Demigod Form:

Name: Gabriel Frost
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Eyes: Ice Blue
Hair: Black
Height: 5'7'
Body Type: lean, athletic
Skin Color: olive
God Parent: Chione
Mortal Parent: Lucas Andrew Frost
Country of Origin: Portugal
Pets: A Siberian Husky named Ace, His eyes are different colored (one Ice blue, the other Ocean blue)
Talents: Swimming, Running, Soccer, Snowboarding, Hiking
Weapon**: Celestial Bronze Dagger named Frost Bite
Flaws:Guilt, Anger, Over-Confident
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): Able to summon Snow and ice (can make it snow,for 20minutes). Ice shards are the size of a baseball bat, can summon 10 per hour. He also can summon the ice shards. He can use the ice to heal minor wounds and by minor cuts or gashes (3 inch cut length) Immune to cold temperatures (10 Degrees and under)


Life Before CHB*: Lived with his dad in a small town near Mount Hood in Oregon, USA. For the age of 6, Gabriel's father Lucas new he was special. At the age of 6, Gabriel was snowboarding with the best. Lucas knew their was something wrong also. At age 10, Gabriel feel into a frozen lake. upon being pulled out of the lake (the water was -20 degrees) he came out perfectly fine. The doctors were baffled, they though he would have at least some hypothermia. At the age of 11 Gabriel and his father started to hike mountains. At the age of 12 Gabriel and his father had climbed every mountain except Mount Everest. They expected it to take about 10 days to climb this mountain completely. On day 5 something unexpected happened. His father had fell on ice and feel down and landed on his head. Gabriel knowing his father was almost dead, decided the fastest way to save his father was to climb to the top and send off a flair. It took Gabriel 3 hours to reach the top. It felt as if he was gliding up the mountain. When he reached the top it was cloudy. He had prayed and wished for the snow clouds to disappear and as he opened his eyes the skys were clear. He sent of his flair and 24 hours he found out he was to late. This angered Gabriel and haunts him till today. He was sent of to a school near his aunt in Manhattan. That's when the attacks started and when he found Camp Half Blood on complete accident. (i have the rest of the story but i don't want to keep dragging on )


RP Example*: I hopped on to the train as i normally do after the school day. I happened to be the only one on the train except the one old man in the back of the train car. I reached my stop in long island, i was spending the weekend with my best friend, Adam. At first i though it was strange that the old man followed me half a mile down the street. I glanced over my should to see him less than 3 steps away from me.... no way he could walk that fast! i started to run not even considering what he could want... i looked back while i was running and that was probably my first of many mistakes. The man was now a horse.. or maybe not a horse with a man's torso.. AHHHHHHHHH i screamed.. i tripped and landed face first into a pile of leaves.. this think is right on my tail and now my ADHD has to kick in... GREAT.. I got up not even looking back.. I ran to the edge of the forest.. I was in a dead end.. Great i though this must be the end.. Ill see you soon dad i though to myself.. It picked me up and out of nowhere a silver arrow pierced its shoulder. . and thats when i passed out as four beautiful girls ran forward with shimmering silver bows. . . . .


Any notes about your characters: He feels guilty about the death of his father and this angers him. That is his tragic Flaw. Ace is not with Gabriel when he gets into CHB he goes and brings him to camp after he is there for a week. Ace lived with Gabriel in a small apartment in new york after his fathers death.

Please let me know on what i can change to make better. Thank You!!!!

Add another flaw. what do you mean by "immune to cold temp"? and how much snow/ice can he summer per day?

He can survive in extremely cold temperatures he can summon snow and ice, whenever as long as its not much. he can make it snow and he can create ice shards.

Beleives his father death was his fault is not really a flaw, so add another one. How cold of temps can he survive in and for how long? How much is "not much"? How long/heavy can he make it snow and how many ice shards can he make and how big are they? The more exact the measurements are the less we will have to do this, lmao

Edited and he is immune to extremely cold temperatures (5 degrees Fahrenheit and below)

Most powerful thing he can do with the ice/snow? Or would that just be summoning the ice shards?

