Carla Harper, Daughter of Ares

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Carla Harper, Daughter of Ares

Post by tonywang50 on 9/11/2016, 8:58 pm

Name: Carla Harper
Age: 11
Gender: female
Eyes: dark blue
Hair: dirty blonde
Height: 4 feet and 2 inches
Body Type: buff
Skin Color: bronze
God Parent: Ares
Mortal Parent: Barbra Harper
Country of Origin: America
Pets: a raven named Victor
Talents: spear throwing, sword fighting
Weapon**: shield and sword named Mark and Polo
Personality: normally a quiet person, but if you angered her, you'll regret it.
Flaws: fear of jars and containers
Abilities (must relate to god parent; optional): can strike her sword on the ground so hard, hundreds ghost rise to defeat the enemy.
Powers (must relate to god parent; optional): can summon a army of ravens and vultures.
Life Before Camp*: Clara had a hard life, even for a half-blood. Her mother kicked her out when she was 6. Ever since then she sought out homeless shelters. She also trained herself. Then one day a stayr came to her and took her to CHB.
RP Example*: I ran through the forest. The hydra arrow that was pursuing me hit a tree behind me. I spotted a huge oak right next to me. I did the natural thing. I climbed the oak. Suddenly the tree shook. I looked behind me. The demon that shot the hydra arrow grinned. I said, " You should of known better, Arison.".
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Last edited by tonywang50 on 9/11/2016, 9:04 pm; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : I frogot I was talking about a daughter of ares, not hades.)

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Re: Carla Harper, Daughter of Ares

Post by Morgan Landry on 9/30/2016, 4:37 am

Hi!

- Ravens count as exotic pets, please edit it out.
- Weapons celestial bronze I assume?
- Please add more to the personality. List some traits!
- Fears don't count as flaws. Fears are more, being envious, arrogant, lazy, etc.
- No to both the power and the ability. Please try to think of something a bit more low-key.
- Training yourself doesn't really work as you need at least one opponent/training buddy to actually get the grips right.
- You need 6 sentences for Life Before Camp.

Rest looks good :)
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