounds had chased them to the hill? Where did they come from?
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Post by Gotenks on 6/5/2016, 3:54 pm

Edited again. I am sorry l am doing a really bad job -_-

BTW how could l know where the hellhounds came from, except from Tartarus?
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Post by Kendall on 6/9/2016, 6:44 pm

Powers:
- Reduce the depth a bit.

LBC:
- I meant where the hellhounds initially attacked them.
- Add a bit more regarding his life with his mother. How did she pressure him, and what did she make him do?
- Had the satyr just coincidentally befriended Josh when they were kids, or...?
- I'm pretty sure the Cyclops would still go after Josh regardless of whether or not the satyr were there? They're not exactly the brightest of monsters.
- How did the empousa attack him -- where were they at the time?
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