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Evan Powell

Post by abc123 on 11/20/2016, 5:45 pm

Name:Evan Powell
Age:14
Gender:Male
Eyes:Hazel
Hair:Blonde
Height:5'9
Body Type: Muscular
Skin Color: Dark brown
God Parent: Apollo
Mortal Parent: Taylor Powell
Country of Origin: Canada
Pets: Fred dog
Talents: can play 5 instruments (flute, oboe, trumpet, clarinet, and the Quebec fiddle)
Weapon**: Celestial Bronze bow and arrows
Personality: Strong, social, talkative, handsome and smart. Evan is honest, patient, observant, neat, and kind. Also Evan is generous, enthusiastic, faithful, trusting, and responsible.
Flaws: self absorbed, gets angry easy, and and gets upset if he makes a mistake.
Abilities (must relate to god parent; optional): Singing and talking to apollo's sacred animals.
Powers (must relate to god parent; optional): Healing the worst thing he can heal is a  3 inch Transverse fracture and a 6 inch flesh wound. Also Cursing people to talk in rhymes for 2 post 3 post rest between usage.
Life Before Camp*: I used to perform onstage with my mother. I would play a instrument and she would sing. I was the lead musician in marching band. I normally got B- and lower. I was never the most popular kid in school, but I still had a lot of friends. Then my life fliped. One day while I was practicing with my friend, Jackson a sayt, a huge rumble came out of nowhere. Then a huge Cyclops burst into my room. Jackson told me to run to New York and go to the empire state building and will be there. While I started to run I saw a group of saytrs who took down the Cyclops. When I got to the empire state building. A guy named Agrus was standing there and brought me to camp Half Blood.
RP Example*: Evan loves Camp Half-Blood. But there is some times when it can be tough. Like when he was playing capture the flag against Ares and Clarisse almost killed him with her electric spear. Or when he got lost in the woods. Those mrymeks are crazy things. But even after that Evan would not give camp Half Blood up for anything.
Any notes about your characters: in a relationship with Bailey Fawn son of Aristaeus


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Re: Evan Powell

Post by Kendall on 12/17/2016, 1:15 am

Talents: Any instrument? Is this an Apollo-related thing or does he just practice a lot of them? (I'm gonna say "any" is too much.)

Add more to his personality -- 3-4 medium-length sentences perhaps.

Add two more flaws.

Healing is a power, not an ability. Abilities are innate things that don't need to be active and don't take a large chunk of energy to use, like talking to your god parent's sacred animals.

Powers:
- For his healing, what's the worst thing he can heal?
- How long must he wait in between usages of his power in number of posts?

LBC:
- Add two more sentences.
- Elaborate more on why his "life flipped".
- How did he get to camp?

RP Example should be at least 5 sentences long.
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Re: Evan Powell

Post by abc123 on 12/19/2016, 10:21 am

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Re: Evan Powell

Post by Kendall on 12/26/2016, 7:23 pm

Add a lot more to his personality.

Powers:
- How bad can the broken limb be at most? (Ex: 3-inch long hairline fracture)
- What's the worst-sized flesh wound he can completely heal?
- How long does the rhyming curse last in number of posts?

LBC:
- Talk more about his life before the monster attack. How was his school life? Did he have many friends?
- I'm assuming Jackson is a satyr or another demigod?
- How did Evan escape the Cyclops if he burst into his room?
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Re: Evan Powell

Post by abc123 on 12/28/2016, 1:18 pm

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Re: Evan Powell

Post by Morgan Landry on 1/2/2017, 2:30 pm

Hi!
- I don't think "handsome" is a personality trait.
- Please list the animals he can communicate with :)
- Singing isn't an ability, more a talent.
- What's the cool down for the healing power?
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