Cross Henry son of Hephaestus

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Cross Henry son of Hephaestus

Post by CrossZone on 12/18/2016, 12:44 am

Name: Cross Henry
Age: 14
Gender: Male
Eyes: Brown
Hair: Brown
Height: 5' 9"
Body Type: Muscular
Skin Color: Tan
God Parent: Hephaestus
Mortal Parent: Chelsea Henry
Country of Origin: Untied States of America
Pets: none
Talents: building, skilled sword fighter
Weapon**: a celestial bronze Xiphos sword (like what riptide is)
Personality: Cross has a very humorous personality but can also be very serious at times. He is also best known for his strength and courage.
Flaws: He is very curious. He has been known to look in the most dangerous places just out of curiosity. He also doesn't know his own strength.
Abilities: Engineering,
Powers: Fire Powers (I don't know if that counts as a gift from Hephaestus or not. If it does then I'm ok without it)
Life Before Camp*: Cross had a normal life, or as normal as you could get when your a half-blood. He spent most of his time building random machines with spare parts he can find. He also liked to wander around town looking for stuff to spark his curiosity. That is until he was attacked by a Amphisbaena and his friend Josh saved him. After he killed the Amphisbaena Josh revealed he was a Satyr and took Cross to Camp Half-Blood.
RP Example*: After running for what seemed like miles he finally stopped and looked at his blade. His blade had monster guts all over it and all he had to think was "Yuck". Just then the monster came crashing through the trees and saw him. As the monster advanced Cross let his instincts take over. He jumped just as the monster spit acid. He flew over the acid bringing his sword down in an arc severing the monsters head from its body.
Any notes about your characters: If he is allowed fire powers he is immune to fire.

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Re: Cross Henry son of Hephaestus

Post by Kendall on 12/21/2016, 11:04 pm

Add more to his personality -- maybe 3 more sentences.

Flaws:
- How strong is he, that the second flaw would affect him much? Or is he just too aggressive?
- Add another flaw.

Abilities:
- Do you mean he's very good at engineering?

Powers:
- Fire powers are okay.
- What can he do with this?
- What are his limits? (such as largest thing he can make/shape out of fire, how long he can control the fire in number of posts, how hot the fire is at most, etc)

LBC:
- How old was he when he was attacked by the monster?
- When did he meet Josh?
- Describe the monster attack more. (I'm assuming you mean the mythological Amphisbaena and not a video game version, correct?)

Notes:
- Fire immunity would be an ability, so please add it to the Abilities section and add on a limit. (For example, he can withstand up to x degrees F or C. Since getting blasted by a rocket engine is a tad more intense than touching a hot oven.)
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