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Jayson

 Number of posts: 23 Age: 12 Registration date: 2011-12-02
 | Subject: Jayson's characters 12/2/2011, 11:53 pm | |
| Name: Alex Wong. Age: 15. Gender: Female. Eyes: Blue. Hair: black. Hight: 6'. Body type: Slim. Skin color: Olive. God parent: Hecate Mortal parent: Lee Wong. Country of origin: U.S. Pets: None. Talents: Deaseption, archery. Powers: Can move small and medium size things without touching them. Weapons: Two celestial bronze Daggers. Flaws: Slow to trust. Quick to anger, won't hurt animals. Life befor CHB: Lived With father in New York and got kicked out of every school she went to ran away from home at age of 15 and found her way to CHB.Alot of monster attacks filled the venture waring her down. The hole way thinking about warm summers at the beach, watermelon, picknicks with her mom and other happy things. almost there she faced one last monster, a hellhound, she fought bravely, and was almost bested when she ran past camp boundaries and blacked out. Rp I.e.: "Get up,Alex!" dad said "You will be late for your new school!" alex gets out of bed and brushes hair, gets changed, etc "Coming dad!" alex said as she walked out of her room. Whale eating breakfast alex asked "who was my mom?" dad looked down sadind and said nothing. In the school bus was packed full of new kids. looking out alex was tinking of a better life when her thoughts wher interrupted by the squealing of breaks and opining of doors. Once in the class room she found it hard to concentrate with all the chatter and fell asleep.
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|  | | Ace of Spades Experienced Member

 Number of posts: 8691 Age: 17 Registration date: 2010-06-13
 | Subject: Re: Jayson's characters 12/3/2011, 3:18 am | |
| You can not have a Big Three kid, sorry. Please change the god parent.
You also need at least three flaws.
Your Life Before CHB must be at least five sentences long.
You must include an RP (Roleplay) Example which has to be at least five sentences long, as well.
You can adjust your text by clicking the 'Edit' button located at the top right hand corner of your post. (: |
|  | | Jayson

 Number of posts: 23 Age: 12 Registration date: 2011-12-02
 | Subject: Re: Jayson's characters 12/3/2011, 11:51 am | |
| I don't understand Rp I.e. |
|  | | Skyler Experienced Member

 Number of posts: 6030 Age: 14 Registration date: 2010-07-17
 | Subject: Re: Jayson's characters 12/3/2011, 12:20 pm | |
| Write it as if your charrie is telling the story Ex; Lola ran into her house looking for her bag" |
|  | | Jayson

 Number of posts: 23 Age: 12 Registration date: 2011-12-02
 | Subject: Re: Jayson's characters 12/3/2011, 2:01 pm | |
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|  | | Loki Elite Staff Member

 Number of posts: 19861 Age: 16 Registration date: 2010-06-05
 | Subject: Re: Jayson's characters 12/3/2011, 2:02 pm | |
| I see you skipped 'Powers' on your form, does that mean she doesn't have any? ________________ Lakoda, daughter of Loki-15Warren, son of Aphrodite-18-AustralianMalia, daughter of Cocytus-16Verity, daughter of Nekhbet-15Vanessa, daughter of Serqet-17Cassandra, daughter of Iaso-17Rose, daughter of Demeter-16Anders, son of Ares-17Kyler, daughter of Morpheus-16Devan, daughter of Aegaeus-16-ItalianAlec, son of Hecate-16Topher, son of Notus-17-BritishGaebrie, daughter of Eirene-16Ashton, daughter of Hecate-16Laycie, daughter of Eros-16-French
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|  | | Jayson

 Number of posts: 23 Age: 12 Registration date: 2011-12-02
 | Subject: Re: Jayson's characters 12/3/2011, 2:09 pm | |
| I must of forgot she does have them though. |
|  | | Jayson

 Number of posts: 23 Age: 12 Registration date: 2011-12-02
 | Subject: Re: Jayson's characters 12/3/2011, 2:52 pm | |
| This is my first character so I would most like it approved |
|  | | Loki Elite Staff Member

 Number of posts: 19861 Age: 16 Registration date: 2010-06-05
 | Subject: Re: Jayson's characters 12/3/2011, 3:26 pm | |
| Please put her powers in her form. And yes, we know you'd like it approved, you don't need to double post to tell us. ________________ Lakoda, daughter of Loki-15Warren, son of Aphrodite-18-AustralianMalia, daughter of Cocytus-16Verity, daughter of Nekhbet-15Vanessa, daughter of Serqet-17Cassandra, daughter of Iaso-17Rose, daughter of Demeter-16Anders, son of Ares-17Kyler, daughter of Morpheus-16Devan, daughter of Aegaeus-16-ItalianAlec, son of Hecate-16Topher, son of Notus-17-BritishGaebrie, daughter of Eirene-16Ashton, daughter of Hecate-16Laycie, daughter of Eros-16-French
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|  | | Jayson

 Number of posts: 23 Age: 12 Registration date: 2011-12-02
 | Subject: Re: Jayson's characters 12/3/2011, 3:37 pm | |
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|  | | Loki Elite Staff Member

 Number of posts: 19861 Age: 16 Registration date: 2010-06-05
 | Subject: Re: Jayson's characters 12/3/2011, 3:41 pm | |
| Describe what 'minor magic' means. What can she do? ________________ Lakoda, daughter of Loki-15Warren, son of Aphrodite-18-AustralianMalia, daughter of Cocytus-16Verity, daughter of Nekhbet-15Vanessa, daughter of Serqet-17Cassandra, daughter of Iaso-17Rose, daughter of Demeter-16Anders, son of Ares-17Kyler, daughter of Morpheus-16Devan, daughter of Aegaeus-16-ItalianAlec, son of Hecate-16Topher, son of Notus-17-BritishGaebrie, daughter of Eirene-16Ashton, daughter of Hecate-16Laycie, daughter of Eros-16-French
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|  | | Jayson

