Alexandria Daughter Of Apollo

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Alexandria Daughter Of Apollo

Post by Unrequitedlove on 4/27/2018, 7:31 pm

Name: Alexandria Mills
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Eyes: blue green
Hair: Red
Height: 5"6
Body Type: slim
Skin Color: white
God Parent: Apollo
Mortal Parent: Wendy Mills
Country of Origin: U.K.
Pets: Cat named Sylvia
Talents: Singing and poetry and art
Weapon**: celestial bronze spear
Personality: Kind, protective, Giggly, Romantic (As in the loves to take dates on picnics and such kind of girl), level headed. She has her bad days when she gets an encounter with the Ares kids since they never get along so well. That or when people destroy her music sheets and poetry just for fun she can snap like Clarisse.
Flaws: she is a little shy at times until you get to know and she also is not as willing to let people into her heart so easily either. Also she does have a temper when someone messes with her sacred poetry book her step dad gave her before he died, she is possessive of her things.
Abilities (must relate to god parent; optional):
Powers (must relate to god parent; optional): Using poetry and song to make people slur their words or not be able to talk for at least three whole 3 posts with a 5 post cool down
Priar camp life: She was put into a private school frome the age of 5 to the age of 10 by her mom and rich step dad who has since passed. they took her out when they found out she couldn't read like normal and they put her into regular school. when her mother noticed her poetry it was in greek so she knew that something was up since she could not read any other language very well. she sent her to get help but little did she know the person she had sent her to was a satyr named Owen who had discovered who she was and took her to camp half blood. her and her mom were super close but now she had to leave her mom behind

RP example

Alexandria or as most of her friends would call her "Alex" was working at the piano when she heard a noise. It sounded like someone had pulled another prank again and she was right. She went to investigate it and some camper chose to leave a box with a note on it and when she opened it a spider started to crawl out "I'm going to get whoever did this!" Amelia yelled then she walked off to her cabin with her unfinished work and set it in her nightstand drawer then lay down on her bed starting at the ceiling a bit upset by what she saw, much less what just happened. Only a few people knew she was deadly afraid of spiders and that didn't really help her much when people played pranks here at Camp Half Blood


Last edited by Unrequitedlove on 5/26/2018, 10:28 am; edited 8 times in total (Reason for editing : Took off WIP so you can see it. I hope the forms good now)
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Re: Alexandria Daughter Of Apollo

Post by Morgan Landry on 4/28/2018, 6:50 am

Heya!

Your form looks good, here's just a few things :)

- Owls are not really domesticated so they count as exotic pets. Please change it
- Fears are not really flaws. Flaws are more like, what makes her human? Is she bossy? Is she a gossip? Can she keep a secret? What's her "bad" side like?
- We changed the power limits from hours (not very RP-able) to posts. Eg, she can use her powers for 3 posts but needs 5 posts cool down before being able to use it again. Please edit accordingly :)
- Where's her Life before camp and the RP example?

Rest looks good!
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Re: Alexandria Daughter Of Apollo

Post by Mason on 5/10/2018, 10:59 pm

Hey! Just post 'Edited' after you do so, so the approvers know to check it.

Add one more flaw.

Also this is just me being nerdy and picky but Great Britain is technically three countries (England, Scotland, Wales).
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Re: Alexandria Daughter Of Apollo

Post by Morgan Landry on 5/11/2018, 6:57 am

I'm pretty sure UK is acceptable as a country - even if it's not really "united" right now :P (Also did you just forget Northern Ireland? ^^)
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