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Steve Rogers Loyal Member

 Number of posts: 2751 Age: 16 Registration date: 2011-09-09
 | Subject: my character 9/9/2011, 10:12 pm | |
| Name:Trevaus Grey Age:14 Gender:Male Eyes:Blue Hair:blonde Height:5' 4" Body Type: muscualar from surfing Skin Color:tan God Parent: Triton Mortal Parent:Teresa Grey Country of Origin:U.s. Pets:Dog,grace stays with mortal parent Talents:Surfing Weapon:Necklace morphs into surf board when it touches water and morph into shield when put on wrist. Also a trident necklace turns in to CB sword show his loyalty to Poseidon and his father Flaws:Cant stay on land for more then a month with contact with the sea is afaird to lose loved ones and is afaird of heights Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):can breath underwater for 2 hours and can summon sea life 5 times a day Life Before CHB*:He Lived with his mom in Ny for 13 years. Got in trouble in school alot ended up getting expleded. After that the only time to be himself was when he was surfing. then one day while surfing he was caught in a storm and was swept out to sea. When he woke up he was in CHB. RP Example*:I could feel my life weaken.I summon my shield. and use it as a sled to slide down the hill. i ditch the shield and run to the sea. I can feel myself die. alone with out her. who ever she was. I reach the sea. I'm in control now..... Any notes about your characters:is sometimes visted by a strange female ghost. she tell him that one day they will meet...
Last edited by trevorst on 9/11/2011, 5:51 pm; edited 9 times in total |
|  | | Kendall Administrator

 Number of posts: 33975 Age: 2010 Registration date: 2008-09-13
 | Subject: Re: trevorst's characters 9/9/2011, 10:18 pm | |
| We don't allow children of Poseidon. Triton would be a good substitute for him, though; Triton's kids basically have weaker versions of Poseidon demigods' powers. ________________ Kendall, Daughter of Ares Rosalie, Daughter of Aphrodite Claire, Daughter of Hecate Archer, Son of Hecate Stella, Daughter of Ouranos Meagan, Daughter of Gaea Aidan, Daughter of Pyriphlegethon Tempest, Daughter of Aeolus Nelly, Daughter of Apollo Benji, Daughter of Kuk Deja, Daughter of Odyne Mason, Son of Hermes Waldo, Son of Hermes Terra, Daughter of Tiki Lucy, Daughter of Somnus; First Cohort Dorian, Legacy of Mefitis; Third Cohort
You power-play, I god-mod. (Switching "god-mod" with "power-play" works too.)
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|  | | Steve Rogers Loyal Member

 Number of posts: 2751 Age: 16 Registration date: 2011-09-09
 | Subject: Re: trevorst's characters 9/9/2011, 10:20 pm | |
| ok thanks |
|  | | Steve Rogers Loyal Member

 Number of posts: 2751 Age: 16 Registration date: 2011-09-09
 | Subject: Re: trevorst's characters 9/9/2011, 10:21 pm | |
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|  | | Kendall Administrator

 Number of posts: 33975 Age: 2010 Registration date: 2008-09-13
 | Subject: Re: trevorst's characters 9/9/2011, 10:30 pm | |
| Don't double-post.
Are his weapons Celestial bronze?
How many times a day can he use his powers, and for how long? How much sea life can he summon, and what's the biggest sea animal he can summon? ________________ Kendall, Daughter of Ares Rosalie, Daughter of Aphrodite Claire, Daughter of Hecate Archer, Son of Hecate Stella, Daughter of Ouranos Meagan, Daughter of Gaea Aidan, Daughter of Pyriphlegethon Tempest, Daughter of Aeolus Nelly, Daughter of Apollo Benji, Daughter of Kuk Deja, Daughter of Odyne Mason, Son of Hermes Waldo, Son of Hermes Terra, Daughter of Tiki Lucy, Daughter of Somnus; First Cohort Dorian, Legacy of Mefitis; Third Cohort
You power-play, I god-mod. (Switching "god-mod" with "power-play" works too.)
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|  | | Steve Rogers Loyal Member

 Number of posts: 2751 Age: 16 Registration date: 2011-09-09
 | Subject: Re: trevorst's characters 9/9/2011, 10:34 pm | |
| oh srry um yea its clestrial bronze 5 times a day no bigger than a shark he can summon more when hes older |
|  | | Kendall Administrator

