Okay so i started this after i read The last Olympian and i found it recently and i start adding to it so please enjoy and offer advice thanks
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RedemptionChapter 1 - Part 1I stood there in my white chiten. I looked at Percy through my gold eyes. I was worried he did not trust me.
“Percy... please... It’s the prophecy...” I said reaching out for the dagger.
He looked at me with distrust, he turned and looked at Annabeth nodded and started at me scared. Percy slowly handed me the dagger,
“Thank you and I’m sorry for everything.” I said as I took my armor off. I plunged the dagger into my Achilles spot and my life flashed through my eyes. A tear feel from my eye to the floor. I collapsed onto the floor and that’s when everything turned black.
My eyes opened suddenly and I was in the underworld, I remember it from when I took my plunge into the river Styx... I was the next one up for judgment and I was scared for what they would do to me. I looked up at the judges and “holy Hades” I whispered in awe... Hades was going to judge me “I’m screwed” I whimpered
“Ah Luke Castellan” said Hades
“Hades it’s a pleasure to see you” I say bowing
“Sucking up will get you nowhere Luke” Hades said to me, He looked at me directly with his eyes a flame red; a mischievous smile came across his face.
“What is your fate for my Hades?” I say quietly
A Blinding flash and Hermes appeared. “Dad?” he sent me a warning glance then a slight smile and returned talking to Hades.
“Ah so your father wishes that you get a second chance... So you will have that chance but you must bare the mark of shame” said Hades
“So be it… I will redeem myself” I said fiercely
Hades waved his hand over me and black wings spread over my back “These are the wings of redeeming, they are completely black since you have betrayed everyone but when you complete your task and redeem yourself and your family they will turn white and disappear” he looks at me and said “Your father also wishes that you remain with all your memories in order for you to understand why you have a second chance, do not waste this chance because next time I see you I wont be so kind” he said to me angrily then disappeared leaving just me and my father to speak.
“Dad!” I yelled and I ran towards him
“Luke I can’t talk long but take this sword” he handed me a sword and I took it
“It’s infused with my essence so you can kill titans with it, use it well and redeem us” He hugged me then disappeared. I looked at the sword, Redemption was carved into it, I knew what I had to do I ran till I reached the river Lethe and I jumped in becoming reborn.
I woke up remembering everything from my past but one new thing stuck in my head “Skylar Dark” that was my new name. I looked around my random hotel room. I went to the shower turned it on and sent a quick iris message.
Chapter 1 - Part 2I was tired of hiding and cowering from it. I woke with a start and grabbed the only thing I knew could save me and I ran. I ran until the earth sank and the darkness set. As I got closer my feet began to sink as its kingdom grew closer. The veins in the temple pulsed like a heart pumps out blood. She was alive and I was the only one that could stop her but that thought showed one of my flaws. I had to get off the ground; I spread my large black wings and pushed off the ground with all my might. My black wings propelled me forward. As I flew to the center, I knew my assumptions were wrong, I did need help but now it was too late to turn back. I had just to hope Percy was on his way. I felt her strength as she entered the room.
"Ah Skylar Dark, oh should I call you Luke Castellan?" She laughed "I have been watching you...”
She was covered in a long dark green dress that looked like mold...
"Gaea, I have come to redeem myself and prove that I am not your son's puppet" I said boldly, she looked at me and laughed
"Kronos? Kronos was a fool! I made him come back to destroy the gods and I told him to capture percy and consume him but he chose to consume your fragile and weak body, its a shame...”
I stopped her in mid-sentence and said "I could kill Kronos, bring him back like you brought everyone else back and ill show you who is weak"
She stared at me with her black eyes and motioned with one hand, There a doorway opened in the wall and Kronos dressed in his Black chiton and his scythe by his side. "Prove me that you are worth a second chance Kronos, kill the boy...” she said blandly then rose and sat at her moldy throne...
I fly to the center of the temple and take out my sword Redeemer "Ready to die again Kronos?"
"Ah Luke my friend, I hope you know it takes both god and demi-god to defeat a Titan and last time I checked their is no god in this room" Kronos said grinning
"You see this sword?" I said twirling Redeemer, A Celestial Bronze sword 3 feet long with a black stripe down the sword "Its infused with my fathers essence, he gave it to me saying that it was time to redeem myself and your death will be my first step to redemption" ........
Chapter 2He was cheating. Mommies little boy had help while I was all on my own. I just wish my back up was here by now. I was slowly losing my cool. As my feet sank slowly, Kronos walked slowly towards me twirling his scythe.
“I always knew you were weak Luke,” he said smirking.
“I am not weak…” I said struggling to get my feet out of the sand, “You’re just a cheater Kronos.” I looked around trying to find a way to get out of the quick sand.
“I am not cheating Lucas! You are just too weak and you give up easily” He said to me. I looked around the room. I suddenly saw a low vine 1 foot away from me; I spread my wings and tried to fly upwards towards it. After 10 minutes I finally caught the vine and I pulled myself up. I climbed out of the pit of quicksand looking around for my sword redeemer. It was stuck in the ground 15 feet away. My path to redeemer was blocked by Kronos. Kronos swiped his black scythe, backbiter, at my legs. I jumped and landed on the sharp edge of the scythe. The edge dug into my boots cutting my feet. I kicked him in the chest and he flew back 2 feet. I ran past him but right as I passed him, I felt an icy cold hand grasp my ankle. I feel and skinned my knees silently cursing. He quickly stood up and dug his scythe into the back of my calf, ripping it deeper into my skin. My leg began to bleed like crazy.
I quickly turned around kicking him in the face causing him to stumble backwards. I ran at my sword. I grabbed it and quickly turned towards Kronos. Kronos spit blood at the ground, golden blood. Ichor was streaming from his lips. I charged at him boldly.
“This is a good show” Gaea said laughing. I was angry that she found entertainment from our battle. I ran at Kronos and slashed at his chest but Kronos was quicker. He blocked my attack and swiped at my legs making me fall. He laughed and slashed at my chest, cutting open my armor. I blocked his second strike and stabbed at his chest hitting his armor making a quarter size hole in his armor. Ichor began to pour from the hole in his armor. Kronos’ white face began to grow more and more pale as he lost more Ichor. He was growing tired and slower. I wished Percy was here by now but like always he wasn’t. I could not hold on for that much longer. I heard a far away banging but I did not want to get my hopes up.
“Kronos admit it, I am stronger than you and I will defeat you” I said panting slowly,
“Lucas I know you can not hold much longer and these scratches,” He said spitting out more golden blood, “is nothing that could really fully stop me” he said back to me.
Suddenly, a stream of water hit Kronos in the face. He stumbled back surprised, then another jet of water to his body this time much longer. Kronos falls back and looks worried behind me; I turn around and see a kid in white armor walking towards me smiling.
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