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Confuzzled Senior Member

 Number of posts: 1907 Age: 14 Registration date: 2011-11-11
 | Subject: Kataro 11/11/2011, 5:02 pm | |
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Name: Kataro (No last name) Age:13 Gender: Male Eyes: Red Hair: Black Height: 5'10" Body Type: Semi-Muscular (Not totally buff) Skin Color: Pale caucasian God Parent: Hephaestus Mortal Parent: N/A Country of Origin: America Pets: None (Except for creations and creatures he meets in the wild) Talents: Creating spectacular mechanisms Weapon**: His creations. His father also provided him with a supply of Celestial Bronze to make special weapons and machines. Flaws: He has trust issues, he is independent, and he has never been in a real fight. (And is afraid to be) Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): He has yet to learn the ability of fire, but it is there. Life Before CHB*: He raised himself since he was 5 years old. He doesn't remember anything about his family or what happened to them. He has always had a special talent that none of the other wildlife had. He could create amazing things. Harvesters, robots, weapons, you name it. His father claimed him a week ago. Ever since then he has been using his machines to get to CHB from Michigan. RP Example*: I am Kataro. I have no last name because I have no family. I have never experienced anything 'family-like'. Well, except for my machines. My machines are my only friends. I can make anything anybody can ever dream of. I have homeschooled myself to get a proper education. (Don't ask how I got the teachers' materials...) My father, Hephaestus, claimed me last week so this whole 'god' concept is new to me. He gave me signs that lead me to this place, that's how i knew about it. As I said before, I have no family. I don't know what happened to it. Maybe they abandoned me? Maybe they are dead. Who really knows? I am hoping to find family here. And maybe, just maybe.. a friend. Any notes about your characters: He will do anything to have a friend or family. Also, at first he will seem timid and a bit of a loner.
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Loki Elite Staff Member

 Number of posts: 19861 Age: 16 Registration date: 2010-06-05
 | Subject: Re: PwnedbyElmo's characters 11/11/2011, 5:19 pm | |
| ________________ Lakoda, daughter of Loki-15Warren, son of Aphrodite-18-AustralianMalia, daughter of Cocytus-16Verity, daughter of Nekhbet-15Vanessa, daughter of Serqet-17Cassandra, daughter of Iaso-17Rose, daughter of Demeter-16Anders, son of Ares-17Kyler, daughter of Morpheus-16Devan, daughter of Aegaeus-16-ItalianAlec, son of Hecate-16Topher, son of Notus-17-BritishGaebrie, daughter of Eirene-16Ashton, daughter of Hecate-16Laycie, daughter of Eros-16-French
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Confuzzled Senior Member

 Number of posts: 1907 Age: 14 Registration date: 2011-11-11
 | Subject: Re: PwnedbyElmo's characters 11/11/2011, 5:28 pm | |
| I apologize. -.-" Let me edit. |
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Loki Elite Staff Member

 Number of posts: 19861 Age: 16 Registration date: 2010-06-05
 | Subject: Re: PwnedbyElmo's characters 11/11/2011, 5:31 pm | |
| No need to apologize, you're just fine. ________________ Lakoda, daughter of Loki-15Warren, son of Aphrodite-18-AustralianMalia, daughter of Cocytus-16Verity, daughter of Nekhbet-15Vanessa, daughter of Serqet-17Cassandra, daughter of Iaso-17Rose, daughter of Demeter-16Anders, son of Ares-17Kyler, daughter of Morpheus-16Devan, daughter of Aegaeus-16-ItalianAlec, son of Hecate-16Topher, son of Notus-17-BritishGaebrie, daughter of Eirene-16Ashton, daughter of Hecate-16Laycie, daughter of Eros-16-French
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Confuzzled Senior Member

 Number of posts: 1907 Age: 14 Registration date: 2011-11-11
 | Subject: Re: PwnedbyElmo's characters 11/11/2011, 5:42 pm | |
| | Nicosgirlfriend wrote: | | No need to apologize, you're just fine. | I believe it is ready. |
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Elleon Elite Staff Member

 Number of posts: 19417 Age: 16 Registration date: 2010-03-13
 | Subject: Re: PwnedbyElmo's characters 11/11/2011, 5:56 pm | |
| Your character must also have at least three character flaws. You know your character, so only you would know the flaws they have.
You need to write at least five sentences about what their life was like before they came to CHB. Five sentences for the RP example as well. ________________ Jazmine/Hades Veshtov/Hecate Marcus/Apollo Ellie/Aceso Toph/Geb Zayden/Anubis Antony/Minerva(3rd) Kelli/Chione Jacqueline/Hecate Carter/unclaimed Gabriel/Adikia
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Confuzzled Senior Member

 Number of posts: 1907 Age: 14 Registration date: 2011-11-11
 | Subject: Re: PwnedbyElmo's characters 11/11/2011, 6:05 pm | |
| | Chuck wrote: | Your character must also have at least three character flaws. You know your character, so only you would know the flaws they have.
You need to write at least five sentences about what their life was like before they came to CHB. Five sentences for the RP example as well. | Is it fixed now? |
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Elleon Elite Staff Member

