Well it looks good to me, but unforunately I no longer can approve charrie forms - -"

So I assume the fires can burn you to a crisp, yes?

Yes but there its as hot as a normal orange fire or so google says but cant all fires burn people to a crisp?

If you hold them there long enough, yes.

So what should i edit?

Approved.

Name: Ashlynn Reid.
Age: 15
Gender: female
Eyes: Green
Hair: Dark Brown
Height: 5'5
Body Type: Athletic
Skin Color: Tan.
God Parent: Hera.
Mortal Parent: Mike Reid.
Country of Origin: America
Pets: A small parrot.
Talents: Running and Basketball.
Skills: Sword fighting.
Weapon: sword
Flaws: Is a little to trustworthy and is a perfectionist. Shes a Little OCD.
Powers(must relate to god parent): none for Hera that I can really think of.
Life Before CHB*: She lived with her dad. She was never all that popular but she wasnt hated either. She loved her dad and her stepmom and her stepsister and brother. They were twins. She is smart and exels in school her favorite subjects where math and the cooking class. She liked to listen to good music and had good friends.
RP Example*: I sat at the table with my family looking over a map of the us my dad was sending me clear across the country. I would miss Nevada and the sweet smell of the Desert. I was't angry at him. I know he was sending me there for a good cause. I sighed and hugged my stepsister who was six. "I'll miss you Abby" I whisperd. "Ashy I dont want you to leave" She said. "Ill visit I promise" I said. "Ashy i dont want you to go either" Said Jake. "Dont worry guys all call you in a special way ok" I said. My dad looked at me sadly. "Ash Its for the best" "I know dad" I said.
Any notes about your characters: She loves her family and will miss them very much when at camp. Thats it I think.

Approved.

Ok so im bringing her back from the dead but sence the underworld is locked this is how im going to do it.

Name: Kenzie Brooke.

Age: 15

Gender: Female

Eyes: Blue

Hair: Black dyed natual hair color is dark brown.

Height: 5,5

Body Type: Skinny

Skin Color: Olive

God Parent: Hermes

Mortal Parent: Susan Brooke

Country of Origin: U.S.A

Pets: None

Talents: Plays guitar. Does dance.

Skills: Sword fighting.

Weapon: Sword

Flaws: She is can't resist shoplifting even though she is trying to break the habit. Gets in trouble a lot and is pretty lazy when it comes to work. Kenzie is cocky too. He death has made her upset and want revenge.

Powers: None

Life Before CHB: Kenzie had a problem stealing. First it was at school from which she got expelled and had to go to private school. Then the police started to get envoled she robs stores. She was passionate about dance and loved it. Her mom threatend that if she didn't stop causing problems she would be taken out of dance. She soon stopped stealing andput more effort in to dance. She wanted to get out and see the world but there wasn't enough money for travel. She got to camp safely was at camp for a while then she died now she is coming back hehe.

RP Example: Ok so mabye my mom would understand that this time it was a dare. My friends did it all the time so why shouldn't I, but giving up dance was my whole life. I was ready to move on and get out of highschool and see the world but no theres never enough money. I sighed. I just walked away from the 7-11 and left my friends there. I walked to the park and sat down on the swings my friends would never let me live it down, but I didn't care. I got up and walked home to tell my mom.

Any notes about your characters:Ok despite her problem with stealing she is very loyal to who she loves and won't let them down. Ok sence she died she is really angry but she will get over it soon.

Have you tweaked the form?

Yes i did, but how exactly do you want me to tweak it?

Doesn't matter, as long as it was tweaked a bit.

Approved.

Name: Emy Drake.
Age: 15
Gender: Female.
Eyes: light blue.
Hair: Light brown
Height: 5'2
Body Type: Skinny but good looking
Skin Color: tan
God Parent: Aglaia goddess of Beauty and Adornment
Mortal Parent: Tom Drake
Country of Origin: America.
Pets: None
Talents: She is really pretty and she plays piano.
Skills: Being pretty but she will shoot an arrow if she has too.
Weapon: Bow and arrow.
Flaws: Very very shy. She doesnt like to talk to people much. She also is vain even though she is shy. Oh and if you give her caffine she is like over the top hyper.
Powers(must relate to god parent): None
Life Before CHB*:Well her life was normal besides the fact that she was adored. She hated it though she never like to leave her house but her dad made her go to school thinking that that would help. She kept to her self at school and just about average. She has an older brother who she loves very much and he is about the only person she can talk to besides her mom. She trys to hide herself a lot and doesnt like to let people her that she can play the piano. She will talk to people if she has too.
RP Example*: I walked through the door and looked around. Nobody was here thank god. I pulled my hood down and looked at myself the the mirror. Same as usuall. I sighed and put my hood back on. I bit my lip. I didnt want to leave the bathroom. I was alone her no one trying to talk to me or wanting to be my best friend. I thought about all of the other guys out there. I put my head in my hands and leaned aganist the wall. I need more confidince but there was none. I stood up properly and walked out of the bathroom shadowing my face with my hood.
Any notes about your characters:nopers

Approved.

