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Charlie Scene Junior Member

 Number of posts: 258 Age: 16 Registration date: 2011-10-21
 | Subject: charather 10/31/2011, 11:36 am | |
| Name:chase Age:15 Gender:male Eyes:sea green Hair:dark brown Height:6ft Body Type; skinny ripped Skin Color:lighttan Greek God Parent: ares Mortal Parent:piper Country of Origin:us Pets:2 dogs Talents:fighting Weapon**:sword Flaws:likes to show off,mouths off, likes to threaten Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): Life Before CHB*:runaway. mom died when he was six. he left every hoe he was put in. made he his life as a gang member. he became leader then he wasz found RP Example*:he was chase by monsters his whole life. he found the 2 dogs half dead. there names are fred and hades. they made him powerful.he raised them and then the left
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|  | | Loki Elite Staff Member

 Number of posts: 19861 Age: 16 Registration date: 2010-06-05
 | Subject: Re: hadesson102's characters 10/31/2011, 3:33 pm | |
| Summoning the dead isn't an allowed power for Ares. Your Life Before CHB has to be 5 sentences. Your RP example is like telling a story in your character's point of view. (Example: I love to dance, and I practice every moment I can.) The RP example also needs to be 5 sentences. ________________ Lakoda, daughter of Loki-15Warren, son of Aphrodite-18-AustralianMalia, daughter of Cocytus-16Verity, daughter of Nekhbet-15Vanessa, daughter of Serqet-17Cassandra, daughter of Iaso-17Rose, daughter of Demeter-16Anders, son of Ares-17Kyler, daughter of Morpheus-16Devan, daughter of Aegaeus-16-ItalianAlec, son of Hecate-16Topher, son of Notus-17-BritishGaebrie, daughter of Eirene-16Ashton, daughter of Hecate-16Laycie, daughter of Eros-16-French
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|  | | Kendall Administrator

 Number of posts: 33975 Age: 2010 Registration date: 2008-09-13
 | Subject: Re: hadesson102's characters 11/4/2011, 5:12 pm | |
| Is his sword Celestial bronze?
Your RP Example is supposed to tell a story from your character's point of view. Your current one sounds more like something for Life Before CHB. ________________ Kendall, Daughter of Ares Rosalie, Daughter of Aphrodite Claire, Daughter of Hecate Archer, Son of Hecate Stella, Daughter of Ouranos Meagan, Daughter of Gaea Aidan, Daughter of Pyriphlegethon Tempest, Daughter of Aeolus Nelly, Daughter of Apollo Benji, Daughter of Kuk Deja, Daughter of Odyne Mason, Son of Hermes Waldo, Son of Hermes Terra, Daughter of Tiki Lucy, Daughter of Somnus; First Cohort Dorian, Legacy of Mefitis; Third Cohort
You power-play, I god-mod. (Switching "god-mod" with "power-play" works too.)
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|  | | Charlie Scene Junior Member

 Number of posts: 258 Age: 16 Registration date: 2011-10-21
 | Subject: Re: hadesson102's characters 11/8/2011, 11:58 am | |
| Name:chase Age:15 Gender:male Eyes:sea green Hair:dark brown Height:6ft Body Type; skinny ripped Skin Color:lighttan Greek God Parent: ares Mortal Parent:piper Country of Origin:us Pets:2 dogs Talents:fighting Weapon**:sword Flaws:likes to show off,mouths off, likes to threaten Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): Life Before CHB*:runaway. mom died when he was six. he left every hoe he was put in. made he his life as a gang member. he became leader then he wasz found RP Example*i love to fight and play with my fammily all the time. i love to play the my dogs. i love to make funn of people.i love to talk to my dad. il ove to date hot girls |
|  | | Kendall Administrator

 Number of posts: 33975 Age: 2010 Registration date: 2008-09-13
 | Subject: Re: hadesson102's characters 11/9/2011, 2:51 pm | |
| RP Example is supposed to be telling a STORY. Like: | Quote: | | I kicked the ball. It rolled into the grass. Grandpa tripped over it. |
________________ Kendall, Daughter of Ares Rosalie, Daughter of Aphrodite Claire, Daughter of Hecate Archer, Son of Hecate Stella, Daughter of Ouranos Meagan, Daughter of Gaea Aidan, Daughter of Pyriphlegethon Tempest, Daughter of Aeolus Nelly, Daughter of Apollo Benji, Daughter of Kuk Deja, Daughter of Odyne Mason, Son of Hermes Waldo, Son of Hermes Terra, Daughter of Tiki Lucy, Daughter of Somnus; First Cohort Dorian, Legacy of Mefitis; Third Cohort
You power-play, I god-mod. (Switching "god-mod" with "power-play" works too.)
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|  | | Charlie Scene Junior Member