 Number of posts: 19417 Age: 16 Registration date: 2010-03-13
 | Subject: Re: PwnedbyElmo's characters 11/11/2011, 7:42 pm | |
| You still need a 5 sentence RP example. It's basically to show how you will roleplay the character.
When he discovers his powers, what will he be able to do with fire? ________________ Jazmine/Hades Veshtov/Hecate Marcus/Apollo Ellie/Aceso Toph/Geb Zayden/Anubis Antony/Minerva(3rd) Kelli/Chione Jacqueline/Hecate Carter/unclaimed Gabriel/Adikia
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Confuzzled Senior Member

 Number of posts: 1907 Age: 14 Registration date: 2011-11-11
 | Subject: Re: PwnedbyElmo's characters 11/11/2011, 7:44 pm | |
| | Chuck wrote: | You still need a 5 sentence RP example. It's basically to show how you will roleplay the character.
When he discovers his powers, what will he be able to do with fire? | Sorry if I'm rude but, did you not read the paragraph at the top of my entry? And he will be able to control fire and materialize it. |
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Loki Elite Staff Member

 Number of posts: 19861 Age: 16 Registration date: 2010-06-05
 | Subject: Re: PwnedbyElmo's characters 11/11/2011, 8:01 pm | |
| We did read it, but you still need 5 sentences for your Life before CHB and your RP example. ________________ Lakoda, daughter of Loki-15Warren, son of Aphrodite-18-AustralianMalia, daughter of Cocytus-16Verity, daughter of Nekhbet-15Vanessa, daughter of Serqet-17Cassandra, daughter of Iaso-17Rose, daughter of Demeter-16Anders, son of Ares-17Kyler, daughter of Morpheus-16Devan, daughter of Aegaeus-16-ItalianAlec, son of Hecate-16Topher, son of Notus-17-BritishGaebrie, daughter of Eirene-16Ashton, daughter of Hecate-16Laycie, daughter of Eros-16-French
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Confuzzled Senior Member

 Number of posts: 1907 Age: 14 Registration date: 2011-11-11
 | Subject: Re: PwnedbyElmo's characters 11/11/2011, 8:05 pm | |
| | Nicosgirlfriend wrote: | | We did read it, but you still need 5 sentences for your Life before CHB and your RP example. | The top is my rp example and the life before already has at least five sentences... |
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Elleon Elite Staff Member

 Number of posts: 19417 Age: 16 Registration date: 2010-03-13
 | Subject: Re: PwnedbyElmo's characters 11/11/2011, 8:08 pm | |
| You have to have 5 for BOTH. That would be at least 10 sentences total, deary.
Edit: I see what you did. hehe. Just copy and paste it into the rp example spot so we aren't confused. ________________ Jazmine/Hades Veshtov/Hecate Marcus/Apollo Ellie/Aceso Toph/Geb Zayden/Anubis Antony/Minerva(3rd) Kelli/Chione Jacqueline/Hecate Carter/unclaimed Gabriel/Adikia
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Confuzzled Senior Member

 Number of posts: 1907 Age: 14 Registration date: 2011-11-11
 | Subject: Re: PwnedbyElmo's characters 11/11/2011, 8:16 pm | |
| | Chuck wrote: | You have to have 5 for BOTH. That would be at least 10 sentences total, deary.
Edit: I see what you did. hehe. Just copy and paste it into the rp example spot so we aren't confused. | Lol. Better now? |
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Elleon Elite Staff Member

 Number of posts: 19417 Age: 16 Registration date: 2010-03-13
 | Subject: Re: PwnedbyElmo's characters 11/11/2011, 8:18 pm | |
| Okay, what exactly will he be able to do with the fire, besides make it appear? In other words, how will he control it? ________________ Jazmine/Hades Veshtov/Hecate Marcus/Apollo Ellie/Aceso Toph/Geb Zayden/Anubis Antony/Minerva(3rd) Kelli/Chione Jacqueline/Hecate Carter/unclaimed Gabriel/Adikia
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Confuzzled Senior Member

 Number of posts: 1907 Age: 14 Registration date: 2011-11-11
 | Subject: Re: PwnedbyElmo's characters 11/11/2011, 8:19 pm | |
| | Chuck wrote: | | Okay, what exactly will he be able to do with the fire, besides make it appear? In other words, how will he control it? | I guess he just thinks about where he wants it to be and how he wants it. (Big, small) |
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Elleon Elite Staff Member

 Number of posts: 19417 Age: 16 Registration date: 2010-03-13
 | Subject: Re: PwnedbyElmo's characters 11/11/2011, 8:23 pm | |
| Okay, how many times a day can he do this? And what's the biggest amount he can control? ________________ Jazmine/Hades Veshtov/Hecate Marcus/Apollo Ellie/Aceso Toph/Geb Zayden/Anubis Antony/Minerva(3rd) Kelli/Chione Jacqueline/Hecate Carter/unclaimed Gabriel/Adikia
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Confuzzled Senior Member

