| | |
| Author | Message |
|---|
Agent Fly Experienced Member

 Number of posts: 7850 Age: 13 Registration date: 2010-06-23
 | Subject: Chracter from 6/24/2010, 12:24 pm | |
| Name:Justin Quinones Age:11 Gender:Male Eyes:Grey Hair:Blonde Height:4'4" Body Type:Slender Skin Color:tanish God Parent:Athena Mortal Parent:Frank Sakelarios Country of Origin:USA Pets:Hawk named Hunter Talents:Running, Can design planes, crusie ships, and buildings , and playing on the Computer Skills:Run fast, chess, and building with legos Weapon**:Bow and Celetel broze Arrows Flaws:I Tick Alot of people off, Freak out alot, and I have very low stamina. Powers(must relate to god parent):none Life Before CHB*:I lived in Carson City,Nevada. I did well at Seeliger Elametry School. I loved flying on planes. I loved to jump bikes. I got yelled at by my sister every day. RP Example*:I kicked a rubber mouse. I guess it was a prank. I kindda like mice though. I layed on my bunk. Then got up and left Any notes about your characters:Like to chew gum and sometimes very stubern
Last edited by Fly_boy on 6/27/2010, 7:29 pm; edited 8 times in total |
|  | | Jovan Member
 Number of posts: 730 Age: 19 Registration date: 2010-01-26
 | Subject: Re: Fly's characters 6/24/2010, 12:43 pm | |
| you need to fill out Life before and RP example, They both need to be 5 sentences long Add more flaws and powers, you should have about 3 Add more talents and skills. |
|  | | Agent Fly Experienced Member

 Number of posts: 7850 Age: 13 Registration date: 2010-06-23
 | Subject: Re: Fly's characters 6/24/2010, 12:54 pm | |
| |
|  | | Kendall Administrator

 Number of posts: 33975 Age: 2010 Registration date: 2008-09-13
 | Subject: Re: Fly's characters 6/24/2010, 12:57 pm | |
| You can fill it out in another post or put it in using the edit button. ________________ Kendall, Daughter of Ares Rosalie, Daughter of Aphrodite Claire, Daughter of Hecate Archer, Son of Hecate Stella, Daughter of Ouranos Meagan, Daughter of Gaea Aidan, Daughter of Pyriphlegethon Tempest, Daughter of Aeolus Nelly, Daughter of Apollo Benji, Daughter of Kuk Deja, Daughter of Odyne Mason, Son of Hermes Waldo, Son of Hermes Terra, Daughter of Tiki Lucy, Daughter of Somnus; First Cohort Dorian, Legacy of Mefitis; Third Cohort
You power-play, I god-mod. (Switching "god-mod" with "power-play" works too.)
|
|  | | Agent Fly Experienced Member

 Number of posts: 7850 Age: 13 Registration date: 2010-06-23
 | Subject: Re: Fly's characters 6/27/2010, 5:14 pm | |
| |
|  | | Kendall Administrator

 Number of posts: 33975 Age: 2010 Registration date: 2008-09-13
 | Subject: Re: Fly's characters 6/27/2010, 5:15 pm | |
| Those aren't powers. If you have none, put none. What you have in powers belongs in talents/skills.
Life Before CHB needs to be SENTENCES, not fragments. Don't take shortcuts. :/ ________________ Kendall, Daughter of Ares Rosalie, Daughter of Aphrodite Claire, Daughter of Hecate Archer, Son of Hecate Stella, Daughter of Ouranos Meagan, Daughter of Gaea Aidan, Daughter of Pyriphlegethon Tempest, Daughter of Aeolus Nelly, Daughter of Apollo Benji, Daughter of Kuk Deja, Daughter of Odyne Mason, Son of Hermes Waldo, Son of Hermes Terra, Daughter of Tiki Lucy, Daughter of Somnus; First Cohort Dorian, Legacy of Mefitis; Third Cohort
You power-play, I god-mod. (Switching "god-mod" with "power-play" works too.)
|
|  | | Agent Fly Experienced Member

 Number of posts: 7850 Age: 13 Registration date: 2010-06-23
 | Subject: Re: Fly's characters 6/27/2010, 5:25 pm | |
| |
|  | | Kendall Administrator

