Park Eunhye - Apollo

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Park Eunhye - Apollo

Post by lunamoonlight on 9/4/2016, 6:14 am

Name: Park Eunhye
Age: 14
Gender: Female
Eyes: Hazelnut
Hair: Brown
Height: 167cm
Body Type: Slim
Skin Color: Pale
God Parent: Apollo
Mortal Parent: Park Taehee
Country of Origin: Korea
Pets: Cat named Sugar
Talents: Singing, dancing and playing various type of music
Weapon**: Bow and Arrow named Clarion
Personality: Music is her life. She personally like hip hop and pop music and always dance to any songs. She's also have high confidence.
Flaws: Low on confidence, afraid of loosing friends
Abilities (must relate to god parent; optional): hypnotizing mortals by her singing or when she play an instrument
Powers (must relate to god parent; optional): Light, fire and healing
Life Before Camp*: She try to live like a normal mortal by joining a group and her life is full of music. Since she's a halfblood she always got attacked by monsters. A satyr who is one of her group mates protect her and brought her to Camp Half-Blood safely
RP Example*: I don't know why when I started to sing the audiences seems to follow my commands. That always creeps me out.
Any notes about your characters: Never gets sunburn, Fire resistence


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Re: Park Eunhye - Apollo

Post by Morgan Landry on 9/22/2016, 8:45 am

YES A KOREAN CHARACTER

*cough*

Hello c:

- I assume the metal she uses for her arrowheads is celestial bronze?
- Please develop her personality a bit more. Add a few other character traits.
- Wait... does she have high confidence or not?
- You need 3 flaws, which have to be personality flaws. For example, lazy, arrogant, conceited, envious, etc, are personality flaws. Afraid of losing friends is not a flaw. It's normal.
- Hypnosis a bit strong for an ability. How about never getting a sunburn, or knowing how to play any instrument without previous practice?
- Please develop on her powers. We don't allow fire for children of Apollo. About the light: how bright is it, how many posts can she use it for, how many posts cool down between uses? For the healing: what's the worst wound and sickness she could heal? How many posts cool down?
- You need 6 sentences for Life Before Camp.
- Oh you put never getting a sunburn in the notes. Move it up to abilities, please?
- No to fire resistance. Apollo has nothing to do with fire. That's something for children of Hephaestus.

Rest looks good!
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