I think it's pretty much good now..

But I can't help but wonder why only Cynder ever gets along with Deimos kids...

Allen, eye color isnt your area to judge, nor is any physical trait a character might have.

Anyway, i like the name of the satyr, and to what extent can she scare the person? do they see it as a a physical thing? like if they are scared of flames, could they feel the heat from it? and how long do her illusions last?

Its not physical, she can just put their greatest fear into their mind. With flames, she can just put probably flames into their mind, if they a great fear about it. Or if they have another fear, thats more extreme than that, she could choose that one. Whatever one is more stronger.

It can last about 2 minutes.

Erm, I don't mean to double post, but will mine be accepted yet? or do I have to change something else?

Oops sorry dude, yeah it's good.

Approved

Name: Jolie Miranda Cyrus
Age: 13
Gender: Female
Eyes: Dark Green
Hair:Long and Brown
Height:5`5
Body Type:Slim
Skin Color:Tannish
God Parent:Dionysus
Mortal Parent: Mariah Cyrus
Country of Origin: USA
Pets:None
Talents: Good at throwing parties, Singing
Skills:Fighting
Weapon:3ft Bronze Sword
Flaws: Wild, Talks to much, Weird, Awkward,Blurts out stuff sometime, Can be quite annoying.
Powers:None
Life Before CHB:Jolie lived that regular teen life with her Mom. She was also a trouble maker sometimes, blabbing and talking in class, throwing lots of parties at her house. Her mother sometimes got annoyed with her. But one day, at a party she threw at new years, Satyr dude kidnapped her and brought her to Camp Half ABlood. Jolie didn't know what was happening, but the Satyr sounded calm and explained to her about Greek Myths and gods and Camp. She understood and followed him.

RP Example: I walked in home. "MOTHER! YOUR FAVORITE, AND ONLY DAUGHTER IS HOME!" I yell out. She wasn't here. I smirked. PARTY TIMEEE! I threw my backpack onto the couch and grabbed the phone. "OKAY...MY HOUSE. PARTY TIMEE!" I say into the phone then hung up. Party was my life, I even had the best birthday party when I was 5! I jumped around the room squealing, but I still thought about where my Mom was. I shrugged and ran around putting up decorations and finding the music.
Any notes about your characters:

Approved.

Name: Spencer Marie Loften
Age:14
Gender:Female
Eyes:Dark Brown
Hair:Long brown.
Height: 5`5
Body Type:Slim
Skin Color:Olive Toned
God Parent:Hephaestus
Mortal Parent:Carrie Loften
Country of Origin: USA
Pets:None
Talents:Good at Technology, Plays the piano, Art
Skills:Metal Work
Weapon:Sword
Flaws:Shes the kind of girl who hangs out with the guys, Shes sometimes talkative, Chews on her nails at times.
Powers: She can create many things having to do with Metal. (Could that be a power?)

Life Before CHB:Spencer lived a good life with her Mom. But got called on a lot because of her name, and how she always hanged out with the guys, and didn't have that much of friends that are girls, except for this one friend named Chelsea, who died after a car accident. Spencer was a very good artist and always helped her Uncle fixing up cars at his car shop.

RP Example: I leaned against the wall in the alley between a barber shop and a Thrift Store. I had a toothpick in my mouth, and my white raggedy cap onto my head. I was fiddling around with this piece of metal I found in the trashcan a few days ago. I moved my hands around it, as if I was making some kind of sculptor out of it. I don't know how I could do it though, just sorta...comes to me. I sighed and threw the piece of metal at the Wall of the Thrift shop. It made a little 'cling' sound. I sighed, once again, and walked back home.
Any notes about your characters:

Well, depends on how she can make the metal. Can she mold it to any shape with a thought?

Yes, once she thinks of the shape she wants it in, she can quickly mold it into that shape.

How much does it drain her?

It drains her kinda a lot, but not really that much, like after she would think of the shape and mold it, she would feel exhausted after and won't be able to do it again for a hour.

Alright.

Approved.

Name: Hudson Kayla Plattner
Age:14
Gender:Female
Eyes:Dark blue
Hair:Long brown
Height:5`5
Body Type:Skinny
Skin Color:Olive Toned
God Parent:Eirene
Mortal Parent: Jerry Plattner
Country of Origin: USA
Pets:None
Talents:Soccer, Piano, Flute,
Skills:Bringing Peace
Weapon:Bow and Arrow
Flaws:She is sometimes too happy, Sensitive, Talkative at times.
Powers:She can bring peace unto others if they have a fight. It can drain hers whenever she uses it.
Life Before CHB: Hudson lived a good life with her Dad and her two twin stepbrothers. She loved to hang out with her friends, and would always try to work things out with them. If they had a fight, Hudson was calm about it, and tried to work it out with her friends. Her friends didn't know how she did it, but she did. She figured out her immortatality when her friend (WHO WAS ACTUALLY A SATYR O:) told her about it.

