i fixed it

Approved.

Name:Toby Preston
Age:14
Gender:male
Eyes:sparkly blue
Hair:blonde
Height:6'2''
Body Type:skinny fit
Skin Color:tan
God Parent:Apollo
Mortal Parent:Layla Preston
Country of Origin:USA
Pets:Chester a mouse
Talents:Archery,guitar,trombone,poetry,singing,acting,soccer,cross country,track&field and baseball
Skills:Archery first aid fencing
Weapon:A golden bow a quiver that will hold any type of arrows a knife
Flaws:always is trying to inprece girls kinda cocky hates when someone else gets the girl he likes is kinda afraid of the dark
Powers(must relate to god parent):really good at archery can create a ball of sunshine in the dark can sing really well
Life Before CHB*:Toby grew up in LA becase his mom was a actress.He offten didnt see his mother because she was always busy.Then one day at school he was attacked by a monster so a saytr helped him to camp.Then around chicago they ran into a hellhound and killed it.Then they countined on the way to camp.
RP Example*:I walk into my cabin set my stuff down on a empty bunk and start to practice my trombone.I play louie louie,smoke on the water,land of a thousand dances,Iron man and wipe out then I notice a boy a bit younger than me standing there.He says ''that was really good'' ''thank you whats your name i say'' ''Allen he says .''well Allen do you have a instrament''?''yes i play the trumpet''well if you go get it ill teach you how to play these songs''ok um...''toby ''ok then toby'' then he walks over to a bunk and grabs a trumpet.I say ''lets start with louie louie heres a trumpet part we play it susscfuly so i give him trumpet peices for all of the songs and tell him to practice.
Any notes about your characters:Adhd dislexia year rounder

Light powers drain him? How does he make the light?

Add more flaws.

ho consentrates really hard on the sun and he can create one

So this only works in the sun?

yes

But it says he can create the light in the dark.

no he has to think about the sun to be able to create the ball of light

Er, yeah, about that.... Light can't come from "nowhere".

oh ok he has to be able to see atleast a little sliver of light todo it

Approved.

Name:Camile Watson
Age:15
Gender:female
Eyes:green
Hair:Blonde
Height:6'2''
Body Type:skinny/fit
Skin Color:tan
God Parent:Athena
Mortal Parent:John Watson
Country of Origin:usa
Pets:Snowy a owl
Talents:French horn,fencing,sword fighting,archery,speaking greek,french and italin ,volleyball,soccer,softball,basketball,golf,track&feild,tennis,cross countrey and school
Skills:archery sword fighting
Weapon:wisdom a sword that turns into a braclet
Flaws:perfectionist sometimes not being able to think loylatly to her freinds and family
Powers(must relate to god parent):really smart good at thinking under presure and a stratigizer
Life Before CHB*:Camile grew up in boston were her dad was a professer at harvard.She often spent her time at practice or studing because her dad was never home.When she was 14 Camile met a saytr at her school who told her that she was a demigod daughter of athena then took her to camp.On the way to camp they ran into a hell hound and Camile killed it with her sword.Then she countined on her way to camp.
RP Example*:I walked into my cabin seeing a empty bunk and putting her stuff there then she grabed her notebook and started drawing.I stared drawing then i relize that im drawing the cabins.I finish my drawing then i leave the cabin.I walk into the swrd arena with wisdom and begin practicing then I leave.I head to the camp store and by a posicle then hesd back to my cabin.
Any notes about your characters:year rounder adha dislexia

Loatly?

towards her freinds she always has to help them

Errr.... so you mean "loyalty"... not "loalty"

yes i spelled it wrong but i changed it

Approved.

Name:Clarisse LaRue
Age:17 or 18[dosent say tell me i you now]
Gender:female
Eyes:green
Hair:dirty blonde
Height:6'3''
Body Type:fit muscular
Skin Color:white/tan
God Parent:Ares
Mortal Parent:Mary LaRue[made it up]
Country of Origin:usa arizona[says in botl]
Pets:none
Talents:Fighting,kick boxing,wrestling,sword fighting and runing
Skills:fighting,sword fighting
Wepon:manimer a eletric sword
Flaws:Pride,dosent always act like a child of ares,dosent always act like herself when shes upset
Powers(must relate to god parent):none
Life before CHB:I start paking my bag with all my things to run away to that camp for kids like me.I mean my didnt she tell me that my dads Ares i mean why would she keep that example.I wait until nightfall then sneak out my window and head to this camp.I make it to New york then a satyr finds me and tries getting me to camp.Then we see a hidra and i kill it then head to this camp.
RP Example:I walk in to the sword fighting arena and say ''Are you ready for this Prissy'' '' Yeah lets get it started''.''Okay lets go'' I thrust my sword at him and he leaps backwards he thrust at my side but i block it.He tries a diarming move and i block it aagin then i knock his sword fighting and win.I drink a bottle of gatoraid then head to the showers then when im done I head to my cabin.I lay down on my bunk and take a nap.
Notes about Charactor:ADHD,Dislexic year rounder likes chris rodregez

Clarisse doesn't really have any powers.

ok ill fix that

Heheh, you get to date my character (Chris)
You need to remember that.

ok lob

Approved.

Name:Malie Stevens
Age:13
Gender:femaale
Eyes:green
Hair:light brown
Height:5'8''
Body Type:skinny fit
Skin Color:tan
God Parent:Hormes
Mortal Parent:n/a
Country of Origin:usa
Pets:Freddie a cat
Talents:Fencing,swiming.soccer,kickboxing,volleyball,trumpet
Skills:archery swordfighting
Weapon:Impalse a sword
Flaws:Pride,loylaty,gets really jelus,bragges a lot
Powers(must relate to god parent):can control eagerness,impulse,and starting actions can control poples effort

Name:Galen Stevens
Age:13
Gender:male
Eyes:hazel
Hair:blondish brown
Height:5'10''
Body Type:fit
Skin Color:tan
God Parent:Hormes
Mortal Parent:n/a
Country of Origin:usa
Pets:Chuckie a cat
Talents:Fecning,alto saxaphone,tennis
Skills:sword fighting archery
Weapon:Eagerness a sword
Flaws:pride,friendship,is kinda cocky,lolyaty,will always stick up for his sister
Powers(must relate to god parent):can cause people to have good effort,can make people become eager can control egagernes,impulse and starting actions




for both of them
Life Before CHB*:Malie and Galen grew up in Denver colorado.They found out who there dad was when the turned 10.They ran away at the age of 12.The found a satyr eho helped them to camp around new york city.They ran into a hydra which Malie and Galen killed.

RP Example*:''Come on Malie hurry up'' ''ok Galen im coming jeez''."where are we going'' "camphalfblood Galen''.I start to jog''hurry up Malie'' ''Im coming''i pass him. ''haha Galen i passed you'' '' not for long Malie''i start to run fast but she picks up more speed.''Come Galen try to chach me''i say to bother him ''look out Malie here i come''i start sprinting and sone i pass her.
Any notes about your characters:adhd[both]dislexia[malie=more than galen]year rounders dont always seem like twins