 Number of posts: 33975 Age: 2010 Registration date: 2008-09-13
 | Subject: Re: Fly's characters 6/27/2010, 5:25 pm | |
| Add another flaw. Physical is preferred. ________________ Kendall, Daughter of Ares Rosalie, Daughter of Aphrodite Claire, Daughter of Hecate Archer, Son of Hecate Stella, Daughter of Ouranos Meagan, Daughter of Gaea Aidan, Daughter of Pyriphlegethon Tempest, Daughter of Aeolus Nelly, Daughter of Apollo Benji, Daughter of Kuk Deja, Daughter of Odyne Mason, Son of Hermes Waldo, Son of Hermes Terra, Daughter of Tiki Lucy, Daughter of Somnus; First Cohort Dorian, Legacy of Mefitis; Third Cohort
You power-play, I god-mod. (Switching "god-mod" with "power-play" works too.)
|
|  | | Agent Fly Experienced Member

 Number of posts: 7850 Age: 13 Registration date: 2010-06-23
 | Subject: Re: Fly's characters 6/27/2010, 7:29 pm | |
| |
|  | | Kendall Administrator

 Number of posts: 33975 Age: 2010 Registration date: 2008-09-13
 | Subject: Re: Fly's characters 6/27/2010, 7:49 pm | |
| Approved. ________________ Kendall, Daughter of Ares Rosalie, Daughter of Aphrodite Claire, Daughter of Hecate Archer, Son of Hecate Stella, Daughter of Ouranos Meagan, Daughter of Gaea Aidan, Daughter of Pyriphlegethon Tempest, Daughter of Aeolus Nelly, Daughter of Apollo Benji, Daughter of Kuk Deja, Daughter of Odyne Mason, Son of Hermes Waldo, Son of Hermes Terra, Daughter of Tiki Lucy, Daughter of Somnus; First Cohort Dorian, Legacy of Mefitis; Third Cohort
You power-play, I god-mod. (Switching "god-mod" with "power-play" works too.)
|
|  | | Agent Fly Experienced Member

 Number of posts: 7850 Age: 13 Registration date: 2010-06-23
 | Subject: 2nd Charicter 7/28/2010, 9:31 pm | |
| Name:Tyler Hammick Age:13 Gender:Male Eyes:Blue Hair:Drity Blonde Height:4'10" Body Type:Slender Skin Color:Light Tan God Parent:Apollo Mortal Parent:Hannah Hammick Country of Origin:USA Pets:Hawk named Smokey Talents:Archery, Running, and Rapping Skills:Archery, writing raps, Soasil Weapon**:Celestial broze Dagger, and Bow and Celestial bronze arrows Flaws:Near sighted, asthma, and low stamina Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):None Life Before CHB*:Tyler did well at EVMS. He loved to listin to rap miusic andlook at airplanes. Swimming was a hobbie as were modle planes. Loved to wear hats all the time. RP Example*:I doove off a diving board. Dove through the water. Swam up and said, "How was that?" My best friend said "Good." I said, "Nice. I am going agian." Any notes about your characters:Nope
Last edited by Fly_boy on 7/29/2010, 2:39 pm; edited 3 times in total |
|  | | Kendall Administrator

 Number of posts: 33975 Age: 2010 Registration date: 2008-09-13
 | Subject: Re: Fly's characters 7/28/2010, 9:39 pm | |
| Use complete sentences, please. Your Life Before CHB describes his life before going to camp. :/
And do you mean Celestial bronze? And btw, no talking to hawks. ________________ Kendall, Daughter of Ares Rosalie, Daughter of Aphrodite Claire, Daughter of Hecate Archer, Son of Hecate Stella, Daughter of Ouranos Meagan, Daughter of Gaea Aidan, Daughter of Pyriphlegethon Tempest, Daughter of Aeolus Nelly, Daughter of Apollo Benji, Daughter of Kuk Deja, Daughter of Odyne Mason, Son of Hermes Waldo, Son of Hermes Terra, Daughter of Tiki Lucy, Daughter of Somnus; First Cohort Dorian, Legacy of Mefitis; Third Cohort
You power-play, I god-mod. (Switching "god-mod" with "power-play" works too.)
|
|  | | Agent Fly Experienced Member