 Number of posts: 33975 Age: 2010 Registration date: 2008-09-13
 | Subject: Re: trevorst's characters 9/9/2011, 10:35 pm | |
| How many more? And how long do the animals stay with him before they have to go?
And I hope they're restricted to the sea. :/ ________________ Kendall, Daughter of Ares Rosalie, Daughter of Aphrodite Claire, Daughter of Hecate Archer, Son of Hecate Stella, Daughter of Ouranos Meagan, Daughter of Gaea Aidan, Daughter of Pyriphlegethon Tempest, Daughter of Aeolus Nelly, Daughter of Apollo Benji, Daughter of Kuk Deja, Daughter of Odyne Mason, Son of Hermes Waldo, Son of Hermes Terra, Daughter of Tiki Lucy, Daughter of Somnus; First Cohort Dorian, Legacy of Mefitis; Third Cohort
You power-play, I god-mod. (Switching "god-mod" with "power-play" works too.)
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|  | | Steve Rogers Loyal Member

 Number of posts: 2751 Age: 16 Registration date: 2011-09-09
 | Subject: Re: trevorst's characters 9/9/2011, 10:36 pm | |
| yea oh course they are no more than 5 can be summoned what do you mean by how many more???? |
|  | | Kendall Administrator

 Number of posts: 33975 Age: 2010 Registration date: 2008-09-13
 | Subject: Re: trevorst's characters 9/9/2011, 10:37 pm | |
| What will be his maximum for his entire life?
And how long do they stay with him? ________________ Kendall, Daughter of Ares Rosalie, Daughter of Aphrodite Claire, Daughter of Hecate Archer, Son of Hecate Stella, Daughter of Ouranos Meagan, Daughter of Gaea Aidan, Daughter of Pyriphlegethon Tempest, Daughter of Aeolus Nelly, Daughter of Apollo Benji, Daughter of Kuk Deja, Daughter of Odyne Mason, Son of Hermes Waldo, Son of Hermes Terra, Daughter of Tiki Lucy, Daughter of Somnus; First Cohort Dorian, Legacy of Mefitis; Third Cohort
You power-play, I god-mod. (Switching "god-mod" with "power-play" works too.)
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|  | | Steve Rogers Loyal Member

 Number of posts: 2751 Age: 16 Registration date: 2011-09-09
 | Subject: Re: trevorst's characters 9/9/2011, 10:39 pm | |
| oh srry forgot that one 20 mins max near the peak of his life id say 15 maybe more i doubt he survive that long...lol
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|  | | Kendall Administrator

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 | Subject: Re: trevorst's characters 9/9/2011, 10:42 pm | |
| Life Before CHB must be complete sentences.
Add two more flaws.
And who exactly is the ghost? ________________ Kendall, Daughter of Ares Rosalie, Daughter of Aphrodite Claire, Daughter of Hecate Archer, Son of Hecate Stella, Daughter of Ouranos Meagan, Daughter of Gaea Aidan, Daughter of Pyriphlegethon Tempest, Daughter of Aeolus Nelly, Daughter of Apollo Benji, Daughter of Kuk Deja, Daughter of Odyne Mason, Son of Hermes Waldo, Son of Hermes Terra, Daughter of Tiki Lucy, Daughter of Somnus; First Cohort Dorian, Legacy of Mefitis; Third Cohort
You power-play, I god-mod. (Switching "god-mod" with "power-play" works too.)
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|  | | Steve Rogers Loyal Member

 Number of posts: 2751 Age: 16 Registration date: 2011-09-09
 | Subject: Re: trevorst's characters 9/9/2011, 10:44 pm | |
| It is his sister and ok _fixed |
|  | | Kristal Meth Third in Command

 Number of posts: 5563 Age: 16 Registration date: 2008-09-13
 | Subject: Re: trevorst's characters 9/10/2011, 12:14 am | |
| What do you mean by "obsessed"? And does he not know it is his sister? and life before CHB still isnt really a paragraph, you just have random facts in sentence format ________________ Kristal, Daughter of Ares, 15 Gemma, Daughter of Aphrodite, 17Mandy, Daughter of Demeter, 16Tullia, Daughter of Aeolus, 15Kripa Rashi, Daughter of Iaso, 16Cloe, Daughter of Gaea, 13Henry, Son of Eros, 12FOLLOW ME ON TWITTER AND TUMBLR (: KristalMarie101 Read my stories on FanFiction (: KristalWhitehead| Spoiler: | | | 
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|  | | Steve Rogers Loyal Member

 Number of posts: 2751 Age: 16 Registration date: 2011-09-09
 | Subject: Re: trevorst's characters 9/10/2011, 8:13 am | |
| no he doesnt know who she is he's obssesed with finding out who it is -edited |
|  | | Kendall Administrator

