Name: Lok Sparks

Age: 16

Gender: Male

Eyes: Blue

Hair: Blonde

Height: 5 ft.

Body Type: Medium (If thats what you mean)

Skin Color: Pink

God Parent: Hera

Mortal Parent: Rachel Sparks (mother) Jonathan Sparks (father)

Country of Origin: Greece

Pets: Buddy (Labrador Retriever)

Talents: Good at sword fighting

Weapon: Sword (Spartan kind, with curved blade)

Flaws: Paranoiac

Powers: None

Life Before Camp Half-Blood: Lok Sparks was an ordinary kid. He had pretty carefree life, untill this one day when he was going back home from his friend's house and he saw a weird looking creature that was half human and half horse. He didn't mention anything to his mom and dad. The next week, Lok was seeing more and more creatures, and the creatures were chasing him. He told his parents, and his mom and dad told him that he was Demi-God...a half god, and half human. Than in summer they sent him to Camp for Half-Bloods. And now he is writing this little paragraph.

Any Notes About Your Character: He's somewhat likes to cause troubles.

We don't allow children of Hera.

Is his weapon Celestial bronze?

RP Example is required; it must be five sentences long, and it's telling a story from your character's point of view.

Add two more flaws.

Body Type means muscular, skinny, etc.

Repairs

God Parent: Athena

Weapons: Sword, Celestial bronze

Body Type: Fit

RP Example: (I accidently missed it.) Lok Sparks quickly rose to his feet, and charged his enemy Brandon Walker. His breathing slowed down as he was approaching Brandon faster and faster. Soon, two forces colided and their swords clashed in a cold, morning air. Lok ducked low as Brandon's sword came whoshing above his head. Lok kicked Brandon back with his foot. Then he got up and swung his sword at Brandon. The swings were so wide that it forced Brandon to back away. As he was backing away he didn't notice a rock laying right behind him, adn he tripped. Just as he was going to get up Lok's sword was pointed at Brandon's throat.

"It's over for you..."

P.S. I could use more help with my writting style.

Your writing seems just fine.

You still need two more flaws.

Flaws: ADHD, over-confident.

ADHD is a standard flaw in demigods. Add another.

Self-centered

Approved.

Name: Sabriel Hopper

Age: 13

Gender: Female

Eyes: Brown

Hair: Brown

Height: 5' 8"

Body Type: Fit

Skin Color: Tan

Greek God Parent: Apollo


Mortal Parent: Steve Colon. Susan Colon (Died of cancer)

Country of Origin: USA

Pets: None

Talents: Shooting bow really good.

Weapons: Bow and arrows.

Flaws: Charges into battle without thinking, ignorant at the times, bully

Powers: Healing powers. She can heal 2 times a day. She can heal any small wounds. The big wounds are beyond her ability.

Life before CHB: She was a regular girl who attended school everyday and had good grades, then one day she was approached by FBI who suspected she was a demi-god. Sabriel couldn't understand what they were talking about. She wasn't this "demi-god' they were talking about. So they let her go. Back at home, her dad told her everything he knew. Sabriel was shocked. They hid this info from her for 12 years. She was so angry that she couldn't remain living in a house anymore. She ran away.

RP Ex. The wind was howling past her ear as she slowly rose to her feet. How could they not tell me who I really was. Thought Sabriel. She was wandering streets aimlessly with no plan in mind, with no place to go to. People walked on a sidewalk past her and took no notice of her. To them she was just another homeless person. Then suddenly, a tall gentlemen approached her. He asked if she was Sabriel Hopper and Sabriel told him everything. He took her by the arm and they walked toward the coffee shop.

Notes: N/A

We don't allow kids of Artemis.

OK. Daughter of Apollo.

Edit that in, and those powers aren't Apollo powers.

It's all edited now.

Worst wound she can heal? How many times a day can she use her powers?

She can heal 2 times a day. She can heal any small wounds. The big wounds are beyond her ability.

Define "small".

Like, for an instance if someone gets shot with an arrow, she can heal that. But if its a sword wound or magic wound she can't heal that.

A sword wound... like a deep stab?

Yes. That's what I mean.

I don't know why the FBI would think she's a demigod because the mist is fairly strong around mortals....

But approved.

Name:Kahlan Amnell
Age: 18
Gender: Female
Eyes: Hazel
Hair: Brown
Height: 6'
Body Type: Fit
Skin Color: Human color (Pink)
God Parent: Ares
Mortal Parent: Kaitlin Amnell, Victor Amnell
Country of Origin: USA
Pets: None
Talents: None
Weapon**: Twin daggers in her boots.
Flaws: Naive, ignorant, selfish
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): None
Life Before CHB*: She was a regular person like everyone else, when she turned 18 she started to rebel against her mother and pretty soon abandoned her mother and left to live on her own. She was roaming on the streets with no plan in mind. Then a man on a wheelchair approached her and told her about being demigod and that she was one. Soon she left to live in CHB.


RP Example*: Kahlan arrived at the camp Half-Blood, there was a lot of new things that she couldn't understand for instance why did kids throw some of their food into the fire. She found her cabin and placed her stuff on bunk and walked out. Then from nowhere there is this fight brokes out and two guys trying to kill each other. Then someone interfered in the fight and it was soon over. I think I am going to like it here. she thought.
Any notes about your characters: None.

Approved.

Name: Bruce Zola
Age: 10
Gender: Male
Eyes: Orange
Hair: Black
Height: 4' 1/2"
Body Type: Skinny
Skin Color: Pink (Human)
God Parent: Apollo
Mortal Parent: Teresa Zola, Mark Zola
Country of Origin: Ukraine
Pets: 2 Python Snakes (Very large)
Talents: Bow skills, friendly, kind, hot-tempered sometimes.
Weapon**: Celestial Sword, and watch that retracts into a shield.
Flaws: Selfish, ignorant, too helpful,
Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): Can blind people with light (for defense). The powers only lasts about 2-3 minutes, and it requires all of his energy to perform such a trick. Powers shoots from his hands.
Life Before CHB*: He was born into a poor family and used to grow up among gangsters and thieves. He learned how to steal without being detected. Then when he turned 8 he met a very wise man on a wheelchair who automatically suspected that Bruce was demi-god by the way he acted. He suggested for Bruce to come to CHB, but Bruce decline his offer. Years passed and Bruce turned 9. He started to see weird creatures so than he knew he has to get to CHB. ANd so he did.
RP Example*: Bruce woke up that morning all stiff and every bone in his body ached. He wanted some Asprin but saw none, he went donw to the drug store, but salesman there wouldnt sell him any asprin because he was much to young to buy drugs. Bruce broke window and grabbed the man, he leaned very close to man's face and said. "You better give me what I want, or someone will be cleaning up your bloody mess." the man got very scared and gave Bruce what he wanted. Bruce thanked him and left the store.
Any notes about your characters: He can talk to his snakes.

Where does the light come from?

From his hands.