Name:Nate Wolfe
Age:12
Gender:male
Eyes:brown
Hair:dark brown
Height:4'10
Body Type:normal
Skin Color:almost pale white with some tan
Greek God Parent: Apollo
Mortal Parent: Jennifer
Country of Origin: U.S.A
Pets: cat (Milo)
Weapon(s): Celestial Bronze Sword, named Cantus
Talents: writing, music, writing music, sword-fighting, persuasive, can play piano, keyboard, harmonica, clarinet, recorder, and drums. Can speak Latin
Flaws: competitive, can be shy, talks too much
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): none
Life Before CHB*: He lived in a small city named Ringgold. He went to school at Heritage middle. He constantly fought monsters in the worst situations, like on field trips and in the fossil exhibit. He's fought everything from homework to monsters, it seems. He enjoyed band and chorus at school, because there were so many kids in those classes that the monsters couldn't locate him. He had to fight his Principal in fifth grade, because he was really a monster. He didn't have a sword back before CHB, so he had to use hand-to-hand combat. On free time he would write music.
RP Example*: I walked into CHB, leaving the slain fury behind me. My sword in hand, I ran into camp and tumbled down the hill. I rolled until I hit the Big House. My sword had left my grasp and impaled itself into the wall. Chiron came out of the Big House. "Hi," I said nervously as I attempted to pull my sword out. It suddenly came out and I tumbled backward.

Persuasive is not a power. You don't need to have a power.

Life Before CHB needs to be 5 sentences long.

Demigod Form:

Name: Kassidie Armour
Age: 12 (February 19)
Gender: Female
Eyes: Change according to mood
Hair: Dirty Blonde
Height: 4.10 Feet tall
Body Type: Athletic
Skin Color: Light Peach
God Parent: Aphrodite
Mortal Parent: Jason Armour
Country of Origin: U.S.A.
Pets: none
Talents: Dance, singing
Weapon**: Bow and arrow named Amorem that can shoot 3 arrows at once
Flaws: Full of herself, thinks she's funny (and isn't), can be mean when angry.
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): none
Life Before CHB*: Kassidie went to Heritage Middle School, Ringgold, GA along with Nate Wolfe. They arrived at CHB on the same day and were really good friends. When Kassidie was running up Half-blood Hill, a fury dropped from the sky at her and took her quiver. Another lunged down at her, only to be sliced in two by Nate. She was playing Capture the Flag when she was claimed, and was the only member of the Aphrodite cabin that did anything other than polish her nails.
RP Example*: I got out of the cab and paid the driver. He asked me if I was sure this was where I wanted to go, and I told him to take the money and go. To him, we were in the middle of nowhere, but I knew that just over the hill in front of me was Camp Half-blood. I ran for the hill, only to have my quiver taken from my shoulders by a fury. When it ascended into the sky, another lunged at me. I prepared to die. Then, out of nowhere, a sword came out and sliced the diving fury in two. I recognized the blade to be Nate's, Cantus.
Any notes about your characters: Her arrows are celestial bronze and heart-shaped, painted red.

Add two more flaws.
That power is like charmspeak, no? We don't allow charmspeak.

Approved.

We don't allow Imperial Gold for demigods here.

Life Before CHB needs to be 5 sentences long.

It is 5 sentences long, exactly.

No, it's not. It's only separated by commas, making it one long run-on sentence. And we prefer full sentences, meaning using pronouns.

Is that better?

Add two more sentences.

oops, I hit enter while writing the life before CHB, and you only saw the first part. I just fixed that.

Approved.

name: Shane White
age: 16
gender: Male
eye: frost blue
hair: black
body type: skinny
skin color: pale
god parent: Chione
parents: Blake White
country of origin: Canada
pets: none
talents: sword fighting, blending in, acedemics
weapon: double swords named Nix and Glacie, meaning snow and ice. They're both celestial bronze, but painted white.
flaws: unpopular, antisocial, quiet, "cold"
powers: Can make it snow up to 5 inches or freeze water up to 50 gallons of water 3 times a day, but loses energy.
Before camp halfblood: Shane lived near the United States, and remembers his father telling him as a little kid, "Okay, you can play, but stay in the country." He has had less trouble than most demigods do with survival. He rarely sees a monster, and it's not long before he reduces them to dust. He lived in a small apartment with his dad and often asked about his mom. His dad didn't know much, so it wasn't of much use.
roleplay example: I walked up to my cabin. "I guess this is it," I say to myself. I open the door and walk in. There's an empty bunk by the window. I put my stuff down on it. "Why are you choosing that one?" Asked another camper. "It gets coldest at night. I didn't care. I picked up Nix and Glacie and went to the arena.

Are his swords Celestial bronze?


How many inches a day can he make it snow? How much water can he freeze?

I edited it.

Name: June Green
Age: 13
Gender: female
Type of Creature (satyr, nymph, or dryad): dryad
Description (looks): red hair, green eyes, freckles
Powers: can make a plant grow whenever and wherever she wants five times a day )Plants up to 5 feet high at first, but can be grown like normal plants afterwards.)
Flaws: clumsy, over-emotional, little common sense
Weapons**: Bow and arrows made of sticks with thorns for the ends of arrows. Some of the thorns have poison.
Talents/Skills: archery, running, dodging, gymnastics
RP Example*: I came out of my tree and snuck up behind the demigod. I tapped him on the shoulder and disappeared back into my tree. He turned around, terror in his eyes. I made a thorn-bush grow behind him. He sat down and started screaming in pain. He jumped back up and ran off crying. I came out of my tree laughing.

How big are the plants?

Approved.

Five feet high. I just edited it in.

Approved.

name: Leo Ruber
age: 15
gender: Male
eye: sky blue
hair: blonde
body type: skinny
skin color: little tan
god parent: Aeolus
parents: Grace Ruber
country of origin: U.S.A. (Chicago, the windy city)
pets: Eagle named Aura
talents: aerodynamics, running, archery
weapon: Bow painted metallic sky blue with arrows made of celestial bronze painted white and silver.
flaws: short temper, terrible with spears, bad at math.
powers: Can hover up to 5 feet off of the ground or shoot gust of wind up to 50 miles per hour 5 times a day.
Before camp halfblood: Leo lived in a small apartment with his Mom. His Mom refused to tell him anything about his dad, until a big monster attack. A Minotaur crushed the wall of the apartment and came after him. His mom gave him a map to camp half-blood and drove away. He never saw her again.
roleplay example: I walked to the river. Someone across it pulled out a sword and ran at me. I jumped and hovered, staying just high enough to let them run under me. I hovered across the river. The strange person came at me. I pushed him back with a gust of wind, and he fell into the river. I took that as a chance to run.

95 mph is too much.

how's 75?