 Number of posts: 1907 Age: 14 Registration date: 2011-11-11
 | Subject: Re: PwnedbyElmo's characters 11/11/2011, 8:27 pm | |
| | Chuck wrote: | | Okay, how many times a day can he do this? And what's the biggest amount he can control? | He can use his powers as many times as his age. The largest amount he can control would probably be a bit smaller than a small car. |
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Elleon Elite Staff Member

 Number of posts: 19417 Age: 16 Registration date: 2010-03-13
 | Subject: Re: PwnedbyElmo's characters 11/11/2011, 8:27 pm | |
| So that would be 13 times a day right now? ________________ Jazmine/Hades Veshtov/Hecate Marcus/Apollo Ellie/Aceso Toph/Geb Zayden/Anubis Antony/Minerva(3rd) Kelli/Chione Jacqueline/Hecate Carter/unclaimed Gabriel/Adikia
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Confuzzled Senior Member

 Number of posts: 1907 Age: 14 Registration date: 2011-11-11
 | Subject: Re: PwnedbyElmo's characters 11/11/2011, 8:28 pm | |
| | Chuck wrote: | | So that would be 13 times a day right now? | Yes. |
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Elleon Elite Staff Member

 Number of posts: 19417 Age: 16 Registration date: 2010-03-13
 | Subject: Re: PwnedbyElmo's characters 11/11/2011, 8:31 pm | |
| Approved. ________________ Jazmine/Hades Veshtov/Hecate Marcus/Apollo Ellie/Aceso Toph/Geb Zayden/Anubis Antony/Minerva(3rd) Kelli/Chione Jacqueline/Hecate Carter/unclaimed Gabriel/Adikia
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Confuzzled Senior Member

 Number of posts: 1907 Age: 14 Registration date: 2011-11-11
 | Subject: PwnedbyElmo's characters 11/17/2011, 9:57 pm | |
| Name:Chris(topher) Johnson Age: 16 Gender: Male Eyes: Blue Hair: Black Height: 5'8" Body Type: Skinny, not very muscular. Skin Color: Pale God Parent: Thanatos Mortal Parent: Morgan Johnson Country of Origin: America (With a slight british accent.) Pets: A rare black tiger Talents: Fighting Weapon**: Stygian Iron Polearm Flaws: He's too full of himself, his strength is not the best, inattentive Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): Shadow travel half as many times as his age and summoning the dead half as many times as his age. (He controls them, he is their master when he summons.) Life Before CHB*: He was bullied as a child. Small kids with freakish powers usually do, right? As he got older, he gained more and more control, eventually ruling the school. He was the most feared kid in the whole town. Too bad his mom sent him off to a boarding school for delinquents. RP Example*: "Well you just don't give up do ya, mate?" I summon a skeleton gladiator and it charges my old friend, potentially chopping him into little pieces. I chuckle as he runs away, scared like a little purse chihuahua. "And don't come back!" Now I need to make up a story. My mother will be wondering where my little brother ran off to.Any notes about your characters: I don't think there are any. 
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Elleon Elite Staff Member

 Number of posts: 19417 Age: 16 Registration date: 2010-03-13
 | Subject: Re: PwnedbyElmo's characters 11/17/2011, 10:17 pm | |
| Add two more flaws. How many times can he shadow travel and how far? How often can he summon the dead, and what can they do when he does? ________________ Jazmine/Hades Veshtov/Hecate Marcus/Apollo Ellie/Aceso Toph/Geb Zayden/Anubis Antony/Minerva(3rd) Kelli/Chione Jacqueline/Hecate Carter/unclaimed Gabriel/Adikia
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Confuzzled Senior Member

 Number of posts: 1907 Age: 14 Registration date: 2011-11-11
 | Subject: Re: PwnedbyElmo's characters 11/17/2011, 10:20 pm | |
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Elleon Elite Staff Member

 Number of posts: 19417 Age: 16 Registration date: 2010-03-13
 | Subject: Re: PwnedbyElmo's characters 11/17/2011, 10:22 pm | |
| Not having friends is a temporary flaw. Add another one. Are the dead just as capable as humans? ________________ Jazmine/Hades Veshtov/Hecate Marcus/Apollo Ellie/Aceso Toph/Geb Zayden/Anubis Antony/Minerva(3rd) Kelli/Chione Jacqueline/Hecate Carter/unclaimed Gabriel/Adikia
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Confuzzled Senior Member

 Number of posts: 1907 Age: 14 Registration date: 2011-11-11
 | Subject: Re: PwnedbyElmo's characters 11/17/2011, 10:27 pm | |
| 1. Edited. 2. Yes, but not as much health. They'll crumble after a few hits but are still strong. |
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