No dragons.

You MUST have at least 3 flaws.

Life Before CHB needs to be five sentences long.

You forgot RP Example.

No water-bending.

Kendall wrote:

You MUST have at least 3 flaws. Life Before CHB needs to be five sentences long. You forgot RP Example.

-I think you only have 4 sentenses on Life before CHB.
-You still don't have your RP example
-How does water bending relate to Athena?
-What is dagger and bow made out of?
-Poerty, reading, and reading aren't exactly flaws
-And howis her mortal parent a girl when your god parent is Athena?
-And I'm not sure but I don't think your pets can spit acid. I maybe wrong though.

Name:
Age:
Gender:
Eyes:
Hair:
Height:
Body Type:
Skin Color:
God Parent:
Mortal Parent:
Country of Origin:
Pets:
Talents:
Skills:
Weapon:
Flaws:
Powers(must relate to god parent):
Life Before CHB*:
RP Example*:
Any notes about your characters:

*=5 sentences long each.


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-Craftsmenship and wisdom aren't powers
-I don't think you can have an animal that spits acid
-That's not really role-play
-Your Life Before CHB should be more about how her life was, not really details of her life
-And please stop harrasing people to look at your character form

And how did she visit george washington?

Those aren't flaws.

Flaws are supposed to be BAD. Like too loyal, or murderous.

Your mortal parent is unknown but in your RPG says you visit your mortal parent often. Everything else is good.

approved

name:mary gorman
age:13
gender:girl
eyes:brown
hair:dirty blond with natural hightlights(a little wavy)
height:5'2
bodytype:skinning and pretty
skincolor:tan
godparent:thanatos
mortalparent:charlie gorman(he died, lives with her 'Aunt' natalia)
countyoforigin:california,usa
pets:n/a
talents:scaring,fighting
weapon:shield and sword
flaws:eavesdropper,anger management problems,quit,gothic
powers:sum in the dead four times a day 12 souldiers for summit/8 minutes if she goes over her limit she fades.shadow travel limit is 3 times a day from 12 miles to original spot.if she goes over the limit she fades....
life before CHB*:living in a small town in new york in an apartment going to junior hi school in brooklin.had 7 year old sister who died of canser and 15 year old brother who got in a car accident with his friends on the way back from a party that he wasnt saposed to go to.my moved to california again and dad went to navy over there in california.so i lived in new york for about four yeaars after mom and dad moved there was an earth quake there but they weere ok.then my brother and sister died and u was an only child living in new york with my aunt natalia for 4 years and then next thing i new i was here in camp half blood and the daughter of thanatos.
RPexample:i was in the hospital waiting for the answer that if my sister has canser. when the docter came out and said that my sister had canser and diabetes which is imposible to get that at the same time.he said she wasnt going to make for long just for about a week.we broke into tears and the next week she died!then i became goth and met elijah goldworthy at gothic horror house and we became best gothic buds for life.but our friend ship drift away.but a few years later we reuunited in CHB and i met her friend alice jakles.

Rp example needs to be 5 lines. (Sorry if im not supposed post about that certain matter in here)

So, she doesn't have a godparent? And what do you mean by 'invisible travel' for powers.

You need a parent and No invisable Travel more flaws
And Rita dont comnet on forms its the mods and staffs jobs

now is it ok

Change the powers

why

Becuase thats not a power ofr Thanatos or like any god so chnage IT

now

OH my god are you serious thats not a power Put a Thanatos power

fine

You didnt edit it

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh yes i did i put the ability to kill(freaky!!!!!!!!!!!)

Not a power

how bout what i put know