 Number of posts: 258 Age: 16 Registration date: 2011-10-21
 | Subject: Re: hadesson102's characters 11/10/2011, 11:50 am | |
| Name:chase Age:15 Gender:male Eyes:sea green Hair:dark brown Height:6ft Body Type; skinny ripped Skin Color:lighttan Greek God Parent: ares Mortal Parent:piper Country of Origin:us Pets:2 dogs Talents:fighting Weapon**:sword Flaws:likes to show off,mouths off, likes to threaten Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): Life Before CHB*:runaway. mom died when he was six. he left every hoe he was put in. made he his life as a gang member. he became leader then he wasz found RP Example*well one day i was fighting. i was fighting my brothers when i chpoed off his finger. blood went every where i was like cool. then we had to find his finger. we nver did
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|  | | Kendall Administrator

 Number of posts: 33975 Age: 2010 Registration date: 2008-09-13
 | Subject: Re: hadesson102's characters 11/10/2011, 12:11 pm | |
| His sword is Celestial bronze, right? (You don't need to repost the form; just answer me in a post.)
I think liking to threaten people and mouthing off can be the same thing, so, add another flaw. ________________ Kendall, Daughter of Ares Rosalie, Daughter of Aphrodite Claire, Daughter of Hecate Archer, Son of Hecate Stella, Daughter of Ouranos Meagan, Daughter of Gaea Aidan, Daughter of Pyriphlegethon Tempest, Daughter of Aeolus Nelly, Daughter of Apollo Benji, Daughter of Kuk Deja, Daughter of Odyne Mason, Son of Hermes Waldo, Son of Hermes Terra, Daughter of Tiki Lucy, Daughter of Somnus; First Cohort Dorian, Legacy of Mefitis; Third Cohort
You power-play, I god-mod. (Switching "god-mod" with "power-play" works too.)
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|  | | Charlie Scene Junior Member

 Number of posts: 258 Age: 16 Registration date: 2011-10-21
 | Subject: Re: hadesson102's characters 11/11/2011, 11:40 am | |
| ok yah its celestial bronze |
|  | | Kendall Administrator

 Number of posts: 33975 Age: 2010 Registration date: 2008-09-13
 | Subject: Re: hadesson102's characters 11/11/2011, 1:20 pm | |
| Did you add another flaw? ________________ Kendall, Daughter of Ares Rosalie, Daughter of Aphrodite Claire, Daughter of Hecate Archer, Son of Hecate Stella, Daughter of Ouranos Meagan, Daughter of Gaea Aidan, Daughter of Pyriphlegethon Tempest, Daughter of Aeolus Nelly, Daughter of Apollo Benji, Daughter of Kuk Deja, Daughter of Odyne Mason, Son of Hermes Waldo, Son of Hermes Terra, Daughter of Tiki Lucy, Daughter of Somnus; First Cohort Dorian, Legacy of Mefitis; Third Cohort
You power-play, I god-mod. (Switching "god-mod" with "power-play" works too.)
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|  | | Charlie Scene Junior Member

 Number of posts: 258 Age: 16 Registration date: 2011-10-21
 | Subject: Re: hadesson102's characters 11/14/2011, 11:19 am | |
| he try's to act non human |
|  | | Kendall Administrator

 Number of posts: 33975 Age: 2010 Registration date: 2008-09-13
 | Subject: Re: hadesson102's characters 11/14/2011, 4:40 pm | |
| ... And how non-human is he trying to act? ________________ Kendall, Daughter of Ares Rosalie, Daughter of Aphrodite Claire, Daughter of Hecate Archer, Son of Hecate Stella, Daughter of Ouranos Meagan, Daughter of Gaea Aidan, Daughter of Pyriphlegethon Tempest, Daughter of Aeolus Nelly, Daughter of Apollo Benji, Daughter of Kuk Deja, Daughter of Odyne Mason, Son of Hermes Waldo, Son of Hermes Terra, Daughter of Tiki Lucy, Daughter of Somnus; First Cohort Dorian, Legacy of Mefitis; Third Cohort
You power-play, I god-mod. (Switching "god-mod" with "power-play" works too.)
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|  | | Charlie Scene Junior Member