 Number of posts: 23 Age: 12 Registration date: 2011-12-02
 | Subject: Re: Jayson's characters 12/3/2011, 3:48 pm | |
| It means nothing now I fixed it. |
|  | | Loki Elite Staff Member

 Number of posts: 19861 Age: 16 Registration date: 2010-06-05
 | Subject: Re: Jayson's characters 12/3/2011, 3:55 pm | |
| How big would the medium sized thing be? ________________ Lakoda, daughter of Loki-15Warren, son of Aphrodite-18-AustralianMalia, daughter of Cocytus-16Verity, daughter of Nekhbet-15Vanessa, daughter of Serqet-17Cassandra, daughter of Iaso-17Rose, daughter of Demeter-16Anders, son of Ares-17Kyler, daughter of Morpheus-16Devan, daughter of Aegaeus-16-ItalianAlec, son of Hecate-16Topher, son of Notus-17-BritishGaebrie, daughter of Eirene-16Ashton, daughter of Hecate-16Laycie, daughter of Eros-16-French
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|  | | Jayson

 Number of posts: 23 Age: 12 Registration date: 2011-12-02
 | Subject: Re: Jayson's characters 12/3/2011, 4:18 pm | |
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|  | | Loki Elite Staff Member

 Number of posts: 19861 Age: 16 Registration date: 2010-06-05
 | Subject: Re: Jayson's characters 12/3/2011, 5:13 pm | |
| How many times a day can he move things? ________________ Lakoda, daughter of Loki-15Warren, son of Aphrodite-18-AustralianMalia, daughter of Cocytus-16Verity, daughter of Nekhbet-15Vanessa, daughter of Serqet-17Cassandra, daughter of Iaso-17Rose, daughter of Demeter-16Anders, son of Ares-17Kyler, daughter of Morpheus-16Devan, daughter of Aegaeus-16-ItalianAlec, son of Hecate-16Topher, son of Notus-17-BritishGaebrie, daughter of Eirene-16Ashton, daughter of Hecate-16Laycie, daughter of Eros-16-French
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|  | | Kendall Administrator

 Number of posts: 33975 Age: 2010 Registration date: 2008-09-13
 | Subject: Re: Jayson's characters 12/3/2011, 5:27 pm | |
| I don't think we actually let Bia kids use... telekinesis. The Force. Whatever. If you want to do telekinesis try Hecate. ________________ Kendall, Daughter of Ares Rosalie, Daughter of Aphrodite Claire, Daughter of Hecate Archer, Son of Hecate Stella, Daughter of Ouranos Meagan, Daughter of Gaea Aidan, Daughter of Pyriphlegethon Tempest, Daughter of Aeolus Nelly, Daughter of Apollo Benji, Daughter of Kuk Deja, Daughter of Odyne Mason, Son of Hermes Waldo, Son of Hermes Terra, Daughter of Tiki Lucy, Daughter of Somnus; First Cohort Dorian, Legacy of Mefitis; Third Cohort
You power-play, I god-mod. (Switching "god-mod" with "power-play" works too.)
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|  | | Jayson

 Number of posts: 23 Age: 12 Registration date: 2011-12-02
 | Subject: Re: Jayson's characters 12/3/2011, 5:40 pm | |
| Ok ( about 7 if that's not Alot) |
|  | | Kendall Administrator

 Number of posts: 33975 Age: 2010 Registration date: 2008-09-13
 | Subject: Re: Jayson's characters 12/3/2011, 6:03 pm | |
| How far can she move them? ________________ Kendall, Daughter of Ares Rosalie, Daughter of Aphrodite Claire, Daughter of Hecate Archer, Son of Hecate Stella, Daughter of Ouranos Meagan, Daughter of Gaea Aidan, Daughter of Pyriphlegethon Tempest, Daughter of Aeolus Nelly, Daughter of Apollo Benji, Daughter of Kuk Deja, Daughter of Odyne Mason, Son of Hermes Waldo, Son of Hermes Terra, Daughter of Tiki Lucy, Daughter of Somnus; First Cohort Dorian, Legacy of Mefitis; Third Cohort
You power-play, I god-mod. (Switching "god-mod" with "power-play" works too.)
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|  | | Jayson

 Number of posts: 23 Age: 12 Registration date: 2011-12-02
 | Subject: Re: Jayson's characters 12/3/2011, 6:13 pm | |
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|  | | Kendall Administrator

 Number of posts: 33975 Age: 2010 Registration date: 2008-09-13
 | Subject: Re: Jayson's characters 12/3/2011, 6:16 pm | |
| Approved. ________________ Kendall, Daughter of Ares Rosalie, Daughter of Aphrodite Claire, Daughter of Hecate Archer, Son of Hecate Stella, Daughter of Ouranos Meagan, Daughter of Gaea Aidan, Daughter of Pyriphlegethon Tempest, Daughter of Aeolus Nelly, Daughter of Apollo Benji, Daughter of Kuk Deja, Daughter of Odyne Mason, Son of Hermes Waldo, Son of Hermes Terra, Daughter of Tiki Lucy, Daughter of Somnus; First Cohort Dorian, Legacy of Mefitis; Third Cohort
You power-play, I god-mod. (Switching "god-mod" with "power-play" works too.)
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