Galend Chazem Son of Hephaestus

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Galend Chazem Son of Hephaestus

Post by Lainee Foester on 10/22/2016, 3:25 pm

Name:Galend Chazem
Age: 13
Gender: Male
Eyes: Light Hazel
Hair: Shaggy Brown hair
Height: 5, 2
Body Type: type A, or do you mean halfblood?
Skin Color: white
God Parent: Hephaestus
Mortal Parent: Noelle Harrison
Country of Origin: America
Pets: None
Talents: Building/ inventing, also a skilled swordsman
Weapon**: A bronze sword, about 2 1/2 feet long
Personality: Thoughtful, Logical and totally illogical at the same time, Fun loving, can be quiet but can be very talkative once you get to know him, extremely loyal

Flaws: too loyal, his friends are his destruction, but also his strength
Abilities (must relate to god parent; optional): can create almost anything out of everything
Powers (must relate to god parent; optional): nothing.... yet
Life Before Camp*: He had a normal childhood, till a styar found his and realized his potential.
RP Example*: Galend walked into his cabin. He looked around, observing his surrounding. Everywhere he looked he saw people drawing blueprints, wielding everything from armour to little trinkets. He couldn’t believe his eyes. Galend always new he was different, special, and know he new why. “I think I’m going to like it here” He said to himself, smiling.
Any notes about your characters: He is the balance of physical and mental strength

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Re: Galend Chazem Son of Hephaestus

Post by Kendall on 12/17/2016, 12:48 am

Body Type refers to the way he is physically built -- is he tall and lanky? Short and muscular? Things like that.

By bronze for his weapon, you mean Celestial bronze, yes?

Personality:
- "Logical and totally illogical at the same time" --> What does this mean?
- Add some more to this section.

Flaws:
- "his friends are his destruction, but also his strength" --> Elaborate more on this.
- Add another flaw.

Abilities/Powers:
- That ability is much too general; make it more specific. For example, maybe he can figure out how something works just by looking at it/touching it (although of course you should be reasonable and set limits; for example spacecraft and nuclear devices shouldn't be something he can figure out so easily).
- If you ever want to give him a power in the future, message an admin/approver to discuss this.

LBC:
- This section should be at least 5 sentences long.
- How did the satyr find him?
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