 Number of posts: 258 Age: 16 Registration date: 2011-10-21
 | Subject: Re: hadesson102's characters 11/15/2011, 11:14 am | |
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|  | | Elleon Elite Staff Member

 Number of posts: 19417 Age: 16 Registration date: 2010-03-13
 | Subject: Re: hadesson102's characters 11/16/2011, 11:46 pm | |
| The Life before CHB should be 5 full sentences. We do expect some good grammar on this site. ________________ Jazmine/Hades Veshtov/Hecate Marcus/Apollo Ellie/Aceso Toph/Geb Zayden/Anubis Antony/Minerva(3rd) Kelli/Chione Jacqueline/Hecate Carter/unclaimed Gabriel/Adikia
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|  | | Charlie Scene Junior Member

 Number of posts: 258 Age: 16 Registration date: 2011-10-21
 | Subject: Re: hadesson102's characters 11/17/2011, 11:18 am | |
| Life Before CHB*: He ran away alot. Also when he was a kid he did alot of bad things . His mom died when he was six, she had been the only person he could count on. He left every foster home he was put in because he didnt fit in any of the houses. He made his life as a gang member for a while. then one day at school he was attacked by a monster and the school styr took him to camp halfblood. |
|  | | Kendall Administrator

 Number of posts: 33975 Age: 2010 Registration date: 2008-09-13
 | Subject: Re: hadesson102's characters 11/19/2011, 12:12 pm | |
| Approved. ________________ Kendall, Daughter of Ares Rosalie, Daughter of Aphrodite Claire, Daughter of Hecate Archer, Son of Hecate Stella, Daughter of Ouranos Meagan, Daughter of Gaea Aidan, Daughter of Pyriphlegethon Tempest, Daughter of Aeolus Nelly, Daughter of Apollo Benji, Daughter of Kuk Deja, Daughter of Odyne Mason, Son of Hermes Waldo, Son of Hermes Terra, Daughter of Tiki Lucy, Daughter of Somnus; First Cohort Dorian, Legacy of Mefitis; Third Cohort
You power-play, I god-mod. (Switching "god-mod" with "power-play" works too.)
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|  | | Charlie Scene Junior Member

 Number of posts: 258 Age: 16 Registration date: 2011-10-21
 | Subject: hadesson102's characters 12/8/2011, 3:05 pm | |
| Name:Weston Foster Age: 18 Gender: male Eyes: grey Hair: black Height: 5.8 Body Type: muscular, and thin Skin Color: light tan God Parent: Hephastus Mortal Parent: Olive Country of Origin: Mexico Pets: none Talents: mechanics, soccer Weapon**: cb sword Flaws: hates people, doesn't trust people, and is bi polar Powers(must relate to god parent; optional): none Life Before CHB*: He grew up with his mom in a two bedroom apartment. When he was sixteen he started working in a car shop. It took up most of this time so he didn't have many friends. He dropped out of highschool. When he was 18 he got attacked by a monster, disguised as a jamiacan monkey, named bob marley. After that he went to Camphalfblood. RP Example*: I ran through the door to my house and slammed the door shut, 'Jeez am i the only one in the world who gets stalked by monkeys?' I thought to myself, opening the refridgerater and pulling out a coke. I heard the door open and shut again. I sighed, I forgot to lock the door. Next thing i knew I was looking at a monkey, who was changing into a monster. 'Here we go again.' I thought while pulling my sword out of my bag. Any notes about your characters: |
|  | | Loki Elite Staff Member

 Number of posts: 19861 Age: 16 Registration date: 2010-06-05
 | Subject: Re: hadesson102's characters 12/14/2011, 10:39 am | |
| Approved. ________________ Lakoda, daughter of Loki-15Warren, son of Aphrodite-18-AustralianMalia, daughter of Cocytus-16Verity, daughter of Nekhbet-15Vanessa, daughter of Serqet-17Cassandra, daughter of Iaso-17Rose, daughter of Demeter-16Anders, son of Ares-17Kyler, daughter of Morpheus-16Devan, daughter of Aegaeus-16-ItalianAlec, son of Hecate-16Topher, son of Notus-17-BritishGaebrie, daughter of Eirene-16Ashton, daughter of Hecate-16Laycie, daughter of Eros-16-French
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