[b][u]Demigod Form:

Name:Hannah
Age:11
Gender:female
Eyes:dark brown
Hair:dark brown
Height:5.1
Body Type:athletic
Skin Color:light tan
God Parent:Aphrodite
Mortal Parent:Justin Timberlake
Country of Origin:USA
Pets:doggy and a turtle
Talents:a good dancer and actress
Weapon**:bow and spear
Flaws:being selfish
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):she can make people fall in love for at least half the day
Life before CHB*:I used to live in a girls only boarding school for actresses.My dad was to busy so thats why I was living at a boarding school.My dads girlfriends were always so mean they acted like i wasn't human.
RP Example*:
Any notes about your characters:She's awsome funny cool and pretty

Life before CHB and RP example need to be 5 sentences each.
RP example is like:
I kicked the dog because he wouldn't stop barking.
It's like telling a story in first person.

You need three more flaws.

How many times a day can she make people fall in love with her? And how deeply in love?

Stunning people with prettiness I think is more of a trait..

5 sentences for RP Example and Life before CHB, like Crista said.

LIfe before CHB-I lived in a girls only boarding school for actresses. My dad was always too busy. One of his girlfriends suggested it because they said i was alein or too pretty, one even told me i looked like a creepy rag doll with no owner.Then one day my roomate Chealsee stole all my clothes said i was better off naked so i had to take my money and go shopping(wich i did not mind so much.)
RP example- i was singing a solo in a play when my teacher Mrs.Rockerz threw a sword at me my friend Amy screamed move so i did and avoided getting killed. Then all the girls grabbed there purses and handbags and were wacking Mrs.Rockerz in the face. i grabbed the sword,threw it her way then broke out of the front doors before i could get expelled. So i pretty much expelled myself. I was running down an alleyway when my old friend from the elementary school Zack. He turned out to be my school saytr.Its the beginning of the happily ever after.
3 more Flaws- wanting to change people, spends to much money, and she gets jealous often.
She can make people fall in love with anyone, if she is happy she can make people fall in love with her as much as she wants or untill she gets tired.When she is sick she can do it no more than 15 times.
She can make people fall in love with her until they faint cus they no its not possible to have her.
Power-if she sing to someone they will go under her comand and will do what she says.

She can make people fall in love with anyone, if she is happy she can make people fall in love with her as much as she wants or untill she gets tired.When she is sick she can do it no more than 15 times.
She can make people fall in love with her until they faint cus they no its not possible to have her.
Power-if she sing to someone they will go under her comand and will do what she says.-------------

There has to be a limit.
And that's not acceptable.
No charmspeaking.

She can make people fall in love with each other no more then 20 times a day and if shes in a bad mood no more than 10 tomes a day.
and for power she just wont have one.

Making people fall in love would be a power...

um never mind then

luv pupppy its better for your first charicter to create a low power chairricter. you get 5 free charicters. my first one was athena. (no powers) unless you count smarticles

Jessica, don't act like you know what your talking about, luvpuppy's first charrie can have cool powers.

ok sorrryyyy i was just saying its easier to learn the rules that way.

So is there anythin i hav to fix now or is it approved

Life Before CHB and RP Example need to both be 5 sentences long.

life before CHB-I went to an girls only bourding school for young actresses.My dad sent me there because he was to busy, and because all his girlfriends thought I was werid, and were jealous of me because I was so pretty.One even told me I looked like a creepy rag doll with no owner.I hated it at the bourding school cus everyone thought I was a stuck brat.Which was sorta true but they were only saying that because I was the only one who's dad had enough money for me to buy the designer jeans that I didn't even want in the first place.

RP example-I was singing a solo in a play when my subsitute teacher threw a knife at me.My friend screamed for me to move so I did and avodied being killed. My friend and a couple other girls grabbed their purces and started wacking the teacher with them.I grabbed one of the sword props and threw it at the teacher then ran threw the front doors.I ran down a allyway and ran smack into Zack my old friend from my old school.He ended up being a sytar and took me to Camphalfblood.It was a beginning of a happy ever after.

this better

Stunning people with prettiness is not a power. How in love are people with her, and for how long?

ok
um...... alot in love and at least one day

At the least? That's too long.

ok then at the most half a day

Edit it into your form.

I did

The one at the top?

YUP

Uh, no you didn't.

Sorry it didn't go thro it should hav now

So, uhm, tell me, does she have a power? I got lost mid-post during your convo with Crista and them....