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LibbynuBff
 Number of posts: 11 Age: 13 Registration date: 2011-01-05
 | Subject: Character form 1/6/2011, 3:31 pm | |
| Name:Naomi Smith Age:12 Gender:Female Eyes:Light brown Hair:Light brown Height:5 ft Body Type:Slim and healthy Skin Color:Slight tan God Parent:Apollo Mortal Parent:Lisa Smith Country of Origin: America Pets: Talents:Art,writing,most of the time has perfect aim Weapon**:a celestial arrow with a sun symnbol on the bow Flaws:Clumsy, stubborn, and sensitve Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): can curse people to ryhme everything they say(last for about under 5 minutes)The curse does not work on other apollo kids. (May curse people only three times a day.) Life Before CHB*: Naomi Smith has previously been to many boarding schools(some of which were private schools).She lives in a tiny apartment in North carolina with noisy neighbors. She is an only child with a mother who never talks about her dad and how he mysteriously dissappeared. She has had a hard time in school with ADHD ,except when in gifted language arts. One day she noticed the strange custodian of her most recent school would always watch her, with that ugly goatee, and always wearing a big hat and pants. RP Example:I was running as fast as I could not able to look back for a second . What was that thing? I thought. I was almost up the hill.I heard a scream I stopped and turned around. I found that creepy custodian who I now knew was a satyr. He was on the ground unconscious. The cyclops bending over him sniffing him. I wanted a vacation not a wild goose chase, I thought. I took out the arrow and aiming for his eye I yelled "Eat this foot breath!" as I shot it and it hit its target with a satisfying shriek of pain as he threw his hands over his eye. I thought I had about a couple of minutes to grab goatman and drag him up the hill to the camp he was talking about.
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|  | | Simon the Fighter Loyal Member

 Number of posts: 2645 Age: 13 Registration date: 2011-01-03
 | Subject: Re: Character form 1/6/2011, 3:34 pm | |
| You need at least three flaws! Sorry! Fighter101
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|  | | Kyouya Moderator

 Number of posts: 12428 Age: 22 Registration date: 2010-04-09
 | Subject: Re: Character form 1/6/2011, 3:40 pm | |
| Five sentences for Life before CHB and RP example. RP example is like: I walk up to the stone and sigh. I pick it up. Life before CHB is the biography of your character. No healing characters. How long does the curse last? And you can't always have a perfect aim. ________________ white is satyrn the satyr mwahahahahahahha Be a nerd. Define a word. 8D i live in the TARDIS with other TARDIS inhabitants
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|  | | Simon the Fighter Loyal Member

 Number of posts: 2645 Age: 13 Registration date: 2011-01-03
 | Subject: Re: Character form 1/6/2011, 3:55 pm | |
| Your role play exsample should be under the before CHB. Where is it? |
|  | | Kyouya Moderator

 Number of posts: 12428 Age: 22 Registration date: 2010-04-09
 | Subject: Re: Character form 1/6/2011, 4:02 pm | |
| You're life before CHB are fragments. You're RP example is missing, like fighter said. Can people resist the curse? How many times a day can she curse people? ________________ white is satyrn the satyr mwahahahahahahha Be a nerd. Define a word. 8D i live in the TARDIS with other TARDIS inhabitants
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|  | | Kiryuu-Kun Role Playing Legend

 Number of posts: 14059 Age: 14 Registration date: 2009-12-26
 | Subject: Re: Character form 1/6/2011, 4:19 pm | |
| Your Life Before CHB are still fragments. |
|  | | Simon the Fighter Loyal Member

 Number of posts: 2645 Age: 13 Registration date: 2011-01-03
 | Subject: Re: Character form 1/6/2011, 6:42 pm | |
| you life before CBH has to be a short bio, not just a couple sentences about your characters life |
|  | | Loki Elite Staff Member

 Number of posts: 19861 Age: 16 Registration date: 2010-06-05
 | Subject: Re: Character form 1/6/2011, 6:42 pm | |
| Fighter, stop posting on character forms. ________________ Lakoda, daughter of Loki-15Warren, son of Aphrodite-18-AustralianMalia, daughter of Cocytus-16Verity, daughter of Nekhbet-15Vanessa, daughter of Serqet-17Cassandra, daughter of Iaso-17Rose, daughter of Demeter-16Anders, son of Ares-17Kyler, daughter of Morpheus-16Devan, daughter of Aegaeus-16-ItalianAlec, son of Hecate-16Topher, son of Notus-17-BritishGaebrie, daughter of Eirene-16Ashton, daughter of Hecate-16Laycie, daughter of Eros-16-French
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|  | | Kendall Administrator

 Number of posts: 33975 Age: 2010 Registration date: 2008-09-13
 | Subject: Re: Character form 1/6/2011, 8:12 pm | |
| There aren't any sorcerers on the site... Except for kids of Hecate. ________________ Kendall, Daughter of Ares Rosalie, Daughter of Aphrodite Claire, Daughter of Hecate Archer, Son of Hecate Stella, Daughter of Ouranos Meagan, Daughter of Gaea Aidan, Daughter of Pyriphlegethon Tempest, Daughter of Aeolus Nelly, Daughter of Apollo Benji, Daughter of Kuk Deja, Daughter of Odyne Mason, Son of Hermes Waldo, Son of Hermes Terra, Daughter of Tiki Lucy, Daughter of Somnus; First Cohort Dorian, Legacy of Mefitis; Third Cohort
You power-play, I god-mod. (Switching "god-mod" with "power-play" works too.)
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|  | | Kendall Administrator

 Number of posts: 33975 Age: 2010 Registration date: 2008-09-13
 | Subject: Re: Character form 1/14/2011, 3:23 pm | |
| The rhyming curse lasts too long. It should be under 5 minutes, since people don't like typing in rhymes.
A golden arrow is not allowed. All arrows must be made of Celestial bronze for children of Apollo. ________________ Kendall, Daughter of Ares Rosalie, Daughter of Aphrodite Claire, Daughter of Hecate Archer, Son of Hecate Stella, Daughter of Ouranos Meagan, Daughter of Gaea Aidan, Daughter of Pyriphlegethon Tempest, Daughter of Aeolus Nelly, Daughter of Apollo Benji, Daughter of Kuk Deja, Daughter of Odyne Mason, Son of Hermes Waldo, Son of Hermes Terra, Daughter of Tiki Lucy, Daughter of Somnus; First Cohort Dorian, Legacy of Mefitis; Third Cohort
You power-play, I god-mod. (Switching "god-mod" with "power-play" works too.)
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