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Jacqueline Peterson

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Age : 13
Registration date : 2016-10-17

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PostSubject: Jacqueline Peterson   Jacqueline Peterson Icon_minitime10/17/2016, 9:20 pm

Name: Jacqueline (Jackie) Peterson
Age: 11
Gender: Female
Eyes: dark brown
Hair: dark brown, black
Height: 5'0
Body Type: Gynaeoid
Skin Color: Warm Chocolatet
God Parent: Athena
Mortal Parent: Estelle (Stella) Peterson
Country of Origin: America
Pets: none
Talents: can act
Weapon**: bronze sword
Personality: Fierce. She's smart and you can be easily tricked by her. She has a short temper and loves to write. Don't mess with her.
Flaws: has a short temper
Abilities (must relate to god parent; optional): can fly, and control rain, lightning, and snow
Powers (must relate to god parent; optional): can fly, and control rain, lightning, and snow
Life Before Camp*: Jackie has been sent from school to school getting kicked out of each. She desperately wants to know about her father who her mother had made up. Monsters usually mess things up for her. Athena blessed her mom because she was smarter than most men. Jackie has never slept a good night. She is always getting secret messages.....
RP Example*:Jacqueline found herself at another boarding school for "troubled" children. She had recently been kicked out of her old school. She honestly hated schools. She had begged her mother to homeschool her. Jacqueline's mother would give her a sad smile and tell her why she needs to work at a "real" job.

Jacqueline walked up the front steps. Her mother walked closely behind. The place was huge and it was the place she would spend the rest of the school year with exceptions of holiday brakes. Jacqueline sighed. She didn't want to leave her mother, who smelled of chocolate. Mrs. Stricter, the principal, greeted them outside. Then she took Jacqueline in for a tour. Looking back at her mother, Jacqueline gave her mother a please-help-me look.

After the tour, Mrs. Stricter explained all the rules and there was a lotof rules. Jacqueline stood across Mrs. Stricter, not really listening. "If only dad were here." She thought silently in her brain.
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PostSubject: Re: Jacqueline Peterson   Jacqueline Peterson Icon_minitime10/18/2016, 10:56 am

Hi there Jacqueline!

- Children of the Big Three are not allowed unless you win or buy one, so please change the god parent.
- What's her sword made of?
- Add some personality traits to the personality section. Is she generous? Carefree? Aggressive?
- You need 3 flaws.
- Please edit the powers according to the new god parent.
- You need 6 sentences for Life Before Camp.

Rest looks good!

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for the RP invite


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(My mystery box prizes: 2 god parent gifts+2 slots+1exotic pet)
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PostSubject: Re: Jacqueline Peterson   Jacqueline Peterson Icon_minitime11/3/2016, 8:37 am

Please reply with "Edited" when you've made the changes. Otherwise, we don't know it's ready to be checked again. Also, please edit everything we ask you to.

Morgan Landry wrote:
- Add some personality traits to the personality section. Is she generous? Carefree? Aggressive?
- You need 3 flaws.
- Please edit the powers according to the new god parent.
- You need 6 sentences for Life Before Camp

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for the RP invite


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