Name:April May June.
Age:16
Gender:Female
Eyes:change colors depending on her mood (if i can do that if not then they are blue)
Hair:strawberry blonde
Height:5'5
Body Type:skinny but heathy
Skin Color:very tan
God Parent:Persephone
Mortal Parent: Steve June
Country of Origin: U.S.A but she has family in europe.
Pets: none yet...
Talents: planting flowers, she also is does gymnastics and plays the guitar a little
Skills: Uhh fighting isnt her thing but she will fight with a dagger if she has too.
Weapon**: Celestial Bronze dagger
Flaws:She is not the brightest person around she also thinks she is cooler than a lot of people, vain but not to much, she also thinks that is all cool cuz she has family back in england.
Powers(must relate to god parent): Yep so she can grow flowers most helpful power on the planet ever i know but she can only grow like say your in a five foot by five square of grass dirt whatever she could fill that space full of flowers but she can also grow single flowers. The area of flowers she can only do it once a day and single flowers she can do at least five times a day. the flowers live the normal times flowers do and ya if she goes past the limit with out sleep or rest she passes out dies if it drains her enough.
Life Before CHB*:April lived in the U.K for like three years of her life when she studied abrod there. So she has a slight Accent. She then moved back to the Us and went to normal school and pretty much had a normal life tell she had an accident where she covered the gym floor with flowers. After that day her dad told her that she was halfblood and that her mommy was good at growing flowers. She has no other family besides her dads side of the family and they all live in Europe so he is all she has. Yep so she gets sent to camp anyways even though she doesnt want to go.
RP Example*:I skipped around the park really bored. I sighed ahhh the flowers were following me. I look around oh the park was empty that was good. I sat down and the flowers sprouted around me. I sighed. I didnt want to leave my dad all alone maybe he could go to Europe or something while i was gone. I bit my lip i was gunna miss him lots. I didnt want to go yet but i had no choice. I got up and left the empty park.
Any notes about your characters:

approved

Name: Hanna Marin
Age: 15
Gender: Female
Eyes: Green
Hair: Blonde
Height:5'5
Body Type:super skinny
Skin Color:white but tan
God Parent:Hermes
Mortal Parent: Her mom who is going out with the cop
Country of Origin:USA
Pets:none that i know of.
Talents:Stealing things highjacking cars. Being popular
Skills: meh none really but i guess she can handle a sword
Weapon**: Celestial Bronze sword
Flaws: Has issuses with weight and being not popular she is also haunted by her past. Dun Dun Dun She is pretty vain too.
Powers(must relate to god parent):Meh not much unless stealing is a power.
Life Before CHB*:Hanna lived in a nice area that was surrounded by scandal her best friend Ali died mistriously. She has four friends Spencer Aria Emily a Mona sadly mona died but she was a stalker anyways so who cares. She lived with her mom who was a single business women untill the freaky cop guy came along he also was the cop investigating ali's death. She had a boyfriend but he err wouldnt give her what she wanted so she stole his car. She later stole a car to get to camp.
RP Example*:I walked in the kitchen. I opened the fridge and looked for a low fat snack. I sigh and take out the icecream. I go and watch tv. I sigh another story about Ali gods i missed her. I look at my phone a message from unknow. I open it. It says. Hate to break it to you hon. Heft hanna never gets the guy. I slam the phone shut and walk to the kitchen ant throw away the icecream. This was seriously freaky...
Any notes about your characters:Hehe PLL

Did you buy a slot?

Err no but dont you keep the slot if you had on before or do you have to buy a new one?

You keep the slot you had before, I think.

Approved.

Name:Cailey Anderson
Age:14
Gender:Female.
Eyes: Purple not like bright purple but darkish
Hair: Jet black
Height: 5'6
Body Type: Normal not to fat but not to skinny.
Skin Color: Bright brillant white almost like a sheet well not that white but you get the idea.
God Parent:Hel
Mortal Parent:Connor Anderson
Country of Origin: Usa
Pets: A ghost of a dead dog named Shadow.
Talents:Making people wet themseves out of pure fear. She runs a lot and likes to swim.
Skills: Sword fighting spear throwing sometimes.
Weapon**:Cresent moon blade of clestial bronze
Flaws:Very untalkitve, likes to be alone but likes to scare people. Doesnt trust people.
Powers(must relate to god parent):She can summon ghosts except for her dog which she has all the time. She summons skelotons also but she can only do this ten times a day ten skelotons/ghosts at a time. She can also shadow travel places but it must be in a 2500 yards radius. If she exceeds her power she passes out/dies if its to much.
Life Before CHB*:Cailey was abused by her father. She was all she had of family and she put up with him for most of her life. She tried to go to school but found that she did very poor there she got in trouble a lot for scaring other children and being a bully. She would offen go home to her fathers constant complaining and abuse. She decided to run away to a place where she could be safe a place that her dad never wanted her to go to because he claimed he needed her in his life which wasnt true. She ran to camp halfblood.
RP Example*:I touched the bruise on my arm ouch it hurt a lot. I looked around my room which wasnt much of a room just a closet full of dads crap and a rag pile that was my bed. I sigh and spy a backpack. I take it off the hook and empty the crap out of it. I put my stuff in it. My notebook some of my clothes and whatever else i wanted. I was leaving this place i was sick of my dad always beating me and whining about how hard he worked for a person as lazy as me. I look out of the aparment window and climb out on to the fire escape. I climb down walk away from my own personal hell.
Any notes about your characters:hehe scaring people is fun

You have a free slot, right?

Yes i think so but i asked tink for it so i dunno if she charged me or not but uhh ya you can take away the drachmas if you want.

I'll ask Tink...

Kay but isnt she on vacation?