Tera Phanel daughter of Athena member of the Hunt

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Tera Phanel daughter of Athena member of the Hunt

Post by abc123 on 11/21/2016, 9:52 am

Demigod:Greek
Name: Tera Phanel
Physical Age: 14
Gender:Female
Eyes:Grey
Hair: Redish Brown
Height: 5'9
Body Type: Lean and muscular
Skin Color: Light brown
God Parent: Athena
Mortal Parent: Edison Phanel
Country of Origin: United States of America
Pets: Timberwolf Hunter Hawk Bella
Talents: Makes awesome battle strategies
Weapon**: Celestial bronze bow and 24 arrows, and a celestial bronze dagger
Personality: Strong, fierce, stern, but logical and kind
Flaws: Always wants to do it her way. Also, she gets extremely angry and needs to be perfect.
Abilities (must relate to god parent; optional): Can weave the strongest nets out of some bad materiel
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): None
Life Before Hunt*: When Tera was born she was helping her father with plans to build a new storage room. She was always the know it all. Then, when she turned 9 a Chimera attacked and killed her dad. After the Chimera killed her dad a group of Saytrs supposed to be police men attracted the Chimera and brought Tera to the orphanage. Then, she was sent to an orphanage and met Sherman, a saytr- orphan. Sherman led Tera to CHB. Then on her 3rd year the hunters visited camp half blood. When they were playing Capture the Flag, she caught the hunters eyes since she made a strategy that almost won the game. So, the hunters asked her to join and she did.
RP Example*: The Hunt woke up and started to hike of. They been heading to camp half blood since Artimas went missing 3 days ago. Tera has been following a trail with strange prints. They think it is a trail to Artimas.  They stopped at a cave were the prints ended. They looked inside and saw a terrible site.
Any notes about your characters: None


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Post by Kendall on 12/17/2016, 1:06 am

Add more to her personality -- I'd recommend turning this into 3-4 medium-length sentences.

Abilities:
- What do you mean by the strongest nets? Even with bad materials?

LBH:
- "When Tera was born she was helping her father with plans to build" --> Build what?
- How did she survive a Chimera attack?
- Was Sherman posing as an orphan where she was sent after her dad's death?
- How old was she when she went to camp?
- I'm gonna say no to her going on a quest and meeting Artemis and the Hunters. You can say she met them when they were visiting camp though.
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Post by abc123 on 12/20/2016, 10:11 am

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Re: Tera Phanel daughter of Athena member of the Hunt

Post by Kendall on 12/26/2016, 7:17 pm

You still need to add more to the personality.

Abilities:
- You should probably rephrase this as "She can make strong nets with decent materials," since having bad material will vastly affect the quality of the net.

LBC:
- When she was born she was helping her dad build things? Or since she was born she was trying to help? Because I can't imagine a baby can do much to help.
- Talk more about her life before the chimera attack. Did she do well in school? Have many friends?
- How did she survive the chimera attack?
- Why did the satyrs not bring her to camp immediately after the attack?
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