Abigail Jones

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Abigail Jones

Post by Athena4405 on 6/9/2016, 12:09 pm

Name: Abigail Marie Mladenka Jones
Mortal Parent: Peter Latham Jones
God Parent: Athena
Date of Birth: March 28, 2003
Place of Birth: Texas, USA
Hometown: Texas, USA
Race/Ethnicity: Caucasian
Accent: Slight Southern
Skin Tone: Tan
Eye Color: Hazel
Hair Color: Brunette
Hair Length: Long
Height: 5'5
Weight: 120 lbs
Body Type: Unsure
Appearance: Slight Punk OR casual & Comfy
Weapon: Bow & Arrows
Armor: Standard Hunters
Pet(s): Wolf
Skills/Talents: Archery,  Reading, Swimming, Singing
Flaws: Loyalty
Strengths: Archery
Weaknesses: Pain, Loyalty
Likes: Archery, Reading, Family/Sisterhood
Dislikes: Pain, Mean People, All Most All Boys
Fears: Pain, Lose Sisterhood
Personality: Slight Recluse, Attempted Kindness, Slight Punk
Abilities: Archrey, Strategy
Powers: Wisdom, Weaving
Years as Hunter: 1 year
Life Before the Hunters: standard mortal life
Roleplaying Example: N/A
Notes: I love horses and wolves.I also, like most Athena kids, love to read.


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Re: Abigail Jones

Post by Kendall on 6/9/2016, 6:39 pm

Add some more to her appearance.

What are her bow and arrow tips made of?

- You need at least 3 flaws if you're not aiming for a reward on this form.
- Also, describe how her loyalty is a flaw.

Add a lot more to her personality.

- Is the archery an ability based on Athena's status as a war goddess? What about this makes it an ability?
- Neither of your powers are powers.

Her LBH needs to be at least 5 complete sentences long, including how she joined the Hunters (and got to camp, if she did so).

RP Example needs to be at least 5 complete sentences long. It's like writing a story from your character's point of view, including dialogue/thought, action, and exposition. For (a hastily written) example:
I kicked a bucket down the hill. It rolled and rolled until it hit my friend in the head. "Sorry!" I yelled down at her, wincing; she was definitely gonna yell at me when she got up.
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