Name: Valinor Gil-glalad
Age:14
Gender:Female
Eyes: Stormy gray
Hair:Silverish
Height:6'1''
Body Type: Muscular
Skin Color: Tan
God Parent: Athena
Mortal Parent:Reed Gil-galad
Country of Origin: Greece, Italy
Pets: A cat named Elendor.
Talents:Sword fighting
Weapon**: Two swords, and two long knives. They are all made out of Celestial Bronze.
Flaws: When she gets really angry she can loose sight of the truth and the enemy. A blood rage to kill. She hates working with others and trys to only work by herself, even if it means death.
Powers: none
Life Before CHB:Valinor lived with her dad for most of her life until the age of 7.She was abandoned in a forest by her dad because he was afraid of what she might become and he hoped that she would did.But a man found her tough her fight and live in the woods and how to survive. She eventually found her way to the camp.
RP Example*: Valinor wandered through the woods with one of her swords out and as she was walking she kept a good look out for anything that might give a hint of a monster. She suddenly stopped and looked around. A swish of the ferns made her turn around and crouch down low to try to avoid being seen. When the ferns stopped moving Valinor slowly backed up until she was in a clump of bracken. She scanned the ferns and her surroundings.
Any notes about your characters: She can be shy and keep to herself. She is also a good tracker.

Add another flaw.

It is fixed.

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Name: Thorn Greenleaf
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Eyes: Stormy grey
Hair: Short goldenish hair that he spikes.
Height: 5'11''
Body Type: Muscular
Skin Color: Tan
Greek God Parent: Notus
Mortal Parent: Jasmine Greenleaf
Country of Origin: Norman, OK
Pets: none
Talents: He finds stroms where ever he is,they seem to become severe around him.
Weapon**: He carries a long sword made out of Celestial Bronze
Flaws: He can get bossy in a storm. He is addicted to storm chasing. His dissensions can be very dangerous. He has a very week will and gives up easily.
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): Unknown
Life Before CHB*: His mother raised him in Norman, OK, and has taught him about his past. He was always interested in storms and became a passion later in life. At the age of 6 a tornado came through his town and he ran outside to watch it, that tornado never came close to him but he felt drawn to it. He got his drivers license at the age of 14. Then Thorn left home and went on a storm chance that lead him to Camp half blood.
RP Example*: I walk through the tall grass of the plans of Oklahoma. Every so often I look to the south and watch the clouds form over the horizon. Then I look away and foces on my task ahead of me. I told myself that the new storm had to wait but I keep looking back at it longingly. I sighed and continued to walk in the grass.

Add another flaw.

Ok.

I think your new flaw can be put under the "bossy" flaw.

Ok, I think it is fixed now.

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Name: Anrina Arabianea
Age:11
Gender: Female
Eyes: Deep blue
Hair: Long Dark brown hair.
Height: 5'7''
Body Type:Slender and agile
Skin Color:Olive/tan
Greek God Parent: Acheron
Mortal Parent: Kayla Arabianea
Country of Origin: Indiana
Pets: no
Talents:none
Weapon**: two small knives that are Celestial Bronze
Flaws:She hates people and likes to be alone. She is very tuchy and quick to anger. She has a blood rage part of her.
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): She can cause pain in others( Emotional or physical) . But the pain come from the last wound that they had in their life.People can resist if they have a strong mind and how bad the wound was. The pain varies depending how bad it hut the first time.She can olnly do this if she is in danger or extremely angry. But she is also limited to physical pain 3 times a day, and 4 times for emotional.The pain can last up to 3 min. because she is not strong enough to do any thing more than that. The power drains her strength.
Life Before CHB*: She lived with her mother her whole life and was home schooled until she moved to NY. Then she had to go to public school, where she was bullied. She was always a loner and she got into allot of trouble. A boy in her school liked her but every time they passed each other she gave him a hateful look. She did find a few friends but that is all. At the age of 10 she was sent to CHB.
RP Example*: I look around and sighed. Then I hid myself in the shadows of the evening and tried to go to sleep. But the thought of the boy was still in my mind. I suddenly got angry and thought of pain. I hoped his last wound was better than a paper cut, because I wanted him dead. Then I thought of my mother and I held back a teer.

I'm not sure if the power is okay, but I'll assume it is unless an admin says otherwise.
How painful is the pain?
Can people resist?
How long does it last?
How many times a day can she do it?

Can you put your other two characters in your signature? (If you don't know how, PM me and I'll talk you through it.)

Ok, I shall fix that.

Approved.