RP Example: I stood by my friends. They were arguing, as usual. I sighed. My eyes glowed bright blue. "Guys..why don't we just...talk about it more? Geez, can we get some peace in this?" They both stopped and looked over to me. They then started to talk to each other, discussing what was wrong. I smiled. But in the inside, I was figuring out what just happened.

Any notes about your characters:

Approved.

I want her Alive

Name: Jolie Miranda Cyrus
Age: 13
Gender: Female
Eyes: Dark Green
Hair:Long and Brown
Height:5`5
Body Type:Slim
Skin Color:Tannish
God Parent:Dionysus
Mortal Parent: Mariah Cyrus
Country of Origin: USA
Pets:None
Talents: Good at throwing parties, Singing
Skills:Fighting
Weapon:3ft Bronze Sword
Flaws: Wild, Talks to much, Weird, Awkward,Blurts out stuff sometime, Can be quite annoying.
Powers:None
Life
Before CHB:Jolie lived that regular teen life with her Mom. She was
also a trouble maker sometimes, blabbing and talking in class, throwing
lots of parties at her house. Her mother sometimes got annoyed with
her. But one day, at a party she threw at new years, Satyr dude
kidnapped her and brought her to Camp Half ABlood. Jolie didn't know
what was happening, but the Satyr sounded calm and explained to her
about Greek Myths and gods and Camp. She understood and followed him.

RP
Example: I walked in home. "MOTHER! YOUR FAVORITE, AND ONLY DAUGHTER IS
HOME!" I yell out. She wasn't here. I smirked. PARTY TIMEEE! I threw my
backpack onto the couch and grabbed the phone. "OKAY...MY HOUSE. PARTY
TIMEE!" I say into the phone then hung up. Party was my life, I even
had the best birthday party when I was 5! I jumped around the room
squealing, but I still thought about where my Mom was. I shrugged and
ran around putting up decorations and finding the music.
Any notes about your characters:

No powas for a Dionysus kid?

And you have 5 charries.

Hmm....
I did buy one, and then had 6, then one died (Which was this one) and I thought that I could make another one?

Hmm.... I think you still need to buy another one.

Aw man xD ok. I'll just probably make one of my charries leave.

So sorry for the double post but I made my charrie leave. Is it good now?

No powers? You sure?

Positive. You wouldn't trust her with any powers anyway, she's sometimes clueless :p

Alright.

Approved.

My other one died, I really want this one to come back :p

Name:Olive
Age:16
Eyes:Dark Grey
Hair:Long, dark Brown
Height:5`7
Body
Type:Slim
Skin Color:Olive Toned
God Parent:Hestia
Mortal Parent:Carson
Country of Origin:United States of America
Pets:Helen,a Black Lab.
Talents:Drawing Portraits and A very well Chess
player.
Skills:Very good in Battle. A good plotter/planner for any
occasion or battle plan.
Weapon: A bronze dagger.
Flaws:Is shy,
rarely talks. Always keeps thoughts to herself, unless something bothers
her. Dyslexic.
Powers: She can control fire, but it drains her when she uses it.

Life Before CHB: Olive lived
a typical normal life. With her dad Carson, they both lived in a
apartment in New York. She was very smart, and got all A's, except for
reading, when her dyslexic kicked in. Even though she had a hard time in
reading, she still kept striving toward, not daring to even fail a
class. Carson was proud of her, but when he remarried a woman named
Loreen, things changed in her life. Loreen basically humiliated her.
Calling her stupid for her dyslexic when Carson wasn't home. While Olive
was at school with her friend, he started nervously telling her about
demigods and Greek Myths. Olive knew all about this, but still didn't
get what he was meaning. He then took her hand, and led her to Camp
HalfBlood, explaining on the way, without telling Carson or Loreen about
it.

RP example: I sat down at the table studying, when Loreen
had to butt in. I glared at her, narrowing my dark gray eyes at her. She
rolled her eyes and said, "What are you looking at?"
I shrugged, not
bothering to make a fight. "Something annoying." I thought, holding in
a laugh. She walked over to the kitchen, her high heels making that
annoying clicking noise.
I got out of the dining room as quickly as I
can, before Loreen does anything else annoying before my Dad comes
home.