 Number of posts: 7850 Age: 13 Registration date: 2010-06-23
 | Subject: Re: Fly's characters 7/28/2010, 9:43 pm | |
| |
|  | | Kendall Administrator

 Number of posts: 33975 Age: 2010 Registration date: 2008-09-13
 | Subject: Re: Fly's characters 7/28/2010, 9:48 pm | |
| Don't double-post. EVER. | Kendall wrote: | Use complete sentences, please. Your Life Before CHB describes his life before going to camp. :/
. |
________________ Kendall, Daughter of Ares Rosalie, Daughter of Aphrodite Claire, Daughter of Hecate Archer, Son of Hecate Stella, Daughter of Ouranos Meagan, Daughter of Gaea Aidan, Daughter of Pyriphlegethon Tempest, Daughter of Aeolus Nelly, Daughter of Apollo Benji, Daughter of Kuk Deja, Daughter of Odyne Mason, Son of Hermes Waldo, Son of Hermes Terra, Daughter of Tiki Lucy, Daughter of Somnus; First Cohort Dorian, Legacy of Mefitis; Third Cohort
You power-play, I god-mod. (Switching "god-mod" with "power-play" works too.)
|
|  | | Agent Fly Experienced Member

 Number of posts: 7850 Age: 13 Registration date: 2010-06-23
 | Subject: Re: Fly's characters 7/29/2010, 2:26 pm | |
| |
|  | | Kendall Administrator

 Number of posts: 33975 Age: 2010 Registration date: 2008-09-13
 | Subject: Re: Fly's characters 7/29/2010, 2:28 pm | |
| Entirely not what I asked for....
But whatever.
And your flaws-- dyslexia and ADHD are not flaws. ________________ Kendall, Daughter of Ares Rosalie, Daughter of Aphrodite Claire, Daughter of Hecate Archer, Son of Hecate Stella, Daughter of Ouranos Meagan, Daughter of Gaea Aidan, Daughter of Pyriphlegethon Tempest, Daughter of Aeolus Nelly, Daughter of Apollo Benji, Daughter of Kuk Deja, Daughter of Odyne Mason, Son of Hermes Waldo, Son of Hermes Terra, Daughter of Tiki Lucy, Daughter of Somnus; First Cohort Dorian, Legacy of Mefitis; Third Cohort
You power-play, I god-mod. (Switching "god-mod" with "power-play" works too.)
|
|  | | Agent Fly Experienced Member

 Number of posts: 7850 Age: 13 Registration date: 2010-06-23
 | Subject: Re: Fly's characters 7/29/2010, 2:39 pm | |
| |
|  | | Kendall Administrator

 Number of posts: 33975 Age: 2010 Registration date: 2008-09-13
 | Subject: Re: Fly's characters 7/29/2010, 2:41 pm | |
| Approved. ________________ Kendall, Daughter of Ares Rosalie, Daughter of Aphrodite Claire, Daughter of Hecate Archer, Son of Hecate Stella, Daughter of Ouranos Meagan, Daughter of Gaea Aidan, Daughter of Pyriphlegethon Tempest, Daughter of Aeolus Nelly, Daughter of Apollo Benji, Daughter of Kuk Deja, Daughter of Odyne Mason, Son of Hermes Waldo, Son of Hermes Terra, Daughter of Tiki Lucy, Daughter of Somnus; First Cohort Dorian, Legacy of Mefitis; Third Cohort
You power-play, I god-mod. (Switching "god-mod" with "power-play" works too.)
|
|  | | Agent Fly Experienced Member

 Number of posts: 7850 Age: 13 Registration date: 2010-06-23
 | Subject: 3rd charister 8/4/2010, 10:45 am | |
| Justin is gone so...
Name:Lance nikiki Age:12 Gender:male Eyes:blue Hair:brown Height:5'0" Body Type:skinny Skin Color:Hawaiin God Parent:triton Mortal Parent:Evalyn nikiki Country of Origin:Honalulu,Oauh,Hawaii,USA Pets:An Orca named Killer Talents:Surfing Skills:Surfing, swimming Weapon**:sorwd and dagger Flaws:asthma,random spaz attacks, Color blind Powers(must relate to god parent; optional):controlling water for an hour then pssing out and talking to sea mamals and beathing under water Life Before CHB*:Lance went surfing everyday no matter what. He also helped his mom do things around the island. He had to go to a boarding school on Hawaii. He was on the school surfing team. He hates airplanes but loves boats. RP Exampple*:I go for a wave. I jump on my board. Go for the barrel. I go inside. Do a go around. Then I fall off the board. Any notes about your characters:none
Last edited by Fly_boy on 8/8/2010, 7:09 pm; edited 7 times in total |
|  | | Kendall Administrator