 Number of posts: 33975 Age: 2010 Registration date: 2008-09-13
 | Subject: Re: trevorst's characters 9/10/2011, 10:22 am | |
| How obsessed is he? If it's like a minor obsession, like doing research on her but dropping it then starting again, it's not really a flaw. Try adding another one. ________________ Kendall, Daughter of Ares Rosalie, Daughter of Aphrodite Claire, Daughter of Hecate Archer, Son of Hecate Stella, Daughter of Ouranos Meagan, Daughter of Gaea Aidan, Daughter of Pyriphlegethon Tempest, Daughter of Aeolus Nelly, Daughter of Apollo Benji, Daughter of Kuk Deja, Daughter of Odyne Mason, Son of Hermes Waldo, Son of Hermes Terra, Daughter of Tiki Lucy, Daughter of Somnus; First Cohort Dorian, Legacy of Mefitis; Third Cohort
You power-play, I god-mod. (Switching "god-mod" with "power-play" works too.)
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 | Subject: Re: trevorst's characters 9/10/2011, 4:48 pm | |
| all right sounds good edited |
|  | | Elleon Elite Staff Member

 Number of posts: 19417 Age: 16 Registration date: 2010-03-13
 | Subject: Re: trevorst's characters 9/10/2011, 8:50 pm | |
| For how long can he breathe underwater? ________________ Jazmine/Hades Veshtov/Hecate Marcus/Apollo Ellie/Aceso Toph/Geb Zayden/Anubis Antony/Minerva(3rd) Kelli/Chione Jacqueline/Hecate Carter/unclaimed Gabriel/Adikia
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|  | | Steve Rogers Loyal Member

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 | Subject: Re: trevorst's characters 9/10/2011, 8:51 pm | |
| 2 hours should i put that in?
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|  | | Elleon Elite Staff Member

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 | Subject: Re: trevorst's characters 9/10/2011, 8:53 pm | |
| That would be preferred, yes. ________________ Jazmine/Hades Veshtov/Hecate Marcus/Apollo Ellie/Aceso Toph/Geb Zayden/Anubis Antony/Minerva(3rd) Kelli/Chione Jacqueline/Hecate Carter/unclaimed Gabriel/Adikia
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|  | | Steve Rogers Loyal Member

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 | Subject: Re: trevorst's characters 9/10/2011, 8:56 pm | |
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|  | | Kendall Administrator

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 | Subject: Re: trevorst's characters 9/11/2011, 10:27 am | |
| I'm not sure the small of his back would be a flaw. A weak spot in battle maybe, but everybody can have weak spots. ________________ Kendall, Daughter of Ares Rosalie, Daughter of Aphrodite Claire, Daughter of Hecate Archer, Son of Hecate Stella, Daughter of Ouranos Meagan, Daughter of Gaea Aidan, Daughter of Pyriphlegethon Tempest, Daughter of Aeolus Nelly, Daughter of Apollo Benji, Daughter of Kuk Deja, Daughter of Odyne Mason, Son of Hermes Waldo, Son of Hermes Terra, Daughter of Tiki Lucy, Daughter of Somnus; First Cohort Dorian, Legacy of Mefitis; Third Cohort
You power-play, I god-mod. (Switching "god-mod" with "power-play" works too.)
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|  | | Steve Rogers Loyal Member

 Number of posts: 2751 Age: 16 Registration date: 2011-09-09
 | Subject: Re: trevorst's characters 9/11/2011, 4:19 pm | |
| ok any ideas would be amazing thanks!! |
|  | | Elleon Elite Staff Member

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 | Subject: Re: trevorst's characters 9/11/2011, 5:29 pm | |
| Add another flaw, and just think of it on your own. ________________ Jazmine/Hades Veshtov/Hecate Marcus/Apollo Ellie/Aceso Toph/Geb Zayden/Anubis Antony/Minerva(3rd) Kelli/Chione Jacqueline/Hecate Carter/unclaimed Gabriel/Adikia
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 | Subject: Re: trevorst's characters 9/11/2011, 5:50 pm | |
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|  | | Elleon Elite Staff Member

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 | Subject: Re: trevorst's characters 9/11/2011, 6:01 pm | |
| Approved. ________________ Jazmine/Hades Veshtov/Hecate Marcus/Apollo Ellie/Aceso Toph/Geb Zayden/Anubis Antony/Minerva(3rd) Kelli/Chione Jacqueline/Hecate Carter/unclaimed Gabriel/Adikia
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