Sorry My Character is sooooooooooooooooo Horrible!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm new at this.....

Name: Kaitlyn Rosée Goutte ( Means Dew Droplet)
Age: 11
Gender: Female
Eyes: Silvery
Hair: Black
Height: Prob 6 foot 4
Body Type: Very Slim
Skin Color: Changes during sun light most of the time copperry
God Parent: Ares
Mortal Parent: Felicia Goutte
Country of Origin: France
Pets: A fish that she puts in her pocket in a plastic bag named Narmy
Talents: Singing Arhery Swimming Charriot-riding
Weapon**: Her voice , one fake nail , and her glasses
Flaws: Thinkning that she can change others and being TOO nice, Tries to stop fights and ends up getting in the middle of it
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): I don't know what Are's powers are if he has one thats hers
Life Before CHB*: She was looking for her twin sister when she bumped int alot of monsters. Her step dad and mom left her for a trip. Eveyone said her sister was dead, but she did not want to believe it. Now, she is in search of her sister, and she won't stop until she finds her.
RP Example*: I was searching everywhere, no food, no one to have. But, I didn't care. I would soon have someone to llift my spririt up. My sister. She is the nicest person you could ever meet. But me, well I am just the... skinniest person you could ever meet. I will find her sooner or later though. We both have shiny black hair. Silvery eyes. And she has the greates most happiest smile ever.Thats why I am looking for her. To make me smile. Then suddenly, I saw someething. A foodcourt in the middle of nowhere. I think I had a few dollars left in my pocket --with my goldfish Narmy--. It was time to NOT starve to death.
Any notes about your characters: Her satyr thought she would be a child of Apollo. With her voce sihe can get anyone to do anything for her. Her fake nail grows into a sword. And her glasses lets her see what people arre thinking

Add two more flaws.
That 'power' isn't a power, it's a talent.
Your life before CHB has to be 5 sentences long.
An RP example is like telling a story in your character's point of view. (Example: I walked to the beach, feeling tired. I laid on the sand and fell asleep.)
Your RP example also needs to be 5 sentences long.

I don't see how one fake nail and her glasses are weapons.

Her nail turns into a sword and her glasses lets her see what people are thinking

I don't think we can allow those glasses if they do things like that.

Plus, the thing about her voice... You can say she's persuasive, but not phrased like that.