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Second character

Post by Louis Gali on 7/19/2018, 10:29 pm

Name: Neo Johnson
Age: 12
Gender: Male
Eyes: Lightning bleu
Hair: White with some gray
Height: 5'16
Body Type: skinny, fit
Skin Color: beige
God Parent: Goddess of the rainbow messenger of the gods, Iris
Mortal Parent: Ron Johnson
Country of Origin: California
Pets: none
Talents: Great runner
Weapon**: Iron spear
Personality: Shy
Flaws: His past
Abilities (must relate to god parent; optional): can run on rainbows and can change the color of rainbows
Powers (must relate to god parent; optional):can summon rainbows and can make an Iris message when ever he wants
Life Before Camp* Hard and awfull
RP Example*:
Any notes about your characters: friendly, likes to make friends

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Re: Second character

Post by Morgan Landry on 7/20/2018, 6:51 pm

Hi!
- Unnatural hair colours are not allowed. Please edit
- Greek demigods use celestial bronze for their weapons
- Please develop his personality
- Flaws are not his past trauma. Flaws are things like arrogance, low self-esteem, gluttony, selfishness, etc.
- You need post limits for the powers. Eg can summon a rainbow for 3 posts and needs 5 posts to cool down afterwards before being able to use that power again.
- You need 6 sentences for life before camp half-blood. What was his childhood like? How did he discover he was a demigod?
- You need a rp example.

Rest looks good :)
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