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Dawn of Justice

Post by Rick Sanchez on 5/30/2016, 12:18 am



Name: Alexander Nestor Wayne (he goes by his middle name)

Age: 15.5

Gender: Cis male

Eyes: Bright green

Hair: Dirty blond

Height: 1m72

Body Type: Slender

Skin Color: Pale

God Parent: Athena

Mortal Parent: James Wayne (FC is Ben Affleck)

Country of Origin: England

Pets: N/A

Talents:
- All things science (majors in metaphysics and astrophysics)
- Photographic memory
- Close-ranged weapons combat
- Athletic

Weapon**: A small pencil, which can turn into two weapons:
- When he presses on the eraser end, the pencil would turn into a Celestial bronze xiphos, if lost, would reappear in his pocket in its pencil form. And since it can't turn back into a pencil, he would have to toss the weapon away, so it would get lost, and it would return to him.

Personality:
- Perfectionist
- Intelligent
- Sentimental
- Talkative
- Caring
- Friendly
- Reckless

Flaws:
He's a perfectionist, who wants everything to be perfect, ranging from English grammar, to complex matters in life. He's sentimental, hugging everyone for helping him and such. He's extremely talkative and could easily annoy anyone who listens to him talking for over five minutes. Nestor also has that general Athenian arachnophobia.

Abilities (must relate to god parent; optional): N/A

Powers (must relate to god parent; optional): N/A

Life Before Camp*:
BEFORE BIRTH: John Layman, a British writer and Friday Wayne (as in the term girl-Friday), gave birth to two sons, James and Benjamin sometime in 1970 and 1971. John and Friday divorced in 1984, and John went to the States to raise James while Mrs Friday stayed in England to raise Ben. At one point he was in a feud with his dad, and developed hatred for Grandpa John and James used his mother's maiden name instead. About 13-15 years later, he met Athena (who was also in a relationship with his brother Ben). His brother Ben had a daughter around that time, Reyna, before Alexander was bornt 18 months later and left him on James's doorstep, while departing back to Olympus. She told both James and Ben of her identity separately. A month after his birth, he went on a business trip in England, where he first learnt of his niece Rey, but figured that the other's mother was a regular mortal. Alexander preferred to use his middle name Nestor because it was a cooler name. Nestor's life was normal, unlike other demigods. He went to private schools, but moves around a lot. He had friends, who relied on him with their studies. Nestor had a few partners in studying about science, which was his most outstanding subject at school. He spent his life trying to disprove Einstein to prove that something could exceed lightspeed.

For three years, when he was 6, 7 and 8, he would travel to England to stay with his uncle. The two cousins bonded greatly, yet unknowing that they're in fact half-siblings. They formed a sibling relationship, close to that of twins. When he was 9, while out to hang out at a friend's place, the Battle of Manhattan commenced. His mortal friend fell asleep, along with the rest of the apartment building. When he looked outside of the window (the building was rather close to the Williamsburg Bridge), he saw an army of monsters marching through, which horrified him. It frightened him when the bridge was blown up into the air. After three hours, James called his son, and found that he was still awake inside the island of Manhattan.

James tried to drive in, but the enchantment of Morpheus and Hecate repelled him. Nestor was stuck there through the rest of the battle. During the climax, a Hyperborean giant discovered his scent while separating from his squad, and stormed the building. Nestor discovered him first, due to the fact that he was "surviving" in the security chamber, and checked the camera network. He fled back to his friend's apartment room, where he sealed the door. While the giant was going up the stairs, he prepared a trap. When the monster broke down the door, Nestor released the valves, unleashing methane. The oven was connected to a rope, which opened the oven and the heat caused the methane to combust and incinerated the monster as it passed the kitchen. The rest of the apartment was set on fire, but Nestor dragged his friend out into the fire escape and pulled him down the first floor safely. He then dragged him with lots of effort for the next five blocks, out of the fire zone. Then a few hours later the war ceased.

When the battle concluded, he returned home, where he had a trauma for a week. His father comforted him, and told him of his half-blood identity. Nestor was reluctant at first, but then was forced to believe him after everything he saw. He was immediately taken to Camp Half-Blood by his father (who was told the Camp's location by Athena). Shortly after, his cousin Rey joined him at Camp, and the two realized they were siblings, which crept them out at first, but then was okay with it.

RP Example*: Maybe not

Any notes about your characters:
FC is Mark Hamill


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Re: Dawn of Justice

Post by Rick Sanchez on 6/1/2016, 7:34 am

THIS FORM IS FINISHED
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Re: Dawn of Justice

Post by Kendall on 6/2/2016, 7:44 pm

Is the weapon a god parent gift? If not, I'll only let the pencil turn into 1 weapon, not two.

Add some more to his personality.

LBC:
- Add some details about Nestor's life that don't have something to do with his cousin or how he got to camp, such as his life at school or with local friends.
- If Nestor was called via a cell phone, he would have attracted more monsters that way. (I also can't remember if cell phones even worked during the battle.)
- Would a Hyperborean giant really be able to fit in an elevator? I doubt it.
- How was a 9 year old strong enough to drag several people out of a burning building? (Nitpicking, but in the second to last paragraph you mention it's a house and not an apartment?)
- Where did he hide after the attack? The fire would surely have attracted the attention of other monsters in the area, if any.
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Re: Dawn of Justice

Post by Rick Sanchez on 6/6/2016, 9:26 am

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- The fighters of the battle called each other at least a billion times. Logically, the monsters would be so distorted one call in the middle of Manhattan can be considered one of the demigods' calls. Besides, it WAS merely the opening. No monster got through the defense lines yet. And yes, cellphones worked
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-Climax = final battle. It was when the forcefield around Manhattan would dissipate. A) Manhattan was already on fire. How would any monster notice a small fire of an apartment building, even if they're in the area B) The monsters already pushed through Fifth Avenue and surrounded the Empire State Building.
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Re: Dawn of Justice

Post by Kendall on 6/11/2016, 10:19 pm

Your weapon still says it has two forms, even though you only describe one.

LBC:
- Change the monster, I don't think a Hyperborean giant would be able to fit into an apartment building stairwell -- or maybe even the apartment in general, if we're talking a regular NYC apartment. 
- So he just sat around with his friend's body waiting for the battle to end? You'd think he'd find some shelter that's not burning for fear of more explosions/monsters, since he wouldn't exactly know what's going on at this point -- since he's not claimed and probably doesn't have the pleasure of being able to survey the battlefield and know what their end goal is.
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