He can create ice under his feet so he can glide in the air. He also can summon the ice shards. He can use the ice to heal minor wounds. and by minor i mean like a cut or gash (3 inch cut lenght)

So by gliding, do you mean basically flying on ice? If so.... ice doesn't float.

okay cross that out, like as in he can form ice on the ground and glide over.

How much ice would you say he can form on the ground at most?

alot, sorta like iceman from x-men, he points at the ground and he can make ice appear and he can glide over it.

Specifically, how much? Like a 20 ft by 20 ft area? He can't do an infinite area. The ice does melt in time, correct?

50ft by 50ft. yes it melts depending on how thick he puts it down. Thick =3hours to melt, Medium Thickness =1 hour, Little Thickness =30min

Approved.

Name: Violet (no last name cause she does not know who her mom was)
Age:15
Gender: Female
Eyes: blue
Hair: Red, wavy
Height:5"4"
Body Type: Skinny
Skin Color: olive
God Parent: Aeolus
Mortal Parent: none (she never knew her mom)
Country of Origin: does not know
Pets: A female white eagle that has blue eyes, named angel
Talents: Singing, Running, Flying
Weapon**: 2 CB swords about 1ft long in length.. each has a white and violet ribbon on the hilt..
Flaws: Easily scared, she would do anything to save a friend, sensitive about death
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): She can fly (250ft, for 20minutes at a time, she can fly 5 tines a day),, She IS really fast because she can manipulate the winds (the winds help her causing her to be able to run very fast, up to 25mph, she can do this 5 times a day for 20minutes at a time) and she can create mini storms about 10ft high 5th wide (storms include: hurricane, tornado, whirlwind, gusts-- she can create 10 storms a day and they last for 10-15 minutes each depending on the storm-- they can destroy a 1 story hous/ injure a grown man-- The gusts and whirlwinds are her week attacks to basically push away the attacker (They last for 15min, and can go from 10mph to 20mph depending on the target(she can control where they go, they do not go where they please)) --Her hurricane is a category 1 which is enough to destroy a cabin lasts for 10min-- Her tornado's are considered F1's, lasts 10min) Her tornadoes and Hurricanes do about the same damage (she can control where they go, they do not go where they please)



Life Before CHB*:She wandered the streets from town to town. Until one day someone came up to her and told her that he was going to take her somewhere safe. A place where she belonged. She trusted him because he looked so familar. The guy took her to CHB where he revealed he was a saytur who had been watching her for some time because she was special..

RP Example*:I walked into camp and the first thing i wanted was some food. I walked to the mess hall and picked up a plate and helped myself. I have not had a good home cooked meal in so long. I pick up a portion of my plate and put it in the offering pile and pray asking to be claimed.. A couple minutes later a holographic image of the wind appeared over my head.. i looked down and gasped i was in a long white dress with my white wings out.. the people around me gasped.. i blushed.. someone said Congrats your dad is Aeolus!

Any notes about your One of her flaws is she is sensitive about death.. she does not like hearing that people died cause she thinks she could have saved them.She has an English accent, she thinks she is from England but she is not sure since she cant remember anything from her childhood.

If her god parent is the god of the winds, she cannot have healing powers.
No shape-shifting, which includes wings.
Protection shield? Please explain.

I want her to be able to fly and heal is there and god that would be okay to use with those to powers??

And she was born with wings! Her dad minions have wings

Don't double-post please.

And she can fly, she just can't have wings. I don't think there is a god that will let you do both, however.

Okay sorry about that!! Okay umm is there any other type o power a daughter of aelous could have??

Flying, controlling the winds... Something along those lines. And make sure they have limits.

She IS really fast because she can manipulate the winds and she can create mini storms about 10ft high 5th wide (storms include: hurricane, tornado, whirlwind, gusts)


Is that okay??

Be as creative as you want, just edit it into your form and we'll go from there.

EDITED

With the powers: How far can she fly a day? How does she make a protection shield? Do you mean she like runs fast because she has the winds helping her? How many times a day can she make those "mini storms" and how long do they last?