Demetria Turner ---- Apollo

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Demetria Turner ---- Apollo

Post by rosie4700 on 6/4/2018, 12:08 am

Name: Demetria (Demi)  Turner
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Eyes:  Amber
Hair: Dirty Blond
Height: 5'8
Body Type: Ectomorph
Skin Color: Light Tan
God Parent: Apollo
Mortal Parent: Arianna Turner
Country of Origin: Australia
Pets: A dog named Aussie.
Talents: Archery, music, and healing.
Weapon**: A Bow.
Personality: Is a very humble girl and does not think highly of herself. She has major trust issues due to pass experiences. At first she is very shy but if you earn her trust she is a very hyper, energetic person. She is a very smart and is very good at combat. She loves singing, dancing, and playing instruments.
Flaws: Self- Conscious and trust issues.
Abilities (must relate to god parent; optional): Musically talented. Very good at archery.
Powers (must relate to god parent; optional): Healing, bringing upon sickness and disease.
Life Before Camp*: Her mom owned a boarding house so she lived in it as well. At the age of 13 a monster, disguised as a human, came to the boarding house and at night killed everyone except her and her dog. Demi was able to run away and was homeless for about 2 months. To earn money she sang and preformed for the people. Eventually, a satyr found her, took her to New York by a  plane, and brought her to Camp Half-Blood.
RP Example*: Demi: *walks into mess hall ready for dinner*. Cabinmate: Hey Demi! How are you? Demi: *ignores cabinmate*. Cabinmate: Well, wanna go down to the beach with us? Demi: *seems frightened* N-n-no. Cabinmate: Why not?. Demi: I-I don't t-trust you. *shiver remembering past.* s-sorry. Y-you g-guys can g-go. Cabinmate: Your loss *walks away*.
Any notes about your characters: Can hold a grudge for a very long time.

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Re: Demetria Turner ---- Apollo

Post by Morgan Landry on 6/4/2018, 4:14 am

Hi!

- We don't allow unnatural eye colours like amber. Please change it to something else
- You need 3 flaws
- You'll need to be a bit more detailed about the powers. What exactly can she do? How much can she heal? What sickness and disease can she inflict on someone, and to what degree?
- Also, we have post limits for the powers, eg: Demi can heal someone's wounds for 3 posts, but needs 4 posts cool down before she can use that power again
- Your RP example is good but you need to write it in actual sentences, like you're writing a book. (So for example: "Demi walks into the mess hall, ready for dinner. One of her cabin mates waves at her, "Hey Demi! How are you?") Please edit

Rest looks good! :)
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