Talia Roth - Daughter of Bellona

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Talia Roth - Daughter of Bellona

Post by BriseisBailey5780 on 7/8/2017, 5:29 pm

Name: Talia Roth

Age: 17

Gender: Female

Eyes: Brown

Hair: Frizzy dark brown with blonde highlights at the bottom.

Height: 5'7

Body Type: Skinny

Skin Color: Dark

God Parent: Bellona

Mortal Parent: Anthony Roth

Country of Origin: Detroit, Michigan - USA

Pets: None.

Talents: Talia is good with all weapons she had time to practice with. She is best with a spear, but is pretty good with a sword, bow and arrows, daggers, etc. She is always excellent in hand-to-hand combat from Martial Art lessons when she was a kid and boxing. She also can make someone extremely nervous around her because of her steady stare, which some would call the Talia Glare.

Weapon**: Imperial gold spear named Virtus

Personality: Talia is always serious all the time. She never gives herself time to let loss and have fun. No one ever sees her smile and she is always and deep thought. Talia likes to keep busy, always training or thinking of battle plans. She can be pretty anti-social and doesn't talk with many people.

Flaws:  Talia is completely independent, which can be considered a good thing but she never asks for help and won't accept it. She believes she can do everything on her own. As mentioned earlier, she is anti-social and when people try to talk with her and usually just stares at them until they leave her alone. Talia also over thinks things a lot, making her make things overly complicated and hard for others to follow.

Abilities (must relate to god parent; optional): She is an excellent fighter and can make great battle plans. She knows a lot of war history and is an expert in all forms of warfare.

Powers (must relate to god parent; optional): Can curse a weapon for a short period of time to make it not work for the owner. She choices to Ex. it is to heavy to lift or feels like it's on fire (lasts for two posts and has to recharge for five posts). Can be resisted by any magically enchanted weapons. Also can manipulate someone's thoughts to make them more aggressive in a ten foot radius, meaning she the person would suddenly become more hostile and open with their anger until she leaves the room or her anger is gone. She barely ever uses it but she sometimes can't control it when she is angry and can make others angry (one use every five posts and lasts for two posts). Can be resisted by a strong mind.

Life Before Camp*:  Talia was taken away by Lupa when she was thirteen. Her father had his arm blown off in Afghanistan in am ambush and has been going through rehabilitation, so he wasn't around for most of the day. Talia skipped school (which was bully central) as much of the time she could without getting into trouble to go to boxing and MMA classes. She always knew she was different and loved the rush of fighting, so she decided to make that her life. She was attacked by some bad wind spirits one day and tried to fight them to no avail. She fought and eventually Lupa's wolves showed up right as Talia was about to be thrown into a busy street, where she was no doubt about to be run over. They said Lupa sent them and she could smell her as a demigod and Talia went with Lupa's pack right away. They trained her on the way to Camp Jupiter, giving her Virtus. Then Talia arrived at Camp Jupiter and has been there ever since.


RP Example*: Talia was walking through New Rome alone. There were people running around: Legacies, some of her fellow warriors, some retired people she knew, there kids. Talia let out a sigh as she walked into a coffee shop and ordered her favorite: plain black coffee. She liked the bitter taste; it woke her up. She turned and walked out of the shop, sipping her coffee as she walked the streets alone.

Any notes about your characters: Talia has never meet her mother, but still wants to make her proud. She also is pretty lonely since she doesn't really have any friends.


Last edited by BriseisBailey5780 on 7/12/2017, 4:30 pm; edited 5 times in total
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Re: Talia Roth - Daughter of Bellona

Post by Mason on 7/8/2017, 7:24 pm

Heyo, nice form.

For the second power, I'd say make the cooldown a little bit longer- do they just plain out get angrier or get angrier for a certain amount of time?

For the LBC, wouldn't the school have gotten worried and probably got police involved if she skipped school almost every day? I'm pretty sure her father could get in trouble for that.
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Re: Talia Roth - Daughter of Bellona

Post by BriseisBailey5780 on 7/8/2017, 7:28 pm

Fixed.
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Re: Talia Roth - Daughter of Bellona

Post by Mason on 7/8/2017, 8:47 pm

The powers can be resisted, right? Could you have a few conditions for where the first power could be resisted? (this is just to avoid it being too OP in RPing)
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Re: Talia Roth - Daughter of Bellona

Post by BriseisBailey5780 on 7/8/2017, 8:54 pm

Fixed the powers part.
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Re: Talia Roth - Daughter of Bellona

Post by Kendall on 7/11/2017, 4:46 pm

Powers:
- Add in a range for both powers (ex: person must be within x ft of her to be affected).
- Does she choose how the first power affects the weapon, or is it just random?
- How long does the anger last for her second power?
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Post by BriseisBailey5780 on 7/11/2017, 5:09 pm

Fixed.
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Re: Talia Roth - Daughter of Bellona

Post by Kendall on 7/12/2017, 3:15 pm

Powers:
- By "magical" do you mean "enchanted" weapons (like ones that can return to your pocket or can shoot fire or whatever)? Because technically anything that's CB/SI/IG can be counted as magical, so this would be mostly useless in that case.
- Add in a specific time limit for her second power.

Other than that you should be good.
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Post by BriseisBailey5780 on 7/12/2017, 4:30 pm

Edited.
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Re: Talia Roth - Daughter of Bellona

Post by Kendall on 7/12/2017, 4:38 pm

Approved. Your character has been assigned to the Second Cohort.
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