Lumi Bondevik

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Lumi Bondevik

Post by Lumi_Bondevik on 9/28/2017, 11:11 pm

Name: Lumi Bondevik
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Eyes: Indigo(or blue whatever you wanna call 'em)
Hair: Black
Height: 5'3
Body Type: Muscular, but fairly thin.
Skin Color: Pale
God Parent: Khione
Mortal Parent: Markell Bondevik
Country of Origin: Norway
Pets: none
Talents: Archery
Weapon: Prefers her bow or powers, but also uses a small daggers.
Personality: Cold, distant, kind(to an extent), usually antisocial,
Flaws: She can control her temper to an extent, but once she gets angry, she wont calm down until someone is hurt or she breaks something.
Abilities (must relate to god parent; optional): She's surprisingly good at building snow forts, but often doesn't have the time to. Archery is also one of her hobbies.
Powers (must relate to god parent; optional): Cryokinesis, immune to hypothermia, can turn to snow
Life Before Camp: She lived in Norway with her father until she was 7, when he made them move to northern Finland in fear of the Gods and monsters. He changed her name to Lumi, her original being Astrid. She learned to speak Finnish, Norwegian, and English. Though at age 10, her father began to suffer dementia. She became very distant after that, growing close to a group of Sámi people. As where she grew up was usually cold, all signs of her powers were ignored/brushed off due to climate.
RP Example: I sat in the snow, glancing around for any signs of life. Smoothing my skirt, I waited, the cold barely noticed compared to the shimmer of the ice.
Any notes about your characters: She can't turn to snow for more than a minute or she'l pass out and turn back, same goes for cryokinesis, though she can use that longer but will pass out if she uses it too much. Her immunity to hypothermia is subconscious and she can't turn it off.

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Re: Lumi Bondevik

Post by The Cheshire Cat on 11/29/2017, 11:00 am

-You need 3 flaws
-One flaw needs to be physical

-The emphasis one Archery, though nice, is not meant to be put in the abilities section.

-Put a limit on her powers i.e. how much she can control with cryokinesis
-She cannot be immune completely to the cold but she can tolerate extreme cold up to a certain degree, please put a limit to which it becomes uncomfortable for her.

-How did her father know about the monsters and gods? did Khione tell him?
-How exactly did she get to camp?
-This isnt necessary for approving but it may not be a bad idea to explain as to what Sámi people are.

-Please move these to additional statements in the Powers section of the form so people have an easier time reading it through and understanding the character.
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