 Number of posts: 33975 Age: 2010 Registration date: 2008-09-13
 | Subject: Re: Fly's characters 8/4/2010, 11:42 am | |
| Dude, USE COMPLETE SENTENCES.
You need limits for ALL your powers, plus two more flaws. ________________ Kendall, Daughter of Ares Rosalie, Daughter of Aphrodite Claire, Daughter of Hecate Archer, Son of Hecate Stella, Daughter of Ouranos Meagan, Daughter of Gaea Aidan, Daughter of Pyriphlegethon Tempest, Daughter of Aeolus Nelly, Daughter of Apollo Benji, Daughter of Kuk Deja, Daughter of Odyne Mason, Son of Hermes Waldo, Son of Hermes Terra, Daughter of Tiki Lucy, Daughter of Somnus; First Cohort Dorian, Legacy of Mefitis; Third Cohort
You power-play, I god-mod. (Switching "god-mod" with "power-play" works too.)
|
|  | | Agent Fly Experienced Member

 Number of posts: 7850 Age: 13 Registration date: 2010-06-23
 | Subject: Re: Fly's characters 8/4/2010, 12:02 pm | |
| Sorry I'm on an iPad and I must have forgotten that I needed 3 flaws
Done |
|  | | Kendall Administrator

 Number of posts: 33975 Age: 2010 Registration date: 2008-09-13
 | Subject: Re: Fly's characters 8/4/2010, 12:10 pm | |
| What's the most powerful thing he can make water do? ________________ Kendall, Daughter of Ares Rosalie, Daughter of Aphrodite Claire, Daughter of Hecate Archer, Son of Hecate Stella, Daughter of Ouranos Meagan, Daughter of Gaea Aidan, Daughter of Pyriphlegethon Tempest, Daughter of Aeolus Nelly, Daughter of Apollo Benji, Daughter of Kuk Deja, Daughter of Odyne Mason, Son of Hermes Waldo, Son of Hermes Terra, Daughter of Tiki Lucy, Daughter of Somnus; First Cohort Dorian, Legacy of Mefitis; Third Cohort
You power-play, I god-mod. (Switching "god-mod" with "power-play" works too.)
|
|  | | Agent Fly Experienced Member

 Number of posts: 7850 Age: 13 Registration date: 2010-06-23
 | Subject: Re: Fly's characters 8/4/2010, 12:16 pm | |
| Lift in the air and thron at someone make the tides higher |
|  | | Kendall Administrator

 Number of posts: 33975 Age: 2010 Registration date: 2008-09-13
 | Subject: Re: Fly's characters 8/4/2010, 12:18 pm | |
| He can make water float mid-air and throw that at people? ________________ Kendall, Daughter of Ares Rosalie, Daughter of Aphrodite Claire, Daughter of Hecate Archer, Son of Hecate Stella, Daughter of Ouranos Meagan, Daughter of Gaea Aidan, Daughter of Pyriphlegethon Tempest, Daughter of Aeolus Nelly, Daughter of Apollo Benji, Daughter of Kuk Deja, Daughter of Odyne Mason, Son of Hermes Waldo, Son of Hermes Terra, Daughter of Tiki Lucy, Daughter of Somnus; First Cohort Dorian, Legacy of Mefitis; Third Cohort
You power-play, I god-mod. (Switching "god-mod" with "power-play" works too.)
|
|  | | Agent Fly Experienced Member

 Number of posts: 7850 Age: 13 Registration date: 2010-06-23
 | Subject: Re: Fly's characters 8/4/2010, 12:21 pm | |
| Yes if he's near water but it's only the size of a soccer ball |
|  | | |
| | Permissions in this forum: | You cannot reply to topics in this forum
| |
| |
| |